The Poor Man Only Knows How to Kill with the Sword

A new book by the author of "Folk Custom Begins with the Blood God of Western Hunan". This author's old book is dead, so he secretly opened a new book. However, one thing to say is that the new book and new life are really good. The protagonist has traveled to a world of monsters and monsters, with a buff that gets stronger as he fights, and a "system" that gives out tasks and rewards (basically not interfering with the main plot). Anyway, I can't stand to suffer a loss or be fooled. So far, I can only comment on it in one word, great! In addition, friends who are in a book shortage can read the author's old books. In the first two volumes, the author was quite alive when he was not alive (fun).

Your writing style and writing methods really need to be polished. . . Blood God, you just hammer here and there with a stick, and this is still the case. . . . I will simply talk about the faults I see, which is why many people say it is confusing and tiring: First of all, the power system is not clearly explained after a hundred chapters. You don't even explain clearly what levels the divine training has and what abilities it has. You only talk about it after you encounter several levels and the protagonist is about to reach the next level. It makes people tired to think about it every time. Then your power system has not been established, you have not taught all about the divine training, and then suddenly a god, a deity, pops up, oh, the god is very awesome, the deity is very awesome, specifically how awesome, I don't know, but I know it is a very awesome state. It is not said what level is below the gods, nor is it said what level of gods the Heavenly Lord is. The next thing is that you stretch the power level casually, and it is the beginning of the story, and then you double-click to trick the protagonist. Last time, Blood God, you were the main character in each story and the power level was increased without thinking. This time, you directly lock the blood. It's very meaningless, you can obviously set this as a small copy. Wait for the protagonist to grow up for a period of time before coming back to reveal the behind-the-scenes story. Why do you have to throw it out in one go? Even if you throw out the world view, you should at least explain your realm clearly before talking about it. The last thing is that your narrative structure often switches perspectives and tells a lot, but in the end the plot progress of the protagonist does not advance much. When you write, you may think that you have written every aspect, but in fact the readers seem very tired. I saw that you said in other comments that you wrote a white text, but in fact your book seems to require readers to draw a timeline in their heads and then label events. In the end, the main plot does not advance much, and the readers are still very tired. . . And don't forget that you are writing an online novel. Readers have to wait for updates. If you describe too much about other places, over time readers will forget what the protagonist did and what happened. Another digression, do you know why some people are dissatisfied with you writing that the protagonist learns other things? Because the name of the book is "The Poor Taoist Can Only Kill Swords"

How should I put it? I feel confused. I feel tired while reading.

I feel confused. There are many things to learn. Why do I have to learn Taoism? Talisman? There are so many martial arts talents, why not develop them properly?

Good guy, Xiangxi is still secretly updating the book.

Good guy, secretly updating the new book, right?

There is so much nonsense, the author must be new. A bunch of settings were explained at the beginning, which directly killed my desire to read. . . . The author is writing a textbook? ? ? ?

Some people suspect that this is a studio AI. Believe me brother, even AI pays attention to subject, predicate, object, tense and complement.) But the author's writing style is to expose parts randomly. People who have read it say it is confusing, and the same is true for the previous book. The beginning of this book was okay, but it gradually became apparent as I wrote it. I seriously doubt that the author was high. He might have smoked something while writing.

I just said that the writing style looked a bit familiar, and I also wanted to complain about whether it is a brother to a certain Xiangxi book on my bookshelf. The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not smooth. It is good-looking, but the writing is not clear, which tests people's understanding. I clicked on the author's column and took a look. What a brother. To be honest, the author is the third one I can recognize based on his writing style after just a few glances.

The setting is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the writing style is quite poor. The continuous missing words and wrong sentences are reversed and difficult to read. It's a headache for people who read it. Does the author never proofread?

The setting and background are pretty good, but as I read I couldn't figure out where I was going. Could the plot be simpler and clearer? I always feel like reading is not smooth.

It's too messy, the main and branch lines are not prominent, and the interpersonal relationships are also confusing. This kind of Dark Souls narrative is popular because players interact well with the game, while novels have no interaction.

