King of One-on-One

As soon as Douya entered the group, everyone chatting idly laughed at him, some shouting, "Douya, you're short and weak again!" He didn't answer, but said to the group, "Give me some recommendation votes, and those with monthly votes, hurry up and cast them." They then deliberately shouted loudly, "You must be slacking off again!"

It's not a big deal if the protagonist is invincible in high school, or even that matters. But he doesn't need to be so invincible in college. He might be able to take on five people at once in high school, but don't write it like that in college.

The talent show section was completely unnecessary, long, tedious, and off-putting. It was unrealistic and just self-indulgent, a classic case of trying to write something awesome but ending up writing something stupid.

There's a reason why he's written over a dozen books but still isn't very famous.

The beginning was quite good and worth reading, but I gave up on it after the last two chapters featuring Scarlett. Who likes harem novels these days? Do you really think everyone who reads novels is a loser who's never seen a woman before?

They actually said Shaq was overrated? 😁

No wonder he's only a Level 3 author despite having written so many books.

Rookie stats even better than Jordan's! Don't even mention those from the distant past; times have changed. Even Duncan, more recently, wasn't this outrageous. The key point is they entered the league at 21 or 22! If you reduced your scoring by 10, you'd still be on the All-NBA First Team. Assists are harder to get than rebounds.

It's hard to imagine that this is an author who has written several books.

The previous book was too fast-paced. This book needs to slow down the pace; otherwise, it'll be too invincible to read.