The Fairy: Starting from the Traveling Merchant

To put it bluntly, I can read it in one sitting It's a bit like a seam monster. Although it's a bit rough at the beginning, the weird atmosphere is well written in the back If you like this style, you can watch it I thought Goldfinger would be very open, but when I saw the back part, it was just right. If you see some "uh..." Points in the middle, you can hold on for a while, and it will come around later. Shen Nong said, this book is good dry food, everyone can try it

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In a dark spiritual world, the protagonist must be darker than the people in this world to be attractive. Rather than still holding firm to one's own bottom line and acting according to the rules of one's previous life. Not many people would be willing to continue watching the frustrating plot.

There is a problem. The title of the author's book is a traveling businessman, and he also has a tendency in this direction. Why do he keep writing some messy plots, and do not rely on transactions to quickly improve his abilities. Only when he is strong can he live a more stable life and find more accessories. And there are always a lot of messy plots, which are too tightly written and very depressing.

After reading the highlights of this book, many of the heroines were immediately persuaded to quit.

The author probably won't come back to read it anyway. The author has the ability, the spirit, and the ideas. The setting of the work is huge and complex. There are many characters present. Although there are many places that imitate other writers' settings, it is still interesting overall. However, the setting of this work is too large and complicated, which is beyond the author's control. They are greedy for perfection and do not take care of the expressive ability of their own stories, but pursue too complex world views and settings. As a result, all the characters in it fell into a kind of Shuijingbaqi realm: I predicted your next move; I predicted your second move; I predicted your second move, and I predicted your second move. Such a story with too many flips is actually not interesting at all. The famous writer Love Diving Squid once said from the characters Meng Qi and Gu Xiaosang in the work that the conspiracy reversal design can only have three layers at most. This is both a mystery story in the plot and a way for Squid to tell the play through the characters' mouths. It means that if Stronger than Squid wants to keep the story interesting, it will only design three layers of reversals at most. For example, when it comes to arrangements, it's OK when you get to Song Wuduan's level. If someone can arrange Song Wuduan's work "unknowingly" on the next level, it's boring. It is enough that the Tingen incident was arranged by Ince. You may say that Yin Si was arranged by Ya Zao, Ya Zao was Bai Zao's arrangement, and Bai Zao was arranged by "God"... But no, Ya Zao was just "laissez-faire" to Yi Zao. Similarly, the setting of abilities is also the same. Although there are many other shores that can be traced back in one life, Cuttlefish arranges that most of them are doing reduction and emptying, and they do very few actions (the demon emperor even only did one action of letting the demon saint replace him). The main games focus on Sanqing, Jinhuang and Mofo. There are only two in the long night. It's the same with my girlfriends, every path has great flaws, and there's still a lot that can't be done unless you go back to the old days. And in this book, every great master is a chess player, and everyone wants to make two moves. It gets very messy. You may say, "Great power is You can be detailed in settings, and you need to know how to "subtract" when writing novels Of course, you understand that these contents are the author's inspiration, and it would be a pity to abandon any of them. But knowing how to "give up" is a basic skill as an author.

What businessman? It should be the clerk in the store. He has to spend money to buy his own things. The system uses the host's things and then recycles them, translates them, and resells them to the host. This wave of operating systems are businessmen, and the host is a wage earner.

Idiom Solitaire Tower. Whimsical

Collecting the fragments to form a cheat + a powerful smart cheat can basically be a death sentence. The foreshadowing of the events is so long and smelly. Readers from God's perspective are so happy that it's all gone. There are so many and complicated characters. Let's start a new book.

The author's construction of the worldview is complex but not delicate enough. The setting is a melting pot, but the melting pot only remains at the setting level. What are the local customs and customs under the melting pot? Details of life? The problem is that the author has to set up a complicated world view and let the protagonist enter the world in a high position, carry a complicated setting, and be involved in a big event at the beginning. Obviously the author's writing power and experience are not to this level. The result is a large setting + a pure tool protagonist + a superficial character plot. I have been following it to the latest chapter. I can only say that it is a pity. It feels like it is a waste of food and a pity to abandon it.

I feel that most people come to see traveling merchants trading with others, but you are almost selling mutton with a pig's head. .