How should I put it? The author's writing is good, but it's very... Messy, just as confusing as the Xiangxi book. As a result, the viewing experience is not very good, some parts are not explained to the readers, and the protagonist feels that the development is a bit fast when he comes into contact with a character with such high combat power.

I won't read the unfinished books written by you in the future.

The first three pictures are good, but the latter ones feel... So messy?

🤫Brother, go and learn some basic writing. Your subject matter is good, but your pure writing style is not. Too confusing

The language logic is really uncomfortable to watch

Alas, the author, as long as the plot is not confusing, can be a god and a ghost.

Huan Guy, the author of Xiangxi Blood God

The author was anxious to write a hit book to get out of the predicament, but the first book was neither good nor bad, and the results of this one were average. The double opening really affects the quality of the book.

I just read two or three chapters, and the last two chapters were pretty hard to read. I forgot what word I was thinking of at the beginning. I glanced at the comment area and saw "chaos", well, it was about the same. It felt very incoherent. It was stuck one after another. It could also be said that there was no focus. It felt very fragmented. I didn't know what to write or how to write. I wrote randomly, something like this. The advice is the same, hone your writing skills. Another thing is that there must be rigorous settings. This cannot be careless. Let's just say, think clearly and speak carefully, okay? Of course, talking more can be regarded as laying the foundation for refinement, but it also gives people a very bad impression and experience. Therefore, I suggest you to sharpen your writing skills and improve your setting. It doesn't matter if you don't have a very exciting setting. First, try to write a complete and perfect story that you are satisfied with. You can try a humorous writing style at the beginning, which can make up for the lack of character creation ability and the shortcomings of insufficient setting. It can also attract some book fans and lay the foundation for further progress.

Why is this book hidden? I can't find it even if I search it.

There are too many novels in which the protagonist uses a sword. Can the author make the protagonist use a hammer?

I read novels for entertainment. What are you writing about? I feel tired after reading them.

The author's story shaping ability is actually very good, and the plot is smooth and full of ups and downs. It's a very good novel. The only fatal point is that the frequency of character switching is too high. Not enough sense of immersion. Often the protagonist will say a sentence, and then switch to another person's perspective to say a sentence. As a result, the protagonist's role is not enough and the sense of substitution is not strong. People who are not good at reading will look very confused, and they will not understand what they are saying after reading it.

It's not enough. It's really not enough. Reading it every day is not enough. Author, the novel you wrote is really beautiful. It's just that the writing is a bit confusing and sparse, making it a bit painful to follow.

There is obviously a golden finger, but a system is still forced into it. Abandon books.

I was given daily detoxification, and I took it

Song Jiang Xunyanglou wrote an anti-poem, but Huang Wenbing took advantage of it and wanted to arrest him and hold him accountable. Dai Zong said with a confident smile: "Brother, don't worry. Wu Yongnai and I have been friends for many years. His name is Zhi Duo Xing, and I am the King of Ideas. We have a bright future. As long as I use a little trick, I can help my brother out of trouble!" "A plan to find out?" Song Jiang was in the lobby of the government office. One Buddha was born after being beaten, and two Buddhas entered nirvana. Unable to fight, he had no choice but to fight and was taken to death row to await execution. Dai Zong went straight to Liangshan for help. Wu Yong smiled confidently. "Don't worry, my dear brother, as long as I use a little plan, I can help Brother Song Jiang out of trouble!" "The plan will work out?" "Write a fake reply, and when my dear brother goes back, he will say that the Grand Master will send Song Jiang to Tokyo, and we will rob him nearby." "Wonderful." Three days later. Dai Zong was tied up and beaten until his skin and flesh were torn, and blood flowed out. He couldn't survive the beating, so he had no choice but to retaliate and be thrown into prison. In prison, Dai Zong comforted Song Jiang and said: "Brother, don't worry, I have a plan to keep me waiting for a few days." "Will the plan work out?" "I have a good friend Huang Kongmu..." Six days later. Song Jiang and Dai Zong had plaques tied on their necks, glue on their hair, and flowers on their heads. I am having a long break and say goodbye to wine. "Don't worry, brother, I have another plan..." "Brother, I want to be quiet, you'd better stop talking."

Pindao, Guanzhu, Bodhidharma Sword Technique, Bodhi Stand