The Martial Era

Building a powerful nation from scratch takes a very long time. The author's plot, with the protagonist's strength changing on a daily basis, is unsuitable for establishing a power base.

Over 110 chapters and still stuck at the first realm? That's too slow! It feels like the Shang Dynasty nobles, with their hundreds of thousands of years of heritage, don't know as much as the protagonist, who's only cultivated for twenty years. The protagonist knows how powerful the perfect first realm is; surely those Shang Dynasty noble cultivators know that? You're describing it as if the protagonist knows more than all cultivators in the world, and everyone else is an idiot, right?

Come, author, repeat after me my solemn oath: From this day forward, never... I will be taking a break from updating. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not play games. Playful, not fluffy. Strict self-discipline, valuing time like gold, indomitable spirit, and striving... Strive hard, pursue excellence, forge brilliance, find joy in coding, and be tempered by adversity.

Overall it's not bad, but the author is too meticulous about the timeline. It's supposed to be a mythological story, so you can't just calculate the time in days. It should be in years at least. It's not that you're developing slowly, but your opponents are developing for tens of thousands of years. It's just too painful to watch!

The author didn't need to arrange the timeline so tightly. This is a world of gods and demons, so the timeline could be stretched out instead of just a few days later.

To be honest, this world is particularly suitable for cultivating the bloodline martial arts in the Martial Tomb. Even the weakest monkey can transform into a Chaos Demon Ape through bloodline martial arts cultivation.

It's too filler. Two-thirds of it is about introducing cultivation techniques and magical treasures, and the rest is about introducing power relationships. The actual plot is only a little over 10%. You can skip 10 chapters without any problem.

After watching up to chapter 200, it felt like the protagonist's entire story after leaving the guild was just filler and lacked any real depth. It was all about cultivation, creating new techniques, and getting perks, without actually improving his cultivation level. It was a complete waste of the original story and the groundwork laid in the beginning.

Author, you've written about the prehistoric era and Journey to the West, and you're preparing to write Investiture of the Gods. You could also start a book about the chaotic era. I really love your prehistoric fantasy novels; they're among the few high-quality ones. I hope you continue writing! Keep it up!

It's getting increasingly boring. It's just about how powerful a certain realm is, how they achieve it, and then how they actually do it. Everyone claims to be so, and there are all sorts of strongest cultivation techniques in the heavens, but then they say they're not that powerful. There's basically no plot; it's all just cultivation boasting.