Wizard: The Book of Dark Stars
巫师：暗星之书
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 956k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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293Chapters
3.2kRecommendations
37.7kFans
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This is a wizarding novel disguised as a wizarding story. After reading about seventy chapters, I haven't seen the protagonist learn any knowledge whatsoever. Constructing spell models requires no prior knowledge, nor does modification (yes, the test showed a real wizard could replicate it after just one reading, which is truly impressive).
Several suggestions 1. Two particularly problematic points need revision. First, the faction selection process was abrupt and inexplicable. Upon disembarking, a wizard suggested everyone should go for summoning, but the protagonist, instead of being happy about being assigned to summoning, was upset because it wasn't his choice. This alone has driven away many readers.
The protagonist has a few secrets and spills everything, even treating a child he's only known for a short time as his father… He's cowardly on one hand, and constantly teetering on the edge of revealing his cheat abilities. This aspect of the protagonist's character even gave me the illusion that he had a split personality. Aside from these issues, the rest of the plot was okay.
I don't even want to watch the aptitude test anymore. Aptitude is judged by the intensity of red, but the protagonist gets a white ball with a hint of red inside, and it takes two minutes for that to appear. Are all those completely red balls divine children? Or is the protagonist not even worthy of being human?
The main character is the Book of Dark Stars, right? As for the male lead, calling him a mere plot device is too kind; he's supposed to be a wizard, he's just a warrior who can cast fireballs.
Either write a mature protagonist Either remove the time-travel element and write a story with an immature, homegrown protagonist. The protagonist is still immature and has a childlike personality, which is not endearing. With the time-travel element added, the protagonist's personality is set at a mature adult stage.
To be honest, I don't understand why the protagonist is so low-key. The novels that truly require a low profile are those where the protagonist faces a situation where a low profile is the only option, otherwise the mortality rate would be almost 99%. In such cases, a low profile is perfectly acceptable. Normally, it's fine for someone with high talent to be a little high-profile.
Author, hurry up and update more than 100,000 words a day, or I'll kick your baby bottle away!
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