The Martial Era

It takes a lot of time to build a powerful country from scratch. The author's plot and the protagonist's strength change on a daily basis, which is not suitable for establishing power.

It's too slow to still be in the same realm after more than 110 chapters. I always feel that the hundreds of thousands of years of inheritance from the merchant aristocracy is not as profound as the protagonist's twenty years of practice. The protagonists all know how powerful the Perfection Realm is, but don't those practitioners from the great merchants and aristocrats know that? The feeling you describe is that no cultivator in the world knows as much as the protagonist, and everyone else is a fool, right?

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never stop updating. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, struggle hard work, advocating first-class, striving to create brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Ma Yu is my bounden duty, I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the key in the darkness, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night.

Overall, it's good, but the author's timeline is too detailed. It's still a mythical genre anyway. You can't calculate your time in days, at least in years. It doesn't mean that your development is slow. Your opponents all started out tens of thousands of years ago. Your own development is calculated in days. It's too uncomfortable to watch!

There is no need for the author to arrange the time so tightly. This is the world view of gods and demons. The timeline can be longer, not a few days later or a few days later.

To be honest, this world is particularly suitable for practicing bloodline martial arts in the martial arts tomb. The weakest monkey who practices bloodline martial arts can transform into a chaotic demon ape.

It's too watery. Two-thirds of it is about introducing exercises and magic weapons, and the rest is about introducing power relations. The real plot is only a little over 10%. You can skip 10 chapters without any trouble.

After watching 200, I felt that the protagonist had no taste in the water the whole time after leaving the dormitory. The whole process was just practicing and creating methods to get benefits. The key realm was not mentioned, and he just kept creating methods and innovations. This theme was foreshadowed in the early stage.

Author, you have written about The Ancient Times and Journey to the West. You are planning to write about Fengshen. You can also start a book about the period of chaos. I like your Ancient Times novels very much. It is one of the few masterpieces about The Ancient Times. I hope you can continue writing. Come on.

It's getting more and more boring. It's just about how strong you are in one realm and then you achieve it. You just say how it is, and every one of them is, and there are all kinds of the strongest techniques in the world, and then you say it's not that strong. There is basically no plot in the whole story, it's all about cultivation and bragging.