I Handed over the World of Immortality to the State

Recommendation: The writer Ye Henshui has several million-word works. This book inherits the author's original writing style and still develops the theme of fairy tales. This book is newly opened and can be consumed with confidence. When I first read this book, I found that the pace of the book was slow, but it did not affect the viewing experience. In the author's book, an alchemist who was struggling at the bottom lost his name due to a reckless incident, and his identity was replaced by the protagonist who traveled through time! But for a person like the protagonist with extremely poor qualifications, no resources, and even a simple person, traveling to the world of immortality that eats human "meat" and eats human "bones" is not an adventure, but a hell! Therefore, after discovering the secret of what he was wearing, the protagonist turned over the secret to the government without hesitation and obtained protection! Although the plot is different from the one described in Ordinary Cultivation Shuangwen, the author's long-flowing writing style describes all the backgrounds in an extremely concise writing style, revealing to readers the current state of the earth. "Transcendents everywhere are constantly awakening, and how to organize and live in harmony with them is a major problem." Although it is similar to the theme of extraordinary recovery in many works, the author's deliberate arrangement and smooth writing style make the plot arrangement slightly compact, grasp the beginning and transition of the story well, and organically combine the various plots to form a complete story system, making it very "refreshing" for readers to read. At the same time, the author's protagonist's image is very three-dimensional, and the main character is a "legged" character! Author: Ye Henshui Status: Serialization, 120,000 words Tags: Xianxia, ​​alien world, cross-travel Recommendation index: ★★★★★ Book recommendation in one sentence: When you dedicate an alien world to the country, you can do whatever you want! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Let me complain, the mentality of the protagonist has not changed at all, and the perverted mind of the ancestors of the immortal world has not been written. In terms of intrigues, modern people are more knowledgeable than the ancients. Due to the relaxed atmosphere of modern society, if there is no in-depth study of ideological and political affairs, they are even worse than the ancients in intrigues. Now in the world of immortals, the ancestors are alive After so many years, my own experience is enough to crush most modern people, and it is impossible for my ancestor to suddenly fall in love with someone who is far behind. When I saw this, I almost thought I was watching some female channel. The lifespan is so different. When you became an immortal, my grandfather didn't even have sperm. Then you crossed the world to marry my bitch female channel. You are older than my grandfather. Finally, I don't understand why the protagonist dares to raise a hostile humanoid cloud bomb who has lost his memory but can recall it at any time as his daughter. Does he still think that the world of immortality is a modern society? She wants to kill you, but you raise her as your daughter. This relationship is too explosive for me. The protagonist also frantically leaks modern information to him, and the people in the surrounding state departments don't care. This is too much of a gamble! That author, you can swap the genders of the characters and look at the plot, which can help avoid some logical flaws. Finally, I hope that the author's writing skills will get better and better, and this novel will become more and more popular. Yours sincerely

I decided to give up after reading the penultimate chapter. It is not a big problem to hand it over to the state, but there are a lot of private goods that the author has no idea about. . . The military is loyal to individuals and puts the interests of the clan first in everything. . .

In fact, if the protagonist has no other cheats, turning it over to the country is the best choice. However, the problem is that once handed over to the country, he will inevitably face a lot of intrigues and the like, and the role and rights of the protagonist will inevitably be diluted and restricted, which will lead to poisonous points and fewer fun points. No solution.

Many people's arguments for defending the content are actually untenable, because the real world has various resources and talents that the protagonist can obtain directly. The reality is the protagonist's back garden, and there is no need to hand over anything. Everyone should understand the unique and extraordinary gold content in the world, right? You should understand that cultivating immortals involves spiritual spells or talismans such as charm and hypnosis, right? Only a few people need to be controlled, or even just one person. Of course, such a three-dimensional view of behavior is indeed not very correct, and maybe the book will be gone. So when this book touches on the country, I don't like it because it has too many flaws.

As for this book, I didn't click in to read it. When I saw the introduction and title, I planned to withdraw it. But I saw that the comment area was very noisy, so I clicked on the comments and read it. From what the comments said, I felt that this book should be very popular. I wanted to see if the author was a new author, but it turned out to be Ye Henshui, 6. I can't say whether this kind of subject matter is good or not, because I personally hate this kind of subject matter very much, and I can't make an objective evaluation. But this kind of subject matter is very difficult to write about, so why do I have to write about this kind of subject matter? It's thankless. I read in the comment section that this book is a denigration of immortality and praise of the present. I don't know if it's true or not, but if it's true as the comments say, then this book is indeed a great book. Everyone has different subjective feelings and concepts about technology and cultivating immortality. This is common when reading online articles, because technology is around us, and people often don't care about the things they own. Cultivation of immortality is a very fantasy thing. If you develop yourself, you can live in the air every second. In terms of subjective feelings, cultivating immortality is a head above technology, or even far more than one head. It is very difficult to reconcile things like cultivating immortality and technology. Unless it is scientific cultivating immortality, which is the subject matter of this book, it cannot be said that it is completely impossible to write, but it is indeed very difficult to write. If someone is not in the online literary circle and someone tells me that technology is more powerful than cultivating immortality, I will definitely criticize it. Similarly, some people say that cultivating immortality is more powerful than technology, and I will complain too. But I have to say that when reading novels, the concept of cultivating immortality and the concept of science and technology are not at the same level, at least in my mind. The concept of cultivating immortality is high-end, and technology is ordinary. Internet literature has been developed for 20 to 30 years, and the mainstream has always been personal power. It can be seen that in the eyes of the public, in fact, Personal power is much higher than technology. Even technology can also have things that can be used on oneself to produce power, such as various potions. However, people are like this and tend to admire ethereal things more, because people tend to be very obsessed with illusory things. So when it comes to this kind of subject matter, whether you write about the world of cultivating immortals that is lower than the world of science and technology, that is, the real world, or whether the two are equal, it is not flattering. Everyone places a high value on the level of cultivating immortals, and the real world is an ordinary level, and it is not a science fiction world. Even if you write about the world of science fiction, the future world is higher than the world of cultivating immortals, or is equal to the world of cultivating immortals. In the final analysis, this kind of subject matter is really unpleasant, really really unpleasant. Of course, it can also attract a small number of people. As I said before, whether in the Internet literary circle or outside the Internet literary circle, there will be many people who boast that cultivating immortals is higher than technology. Although I am not to the point of hating cultivating immortals, because cultivating immortals covers too many things, but some people are different, and some People will definitely hate it, so they want to see a worldview in which technology is higher than cultivating immortals, or equal to cultivating immortals. In addition, there are a small number of curious readers. If it is well written, it will actually have some achievements, but judging from the comments in the comment area, this book cannot do what I said.

