Entries in the Heavens: Starting from Hengshan Sword Immortal

Just don't let the troubled times happen. The time when you are proud of the world is not in troubled times.

How should I put it, this setting is not very good. Take nuns into a monk's temple and wait to be killed by crickets. If a nunnery accepts a man, the entire nunnery will become unclean in other people's mouths.

Chapter 2: I am alone in the wild providing disaster relief. No one is fighting for the hungry people to maintain order. Is this describing a scene in a dream? Let alone ancient times, it is unlikely now

When I first saw the title of the book, I thought it was Hengshan Sword Immortal.

The biggest problem with this book is that a man standing on the ceiling is supposed to be a Taoist with a single-minded pursuit of Taoism as his core. He can follow his heart in various worlds, add variables to stir up the plot, and at the same time realize Taoism and practice. As a result, a lot of pen and ink was spent on describing some women, and the characters were completely ruined, and they had to be carried with them wherever they went. The position that was supposed to be formed by the strong would attract the weak, and then the protagonist would take the initiative to hook up with her. . ? Isn't this nonsense? It can be said that if you delete those meaningless plots related to women, and mention in one or two sentences why they gathered around the protagonist for some reason, such as feeding demons with your body, or for various purposes, etc., And finally just take advantage of the situation and put it aside, focus on the protagonist's pursuit of enlightenment in the world of heaven, and stir up the world with casual actions. The results of this book should be much better, and it will not be a level 1 author with almost 2 million words.

How dare one go to give out porridge! Seeing someone giving porridge, the hungry people didn't dare to get it! It's time to get the porridge, and it's in good order! ! ! ! ! The author didn't know how to write. He couldn't write anything for a day, and then he knew...

After taking a look at the introduction, I was a little confused. Does the author really know the meaning of the words "Kenshin Tongmei"? Do you know the gold content of the word "transparent"? You have finished refining yourself with jade liquid and have understood your true nature? Then wouldn't the next step be to calm the fetal breath, make the mind alive and dead, meet the dragon and the tiger, have sympathetic temperament, return seven times and nine times, use lead to make mercury, and the great elixir will be completed?

It is an exception for Master Dingxian to accept a male disciple. It is better for you to accept a bunch of them and slap the master's face. Others are nunneries. You must know that in ancient nunneries, men were very taboo about entering. No matter how much others value you, they will not be able to accept more male disciples. If all the lay male disciples live in the mountains, those monks will be drowned by the spit of the world.

The background of the novel "The Swordsman" is from the Hongzhi to the Zhengde and Jiajing dynasties. The Ming Dynasty is at best in the middle period, but it is far from the middle to late period, right? At that time, if there were no natural or man-made disasters, most of the people could barely survive. The world was in chaos, and the root cause of it all was Zuo Lengchan's ambition and wishful thinking. The unveiling of all this was the Qingcheng sect's family-killing Fuwei Escort Agency!

It's surprisingly good, with a bit of fun and a little bit of intrigue. The story doesn't stick to the original work. It's considered a relatively qualified fan fiction. I've already voted and hope to keep it.

The writing is good, but it feels a bit indescribable. Has it been polished with AI? Many of the descriptions are bland and repetitive, and the same goes for the emotional stability side, but isn't this a point girl, and it's not a tomato, so I'm not sure.

Another book to seek help from a master? The introduction is a bit like that of Emei Master

If this book was a good book 50 years ago, it is a bit outdated now. It has a pure Jin Yong flavor.

Author, may I ask, what kind of disaster is there in the world of Swordsman?

It is okay to add one more word "Hengshan Sword Banishes the Immortal" to the title.

In the past, I saw a lot of it, and there was no limit to the amount of fandom streaming. Many authors in this article have written about Swordsman. After all, this is a classic, because many people have basically never read the book or watched the TV series. You can make nonsense of it, but one thing is that I don't know when it started. Why do you have to write about the Purple Cloud of Purple Cloud? I don't know which author, uh, just writes Zhu Tianwen or fan fiction. He created it by himself, which led to the writing of Zhu Tianwen and the Swordsman Zixia Magic in the same way. You can practice by absorbing the purple energy of the morning sun, please, please. I haven't read the original work, but I think he can do things with the Zixia Divine Art that even the innate skills of the Nine Yin Manual and the Nine Yang Divine Art can't be done. Too awesome. He can absorb the purple energy of the morning sun, the wisdom of heaven and earth, oh my god. Do you think this is normal? He can no longer absorb solar energy, the sun's rays, using the Nine-Yang Magic Technique. Not to mention the Nine Yin Manual can absorb the lunar moonlight, but your Zixia magic power can absorb the purple energy of the morning sun. Jin Yong didn't even dare to write like this. Also, the reason why Zixia Magic Kung is called Zixia Magic Kung is that when you perform the exercise, your face will be surrounded by purple energy, so it is called Zixia Magic Kung. It's not about absorbing the purple energy of the morning sun.

Your entries only include swords, palms, boxing, and Qinggong. Where is the hidden weapon?

Yue Buqun had to lick the dog, it was disgusting.

The entry of men into the nunnery is a matter of entries?

Author, which version is your innate body-breaking invisible sword energy? Is it the Hong Kong comic version or the novel version?

I would like to ask if there will be a female protagonist in Zhu Xian and the future world?

I'm writing about Zhu Xian. Let me ask the author, since Fengyun's sword world has the inheritance of Tao Zun, wouldn't the Book of Heaven in Zhu Xian be the inheritance of the Emperor of Heaven in this life?

How should I put it, the biggest problem in the first three chapters is that it feels like it takes itself a little too seriously. Obviously, just seeing the misery of other people can inspire the idea of ​​​​having a better life in oneself, but the description is like a war between good and evil is about to start, and all ordinary people are about to die. I'm speechless. Do these martial arts sects dare to confront the imperial court?

This kind of second generation, like Qu Feiyan, takes ignorance as their personality. If not a few of them die, I will look down on you, author.

First kill, Linghu Chong, who is an upright member of a well-known family, makes friends with bad guys, does not distinguish between good and evil, betrays his master, looks like a true character, but is actually a fake villain Kill, Yue Buqun, a real villain, three kills, rapist Kill Zuo Lengchan, kill Shaolin

Chapter 81 Tianyi Yangjue went to the wrong door. That thing should belong to Gao Wu.

Dear adoptive fathers, I have been a little busy at work recently, and the daily update of 10,000 words remains the same. However, the update time will be adjusted. Starting tomorrow, there will be one chapter in the morning, one chapter at noon, and one chapter at 6:00 in the evening.

Here is an entry about Hengshan Ripper 😜

Question, are you planning to have a female protagonist? If there is no female protagonist, Xiaoao World can become a monk, change the world and then return to secular life, anyway, it will be the world.

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