1988: Back to Spend a Few Years Among the Living

After reading about 200 chapters, I thought about it and gave it up, hey. The hook of the reborn is so big, that's all if you really change the pattern of the times. I only saw a restless monkey, fighting with other monkeys in a small cage all day long, performing for tourists outside the zoo, making them laugh.

But Shuangwen is not happy. Most contemporary literature has this problem. They want to have a bit of documentary literature, and they also want to charge according to the Internet article model. The result is that Shuangwen is not happy. Action movies need to educate people, and they can't pick it up after putting it down.

I see it's coming soon. At present, it seems that the reborn person's butt is very crooked. As a local reborn, we use our advantages of foresight and local people to help foreign companies acquire high-quality local private enterprises, arrange employment for foreigners, squeeze the living space of local private enterprises and township enterprises, and seize employment positions for local people. Foreign companies have made it clear (** companies can only be companies from southwest China). The protagonist helps the local factions to make plans and charge into battle without any big interests. I haven't earned much interest yet. Butt is a little crooked

I don't have a goal. I just try my best all day long, and I'm being pointed here and there.

Author, stop messing around! We have reached this stage, and the emotional scenes can be smooth. Don't do any plot where a love rival from childhood to adulthood comes out of the sky. I don't mind having two female protagonists, but don't make any more twists and turns. An emotional drama in a novel that focuses on business and officialdom can be used as an embellishment, but it cannot be made by accidentally burying a piece of mouse droppings in a pot of plain porridge to disgust the reader. The emergence and later performance of Eggplant Girl are completely incomprehensible to a second-generation official who grew up in the army during that period. On the contrary, he is more like the rich second generation who was pampered by his family since he was a child but has some ability. In the recent part, the conflicts within Dahua are more like forcibly creating conflicts to highlight the protagonist and giving the protagonist a halo of intelligence (even feeling like he is under water). Whether Song's appearance is for foreshadowing or a later transfer, he should not forcefully insert himself into the emotional scene between the protagonist and Mu Mu. There is already an eggplant girl who delays the development of relationships, and adding another Song Dynasty is simply forcing a mouthful of sour vegetable soup onto the readers who are almost done eating. It forces readers to vomit. And like others have said, the main character's current behavior is more like a puppet on strings.

After thinking about it, I still couldn't help but mention it. The author may not realize that in this novel, the main characters all speak in the same way, with the same long and short sentences, the same modal particles, the same level of vocabulary, and even the same oral habits - oops, you know, please. Yang Mo, Mu Liya, Zhang Wenshun, and even characters like Sun Jian, in addition to what they say, everyone is speaking in the author's own language. It feels really inconsistent to put this kind of template on some characters who shouldn't have such a level of education and conversation.

This is suggested to be modified by the author. Because Shandong is one of the five main battlefields of the Anti-Japanese War. The author can check it himself

Can there be less emotional scenes? I really want to vomit. The rest is really good. It's just this emotional scene that really shines. 😐😐😐😐

As a bookworm for more than ten years, I read books with a little brain. Although there are various problems in society today, I can see the shining points of promoting people's trust, learn some knowledge, and make people think in this book. I feel that this book is great. As long as the author writes well and can guarantee that he will not be banned, it can definitely be said to be a classic.

I feel so embarrassed every day