And You Still Claim You're Not an Immortal

I should say that although I have only read a few chapters, this book should be a good book except for sentence fragments and punctuation marks. But I still want to complain about the author. Why did you write a time-travel protagonist? Just write an indigenous protagonist. I don't know the Fire Dragon Master Chen Tuan. He actually doesn't even know that his master Lu Dongbin is called Lu Yan. Someone may try to bully me into saying "just a time-travel protagonist." Do you know that Lu Dongbin's name is Lu Yan?" I know that many people in reality don't know that one of the famous Eight Immortals, Lu Dongbin, is called Lu Yan, but the problem is that this is not reality, this is a novel. Reality can be illogical, but novels have to talk about it. Moreover, you wrote at the beginning that the protagonist is a time traveler, and the protagonist who time travels doesn't know anything. So if you write about time travel, you might as well write about indigenous people.

I wonder what the main character's hobby is with a mouse, a mouse that can't help but steal things. If he steals something, he returns it unfairly, and he comes to apologize and make amends. Doesn't the mouse need to be punished and reflect on his past? The main character practices training just to support the mice?

Shennong is coming You can try reading the first chapter. If you can get through it, you'll be fine. Also test your language comprehension ability

Nowadays, book lovers are very involuntarily involuted! You must drag me on the road with you

I don't understand it at first. When you are a mortal, you meet an evil cultivator. You don't know why others don't kill you, so you have to compromise. Then the evil cultivator takes a fancy to you and says he wants you to be his apprentice. He asks you to think about it, and then refuses it outright. It's very contradictory. There is no emotional description. How can you be sure that others will not kill you? Just because you are the protagonist, are you stubborn? Then why don't you be tough from the beginning and start collaborating with others? In my opinion, the initial image does not correspond to what you described, so I'd better think about it. Contextual context

At the beginning, why do you act like you are a jerk when your life is clearly in someone else's hands? What kind of character is the protagonist? Fool?

After testing the poison, anyone who can survive the first chapter will probably be fine, but I didn't survive it anyway.

How can I put it this way? It's like playing a single-player game. Except for the protagonist, the plot is all set up. There is no human touch at all. Everything is prepared for the plot of the protagonist.

The author of this book is quite powerful. In the first chapter, he tries to screen out as many smart readers as possible. No matter how big the problem is in the following chapters, people with high poison resistance can probably tolerate it 👍

This book is completely a foil to the main character. It ignores ordinary people's logic and has a somewhat strong aura of being mentally retarded.