. . The author spent a lot of time writing a game that has nothing to do with the protagonist. Some people think it's cool. Is there any difference between this game that happened 1,000 years ago and now? The protagonist can be the "flag bearer," the chess piece, the "chessboard" or even the "background". But now the protagonist is an outsider who knows nothing about it. Please tell me why the protagonist will join the game after 3 months. The protagonist's "emotionless" character will become a "family man" after 3 months? To be honest, this game was written early. If the charge chapter is written like this, I think I will start complaining This reminds me of a book I read 10 years ago. The protagonist was hidden and the supporting characters were written down, and the novel was written as a biography Finally, I applaud the author for his courage to open up the comment area

I didn't realize until later that you had seven or eight hundred chapters and were still in the first big realm. How many do you plan to write, and it's also very calculated😓

This episode of the plot is so dizzying that no one can tell the difference between more than a dozen good guys and bad guys. It is best for a plot to have only one core villain. The appearance of so many big guys who have never appeared before gives people a feeling of too much chaos. The key is that the protagonist has no intersection with them, and it is simply taking over the spotlight.

After seeing the chapters before entering v, I can say that this book still needs to be polished carefully. There's a lot of stitching, but not enough integration. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all, neither advancing the plot nor igniting the plot. The three factions in the county and city are more rigid than armed guys. The major events in the early stage are not as fascinating as 008's writing, and they are completely imitated for the sake of stitching. There is also a more Chinese-style setting that insists on using the sequence and traveling merchant templates, which looks too weird and gives people a sense of fragmentation. Golden Ship wanted to imitate Sefirah Castle, but it couldn't create a Tarot Club. I want to have sex with Sister Hongxia, but I don't dare to write it because of the river crab. Hey😭

Yan Hongxia

Did the author sew too much? Feeling a bit messy

After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel like the protagonist has been trading with Goldfinger instead of using Goldfinger to trade with others. The only time he made a deal with someone else was when he sold that person to Goldfinger, and Goldfinger made the transaction directly with that person. The protagonist was also isolated during the negotiation of terms. This Goldfinger is not the protagonist's Goldfinger, the protagonist is just a service object.

My suggestion is to directly set the protagonist to be the cock-turned-spirit of the Creator. In this case, the protagonist's behavior is more reasonable, the background is also provided, and the behavior is also reasonable. It kills two birds with one stone. You can also write it as the arrival of "High-dimensional Evil God Teddy"

I've been reading this book for several months, and I'm just waiting for it to be finished to return to the Mystery fanfic. The fanfics written by the author are the best in the genre, and I really can't stand the others.

I feel like the writing is very good. Why are there so many people complaining about it? Even if the update was interrupted before, I still keep receiving monthly votes and recommendations. I really don't know what's wrong

It seems that I have entered the palace, so let me say a few words. I was afraid of affecting the author's mentality. The book is not bad, but the name is not good, and it will not attract people. Weird Immortal. Those who are attracted by these two words should be those who like "The Weird Immortal". It is expected that it will be at least Ke + Xiuxian. However, this book does not have much description of the strange part, which is mainly reflected in the world view and background setting. The atmosphere is different from Ke. A thousand miles away; fairy, this book is not a traditional fairy tale, it should be said to be a serial flow covered in the skin of cultivators Starting from Traveling Merchant, this is even worse. Traveling Merchant, when I saw these four words, my first thought was the type of buying and selling between worlds, and then you told me it was just "the beginning", well, that is an adventure in another world starting from the caravan. However, due to the prologue Liliu is like this, the main focus is a performance, doing business and selling goods is not the focus at all, the protagonist makes a cameo for the purpose of acting, so isn't this keyword a waste? The last book "Starting from the Reader" can do this because everyone has read Mysterious and knows that the Reader is Sequence 9. Starting from the Reader is to take the White Tower Path. You create your own Sequence 9 Traveling Merchant Path. If you name it like this, who would know that "Traveling Merchant" is the name of a sequence? Who would know that "beginning" refers to the starting sequence of a path? At least include the word "sequence" I really feel sorry for it. If the name of this book is good, the score will definitely be improved. I hope the author will not be discouraged and doubt himself. Your writing is fine, but you are missing a little bit of market awareness. Let's keep up the good work in the next book.

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I read over a hundred chapters of this book and gave up without understanding what it was about.

I've read the beginning several times, but I just can't stand it, it's confusing and confusing.

Come on

Start with Readers is a very well written book, check this one out

I didn't expect to write 2.8 Million words, or was it just a few hundred orders? The writing is too complex and unclear

Anything over 600 chapters will be considered spicy!