Taoist Priest in the Foggy Capital

I do have quite high standards for you, because your plot at the beginning is really interesting. Later on, the plot became weak due to running around in various places. It was probably because the outline was not well written. After reading this book for such a long time, this book is still very good in the early stages. It seems like I am back to the adventure novels I read in the library when I was a child, where the protagonist goes on adventures around the world. But as an online novel, it has a shortcoming. Your combat power system is too strange. Various novel skills are a bonus and can be matched in various ways. However, each person's ability is not well integrated into a combat power growth system, which gives people a very strange feeling. Nangong and Dongfang Qiang are the reasons why their realm is high and the upper and lower limits of each skill are. I think that your writing skills must have improved if you finished the work without a complete outline and without it being unfinished. Looking forward to your future works.

Although I have seen a lot of steampunk and old-school professional routine themes, changing it to this skin immediately makes it feel different! The advanced Western steam machine alchemist, the innovative and conservative local gang swordsman Honggun, and the Taoist priest who has inherited traditional culture for thousands of years. In this land of neglect, new ideas and old traditions collide with each other! This little taste came right away!

To popularize it: In the past ten years, there have been many Taoist sects in North America, and Longhushan Taoist temples are said to have blossomed in many continents in the United States. Most of the believers... Are not Chinese. There are both black and white.

Steampunk, alchemist, traditional Taoist priest, warrior, vampire, zombie, traditional Hong Kong movie. It can be said that this book is a super suture monster, but the technique is excellent, the writing is very natural, and it has the flavor of past Hong Kong movies. Different ideas collide here. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} Keywords: Taoist priest, steampunk, time travel Rating: ★★★★☆ If you can master hybridization in the later stage, if the story is not watered down, it has the potential to become a god. The rhythm of this book is very good. The fox demon incident at the beginning introduces Taoist priests, alchemists, systems, and punk power systems. I haven't finished watching it yet, I feel like it's going to be more hybrid. If you like watching Hong Kong movies, don't miss this book. The environment and background atmosphere are very Hong Kong movie-like. Chapter 105 has been updated so far, you can take a look at it first

It is written about Hong Kong Island, why is it called Taoist Priest in the Fog City? At first glance, I thought the title of the book was about London.

The beginning of the story had a bit of a steampunk feel to it, but in the end it turned into a gang fight. And every time a villain pops up, no matter whether the protagonist's strength has increased or not, he always falls behind. A Taoist priest does not have many Taoist methods, and all he uses are some miscellaneous skills and "intelligent" kung fu. When I saw the opening chapter, I thought it was about bananas after World War I, but it turned out that there was no war yet. And Kuang Tianyou should be a person after World War II, right? ? ? ? Accepted.

Prosthetic limbs are advised to give up. It is a big taboo for practitioners to have incomplete limbs.

It would be better to change the title of the book to "The Time Travel Between Me and Everyone Is 50-50". There is no system at all and the whole book is confusing.

Just one sentence, the ancient order in the East has been lost, so I have no interest in reading it.

It's not a Hong Kong variety show, it's not cyberpunk, it's not weird, it's not steampunk, it's all borderline, it's nothing like it, no wonder it's so awkward

Metal prosthetics are really ridiculous. They require high-grade energy. They are small in size and have high energy levels. Otherwise, how can they be installed on the body to replace the human body? People can't carry some gasoline and some coal with them, right? The emergence of metal prosthetics must be accompanied by advanced energy technology, either the small fusion battery of future technology, or the magic stone of the magical fairy. Another one, metal prostheses also have high requirements on electronic technology. I just want to know how to conduct signals to drive and make complex movements?

How can I put it? I really want to buy sweet-scented osmanthus and drink it with me, but in the end it's not the same as a young man traveling.

The elephant in the dream is light, the past days are heavy

How to say it? It's not the same after all, young man travels

I don't understand how a small, broken island can have so much shit.

To be fair, what level is the protagonist at now? It seems that every opponent has come and gone.

It seems that the extraordinary elements of this world are separated from ordinary people? Ordinary people only know that there are supernatural elements, but they rarely come into contact with them in daily life? Is it possible to build an underground ecology of extraordinary people under the eyes of ordinary people like the "John Wick" series of movies? Like the Continental Hotel in John Wick, it provides accommodation for both ordinary people and killers. Could there be a hotel chain in the book that would provide a place for Chaofan to stay and even provide safe house rentals? There are also scavengers who are specially designed to clean up Chaofan's mess. They can pretend to be a cleaning company on the surface. A logistics company specializing in transporting extraordinary items. A clinic for the treatment of paranormal related injuries and illnesses. A black market selling extraordinary items. Construction teams contracted and constructed for extraordinary related facilities. Blacksmith shop, gun shop, and tailor shop that provide customization of extraordinary weapons and armor. Specific example: The subway construction team not only digs the subway, but also lays magic circuits. If necessary, the subway line can be activated as a giant magic circle. The sewer pipes in the city need to be cleaned regularly. People never know what supernatural monsters may be hiding in them. Underground air raid shelters are actually the front line guarding the gateway to hell. The top floor of the tallest building is actually the office of Heaven on Earth. The Botanical Garden is the secret stronghold of the elves in the city, and the Central Park has actually been entrusted to the elves for management. The radio station can broadcast spells throughout the city when necessary to suppress or enhance certain supernatural phenomena. Some gas lamps are engraved with a magic circle, which can activate a special light to provide protection in emergencies. Steam pipes are connected under some mailboxes, which can quickly provide some small and medium-sized supplies and equipment to the field team. The bottom of some manhole covers is not actually sewers, but transportation pipelines to facilitate people to quickly reach their destinations. Some shops in the city are also disguised safe houses or strongholds that can provide shelter and material and medical support.

Zombie

Changing lenses is too abrupt. Writing a novel is not a storyboard, which is too unfriendly to people who listen to novels. The content has a Hong Kong style comic flavor. And it's too petty.

You are already a Western punk, do you still talk about destiny? A bunch of people going to hunt down a zombie king without risking their lives or winnings? If the sky falls, there will be no tall people? What about the government?

After reading dozens of chapters,,, the protagonist's strength has not changed at all,,,,

Intelligent push power? Or who recommended it?

Logically speaking, your story should revolve around the alternation of old and new and the collision of things. But I see that now I feel that steampunk is gradually being abandoned by you. The development of the story is becoming more and more like a Taoist priest catching monsters And the character image is too one-sided In order to highlight Uncle Ming, he directly gave his surname Mao Although this allows readers to know that he is Lin Zhengying's replacement, it also lacks the charm of the character himself, and he also likes to add a large number of various jokes or various movie characters in the story. Not only does it not add color to the story, but it will make people feel bored or disgusted. The summary is that there are too many things I want to write but I don't have the strength. As a result, the story starts to become a little fragmented.

Let me go, this book is not finished yet?

The protagonist will always get into all kinds of troubles and fight with various people. HK's vigilante Bateman in the Fog City

No. 1 Refining

I just read Chapter 100, but I haven't seen the main plot. I feel like there is no system, which makes it less enjoyable to watch.

The author writes well, keep up the good work!

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

All three monthly votes are for you. Brother, the author, is taking over and waiting for your new book.