
The Prime Mover
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- Completed
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- 829k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Evolution & Mutation
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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The lolita in the group said that the book under this pen name is guaranteed to be completed. If the book is not completed, I will kill her!
Ailuo, you have changed, Ailuo, there is no more lily o(╥╥)o
It is a transformational work, with a male protagonist, a creation flow with a little bit of travel between the two worlds, no system, some group portraits, some horror, some epic, slow-burning, not fast-paced, there is a female protagonist but not a harem, and there is no brainless cliche plot. The content is positioned around humans and gods, writing about human nature on one side and divinity on the other. The protagonist is just a teenager, with friends, family, daily life, and dreams. The story is also about the growth from human to god, rather than being born divine. It is impossible to break up love and sex when you are just a teenager. Even if love and sex are cut off, it is something that has gone through everything in the world and risen to another stage. Sorry if there are any mistakes. After all, the author is not a master and cannot write perfect content. This book is just for the sake of love. I hope everyone will be merciful and refrain from personal attacks 😄
When I see the title of the book, I always think of the big-eyed pen. Previous book A certain raven's "first leg power"
Comments on the First Age
Because it was getting late and I was busy with my studies, I just buried this book on my bookshelf to gather dust. But when I took it out and read it, I immediately fell in love with it and wrote an evaluation about the first era. I have written in countless new creation articles, when will there be a book that is more Cthulhu, more indescribable and weirder? I imagined two major styles, one is indescribable, and the other is a pure ghost world. Obviously the indescribable has greater potential. This book was born in a time that I didn't know but collected. I have classified the creation texts I have read into different levels, and there are two thrones in my heart. The first is "I am God!" Which is well known to creation literature enthusiasts. The second book is rarely known, but it is really well written. It features a parody of the Bible with a strong sense of holiness, "Only God." I won't introduce much here, I have also written book reviews there. I think if this book can continue the style of the First Age, it will be ranked third in my heart. This is a throne of indescribable wealth. Whether you can ascend the throne will be verified soon, because I still have a hundred chapters to read. Many books have an indescribable existence. Why is this book the only one that can be called a book about the indescribable? Because of the atmosphere. In the real world outside the first era, the author writes the bloody scenes very well. The gore alone cannot be called Cthulhu style, but the author also wrote hallucinations. Secondly, the protagonist's egoistic and excessive calmness is obviously different from the people around him. Even the protagonist's subsequent comfort to the female teacher lacks a sense of sympathy and is more like pity. Maybe it was not handled well, but this flaw established the Cthulhu style. It's hard for me to describe what it is like. I can only tell you that it is very torn, just like the tearing in "The Strange Fairy". The author's language is very straightforward, to the point of being pale. It's good that the madness in calmness is written in the forest where the protagonist escapes. In the first era, the king did this and that inexplicably, making everyone confused. But it has been seven million years! Seven million years! People have already gone crazy. The fact that Wang is not crazy remains in the setting, but according to the author's writing about him, he is crazy. The same is true for all the druids in other places. They are all crazy. Departed from the original intention, distorted the mission, and betrayed his own heart. Has freedom been implemented? It has been implemented, because when you are alone, you have absolute freedom. Does it make sense? No sense. When they swore the oath, was it this terrible freedom and this terrible unity of all things that they had in mind? No. What they have in mind is a very childish freedom and an unrealistic unity of all things, but this is the correct answer. Later they became mature, and it became possible for the theory of freedom to become reality, but it was no longer the freedom they had in mind. So they are said to be crazy, and the king is the most crazy. He had found the answer before, but there was no way to implement the answer, which even left him in a fight for survival. He began to question the answer. As everyone knows, what cannot be pursued is the best. Keeping the pursuit of freedom is more important than having freedom itself. It sounds like you are dead but you are free. Um, what should I say? The text is limited, and I am just an ordinary reader. It is impossible to write words that are sympathetic and understandable at a glance. In short, that's about what it means. When I have time, I will post a review of the entire book and summarize my thoughts here. There is not much to say about Rose, she is a relatively decent god, but the author writes in an indescribable style. Setting her to be able to only create, not destroy, this complete limitation is extreme and very Cthulhu-like. In short, come on, author!
The sense of separation is too strong, one side is the Creator and the other is the weakling. It would be okay if the world of creation is not connected to reality, but if there is a connection, it feels a bit contradictory.
This book is very well written, and the title change should be more than enough for further reading. One problem is that if you don't plan to write a female protagonist, it's best not to make it ambiguous, like the recent female teacher. In fact, if there are not many plots in the future, there is no need to make it so embarrassing. Teachers will be teachers, and don't write embarrassing ones. Having multiple female protagonists is actually a deductible item in the current version, and very few can be written well. Using the heroine to advance the plot is a bit aesthetically exhausting. Popular novels nowadays either have no heroine or only one heroine, and they are basically tool people with no sense of existence.
I don't know if it's a comeback or a dying struggle?
In Creation, women will only affect the speed at which the male protagonist creates the world. This person accounts for half of the plot. What happened behind the scenes of Creation, and what is said downstairs. The title of the book is really difficult to put aside without reading the introduction.
Books are not very good. The author did not integrate knowledge into his own worldview, resulting in the phenomenon of always showing off knowledge, but failed to achieve the effect of knowledge, settings and definitions naturally promoting the development of the plot, strengthening the sense of epic and expressing profound opinions. In the expression of social issues, such as "Is it okay to sleep in class if it is useless?", The author's point of view presents a certain "taken for granted", lacking understanding and sympathy for the real situation and the ability to propose better solutions. And so on. To put it simply, it has no nutrition.