Court Ambition

Just get PJ Tucker, Andre Iguodala, Lou Williams, and Marc Gasol. Of course, if you can trade for Curry from the Warriors, that would be even better. Imagine: Gasol and Randolph as a twin towers, Lou Williams as the sixth man, Tucker at small forward, and Iguodala and the star player as a backcourt duo. I just want to say, even if this lineup isn't offensively sharp, its defense would be enough to wear down many teams. And in the playoffs... Hehehe...

The early stages were alright, but the later stages were too exaggerated. The leveling up was too fast, and the idea of ​​getting the number one draft pick into the NBA was just too much.

Honestly, it's quite exciting... I hope it doesn't fall apart.

The protagonist initially missed all four of his shots. Then he proceeded to dominate an NCBAA point guard. The character's leveling up should be described more thoroughly. Things like Kobe's shooting and Butler's stamina were only briefly mentioned. These aspects need more development; we don't even know what new features the protagonist will have after leveling up. His height seems to have only been mentioned once?

To be honest, I was a bit confused when I saw the part where he challenged Harden to a one-on-one match. Harden may be very strong in the future, but that doesn't mean he has the strength he will have in his youth. Knowing that he couldn't win, why did he still provoke him? Isn't that just crazy?

Why insist on going to the Clippers? The environment isn't good, and the coach isn't good either. The beginning was well-written, but the pacing suddenly collapsed in the last dozen or so chapters before publication, becoming a rambling, disjointed mess.

Are there any new authors? I think your writing is quite good; I've been reading your older books these past few days.

Writing about high school? How many words would it take to write about the NBA? And how many more would it take to finish?

Here's a suggestion: the reason your grades aren't good is because your name is poorly chosen; you should add "NBA" in front of it.

The writing is good, but the pacing is just too slow.