Mysterious Hunting Ground

The background setting is quite interesting, full of the flavor of Stranger Things, but the character design and plot arrangements leave people speechless. The protagonist's experience of the previous setbacks, conflicts, contradictions and subsequent revenge cannot be said to be extremely happy, but can only be said to be extremely frustrating. The performance after having super powers, the FBI setting is also speechless, hey. To be honest, if you can't write some aspects well, then you shouldn't write them. Like John Wick, if you write about the gangsters, you'll destroy the gangsters. In Stranger Things, if you can't write about the situation in Ugly Country, then just don't write it at all.

The writing is disgusting. The last book was also written by young people. This book still has the same problem.

The protagonist of the original witcher was a bit benevolent and a bit of a saint. Every time someone came to look for the witcher, the protagonist wanted to answer even if there were other dangers around him that might cost him his life. Every time he accepts a commission, the protagonist asks Snake Sect Master Leisuo, "Can you bear to watch them suffer?" Or the description of the protagonist being hesitant to speak when Leisuo refuses to accept the commission, which is quite disgusting. Everything else is fine. I wonder if the protagonist of this book still has such Madonna tendencies.

After seeing the latest chapter, according to the current way of writing, the protagonist actually does not need friends. I can emotionally accept my knife friend. But the mother who sacrificed everything to raise her child by herself was a bit unbearable. Maybe it's because after graduation I have been working outside and spending less time with my parents and more separation. Now I can better appreciate the sacrifices made by my parents and the things they bear that are heavier than mountains.

The author himself relies on Western stereotypes for the characters in his novels. Strong whites and blacks, weak and cowardly Asians. Asian girls all like whites and blacks. Is this exporting reverse nationalism?

Is the literary youth suffering from a disease? This is an online novel, maybe you should find a publisher to publish it

I watched two plots and skipped twice. The ex-girlfriend died, and then she killed that Bob. How to say it! Wenqing's disease was a bit serious, so he just traveled through time and space, and then his emotions were like a roller coaster and he was speechless. Now it's about cutting the grass without eradicating the roots. You will understand when you read the catalog later. The protagonist does not eradicate the roots, and then Bob's father comes to the door. I really don't understand. I really think that the privileged class is telling you the evidence. Just send people directly, and then the protagonist will fight back. It's the same destiny. Push and move, even the puppet will feel embarrassed. If you practice writing, you can still do it.

If you want to write more seriously, then you have to do the details well. The police will be played by you like NC. Do you really think that criminal investigation can be done by one person? If you want to write something enjoyable, then don't push the plot for the sake of pushing the plot. You clearly have superpowers, but you have to let people take the initiative to trouble you without eradicating the roots. Isn't this just to preserve the plot? Emotional scenes are like child's play. They are meant to pass through the soul. You have been dating for so long and you have been a literary youth for so long. It is not impossible to write like this. Then you can be more intense later and finish his family directly. Don't engage in love in the next few dozen chapters. You can at least give readers some room to accept it, right? Writing this way will make you happy and the readers happy too. You are now a bitter lover, and later you added a girlfriend for no reason. I am really convinced. So were you so bitter before just to torture readers? At least my emotions were aroused in the first few chapters, but after the killing, I felt like I had a lump in my throat. I couldn't go up or down. When I saw the song writing, I also had a question mark on my face. Are you kidding me? Is this plot really appropriate here? Your strength does not deserve this result, but you are only worthy of this result. The book "Go Away" carries one concept through to the end. Muscles are beauty, fists are beauty. I told you in the first few chapters. People who like to read this will naturally keep following it.

Reading the first 21 chapters can put you in a good mood for the whole day.

What is it about? The first 20 chapters are so stupid that I can't stand the rest of it. First, I couldn't find my girlfriend, and I suspected that my girlfriend had cheated me out of two thousand dollars. At that time, I felt different. But later I found out that the woman loved the hero, but she was harmed by someone. It's true at first glance. The murderer was found, and he was overturned mid-game even though he was throwing away money. He also told the protagonist how to melt a girl with acid. Then two chapters later, it was said that he had grabbed a gun and killed the person with one shot. . . . Does the author feel that he wants to promote before suppressing his writing???? By the way, the emotions of the protagonist traveling through time and possession of the person will be revealed once in each of these twenty chapters. . . . . How long has it been since I read such a funny novel???