Just Focus on Winning Her Over

Asakura Sound

I don't understand. I think the conditions for obtaining Aozora's pills are very inappropriate. The system here completely violates the original intention at the beginning and does not fit in with the theme of "you only care about the strategy" at all. And it's not just here. Throughout the whole story, this system gave me the feeling that it was not as powerful as when it first appeared. It said that you only focus on the strategy, as if you can play as many tricks as you want, but in fact, it only slightly hinted at the background story of the heroine. A good harem story is the same as a youth pain literature. What I want to watch is a romantic comedy!

The plot after the kitten leaves is actually a great turning point. In terms of timeline, multiple conflicts begin to break out. This section should have been the climax. Unfortunately, the author did not write the transition well. The handling of the kitten's departure was too gentle and feeble. According to my opinion, it would be more dramatic to leave after curing the sense of taste. Firstly, it will foreshadow the kitten's return, and secondly, it can dilute the sadness of the kitten's departure. Then there is the rhythm writing after the kitten leaves, which is slow and has no sense of urgency. The follow-up plot between Xiao Nai and the squad leader probably happens to be the chapter immediately following the plot of the kitten. At this time, it is actually more attractive to continue watching the plot of the squad leader quickly, instead of just spending a leisurely day and playing football for a month or two. There is also the literary youth disease that increasingly affects the perception. It also starts from this plot. The male protagonist's various psychological activities and handling of affairs do not look like a person who was once a social animal. Instead, it seems that the author cannot hide his own thoughts and wants to use the male protagonist to express them. In fact, I don't exclude the literary youth who are not overly and not extreme, but in the chapters with exciting plots, it is better not to write too much about literary and psychological activities. The thing that most affects the viewing experience is not the plot writing, but the fact that the male protagonist really has no personality charm. He is neither tough and decisive nor emotional and gentle. His IQ and EQ are sometimes high and sometimes low. He clearly has a firm grasp of Yue Xia's psychology. He has back and forth when facing Xiao Nai, and he can take the initiative when facing the squad leader, but when he hints deeper at Kitty, he is like a junior brother. Chun Chun is a man who doesn't know how to talk about love and has no self-awareness. He can only rely on the system but wants to start a harem. He is sweet but not sweet, only awkward and naughty. I don't know if the author has read it. The fact that I wrote so many shortcomings does not mean that the book is without merit, but that only these shortcomings of this book affected my reading experience. After all, this book was enough for me to read it all.

I discovered this book the night before yesterday, stayed up all night to read it, and now I have subscribed to the latest chapter. Suddenly I found that I no longer had the feeling of staying up late to watch. What first attracted me was the title of the book, which said you only care about the strategy; but the actual plot has little to do with the title, and the hooks are very small. Every time the relationship between the protagonist and a heroine progresses, the Shura field is always triggered. I really don't understand it. The plot of this relationship development is obviously very good, but the candy plot does not even give time to reflect. The next paragraph is the Shura field, and then he hurts another heroine and forcibly cuts the knife. Forget it once, it happens every time, and the author takes pleasure in it. The protagonist is a pure scumbag, and currently it seems that the reason why the protagonist is able to have a harem is that he is confident in being loved.

I finally got this hairstyle.

I also want to start a harem as the protagonist, but Asakura makes me feel bad. The store manager can still protect herself well without me. After all, I know from the previous methods that she is a level 99 princess. Although Yuexia has low self-esteem and is weak, she is also extremely strong. A girl can support the world that belongs to her sister. Now there is a monitor However, Asakura had nothing, was betrayed by her mother, almost gave up on herself, and was randomly destroyed by a wretched man on the roadside (without me, she would be a replica of Sayu), she has no sense of taste but wants to learn to cook, not only because of her self-esteem but also because she is afraid of losing it. Currently, she is also the one who loves me the most, she only has me. If the protagonist were me, I would make her my heroine, and my future light would only shine on her.

Why do I not like the character Aozora at all? I just watched the beginning and skipped all her chapters after that.

From the beginning to now, hundreds of chapters have been depressing. I haven't read it in the middle. The update is not very fast. Every chapter is so bitter. I am very unhappy and angry. I don't dare to read it every day for fear of affecting my good mood throughout the day. Why can't the kitten recover immediately after taking medicine? I thought it was a breaking point. I was happy when I saw the kitten preparing to take the medicine, but I didn't expect it to be delayed again. I really don't understand how long you want to delay it Why does Xiao Nai's special medicine have to be hidden from everyone? It's so uncomfortable to watch. There is obviously a better way to write it

To be honest, it's really awkward to see you acting like a pure lover but not a harem, and not a harem. Although you say it's a sweet article, but no matter how you look at it, it's like giving you a candy and then stabbing you. I hope you stabbed you with a carrot knife. Can the plot be moved forward a little faster?

Momotani Miyuki