It feels really short and weak, so the country sends a female secretary to take over the work. At least there are Taoist priests in the army who have to hand it over to you, and you have to sign a confidentiality agreement and secretly send you to the research institute. As a result, every time in the big villa, a female secretary is asked to check your body and mental activities with you. At one time, he said that the cultivation method of cultivating immortals strengthens the foundation and strengthens the body. At the next time, he said that the cultivator is weak, and then the cultivation system is also chaotic. The creativity is very good, and the writing can only give 1 point.

I have a question. If someone on the protagonist's side is soul-searched by a demon sect disciple and discovers that there is a world full of mortals. This disciple reports it to the sect's God-Transforming Ancestor. The God-Transforming Ancestor personally comes to arrest people, controls the protagonist, and then comes to our world. Will the 8 billion people on earth become brothers together in the soul banner?

Are mobile phones reasonable in the world of immortality? Mobile phone signals rely on satellite transmission, unless it is direct end-to-end communication via walkie-talkie. There are no satellites in the world of immortality, so you still can't use mobile phones. If the world of cultivating immortals can still borrow WeChat from the real world, then it means that the real world can directly receive the electromagnetic signals from the world of cultivating immortals. There is no need for the protagonist to keep an eye on you every day when it comes to chatting. The official will directly send a team to help you...

The biggest bug in this book is that in the protagonist's overworld, the best people in all fields in the country come to help the protagonist with suggestions. Various plans are hyped up, but the reality is like a few elementary school students discussing a new game. If the country in the overworld relied on these people, it would have disappeared long ago. In reality, the one who has achieved a little bit is not a human being. The one who takes one step and thinks ten steps away is not like the first villain. The protagonist has traveled through time for more than a month and shows the video to this group of people every day, and they have already made it clear that they are hostile. After giving more advice, he actually refuses to run or hide and wait for others to come. And the workshop owner discussed three solutions overnight. The first was to buy a storage bag to bring real weapons to hard steel, the second was to expose the workshop owner's magic cultivator, and the third was to expose that he could practice elixirs without erysipelas. Is this what the most powerful group of people in the country came up with after a night of discussion? It's better to just go to a big city or a big sect and spread the news that the boss is a demon cultivator and is going to hunt you down. After everyone in the neighborhood knows about this, you will be safe no matter whether the other party comes to protect you or not.

The title of the book is destined to be a hit. If such a big golden finger can't mix between the two worlds, the protagonist must be such a loser.

I felt a little loose at the beginning of the chapter, especially the chapters about the pig's trotter elixir. What are your thoughts on the Mahayana period? ? Can't micro-control a fire of several thousand degrees? ? Really, if the author wants to write a subject that intersects with the real world, some settings really cannot be about cultivating immortals and promoting technology. Technology represents a horizontal quantity. It rises very slowly and is difficult to cross levels in one step.

I feel that establishing a sect in reality is a failure. What do you want to do by establishing a small group? Are you trying to exclude anyone? Those who have not benefited will have a ready reason to beat you.

I tolerated various bugs, but at first the spiritual roots were intermediate fire spiritual roots and low-level water spiritual roots. Later, they directly became high-grade fire spiritual roots and mid-grade water spiritual roots. . .

There is also the extraordinary in reality. . . This is not necessary, right?

Wow😯, someone is challenging this subject again, it's really rare and really brave! So far, no one has written well on this subject. After all, there are too many sensitive topics and too many knowledge points are required. What needs to be dealt with is roughly: 1. National reaction. It can't be unresponsive, it can't be too mentally retarded, and it can't be written too deeply. This scale is difficult to grasp, otherwise 404 will not be far away. Second, the setting of the world of cultivating immortals. Is it the same universe or another universe? Is aura particles or pure energy? Are living things composed of atoms, protons, neutrons, etc., Or do they appear to have no cells like the mythical Nuwa created humans? The applicability of physical laws... 3. The way and scope of the connection between the two worlds. Is it anytime and anywhere or a fixed place, how big is the entrance, how to deal with the incoming and outgoing viruses, handling of incoming and outgoing goods and people... ... This subject seems to be writing about one subject, but in fact there are many things that need to be paid attention to. It is equivalent to having a basic grasp of the three subjects of science, immortality, and reality. Otherwise, after writing it, I will look at it and think, wow, there are a lot of bugs, and it will be difficult to clean them. A few bad chapters will be poisoned to death, and a few dozen good chapters will be unbearable. Those who are not very logical, don't like to set things up, and don't like to look up information, really don't write.

Great power in cultivating immortals. He would like a girl who eats, drinks, and poops and smells like shit. I don't like the fairy couple who really don't need to eat, drink or have sex. It's like a Fortune 500 CEO liking a female beggar on the side of the road who hasn't bathed for N years. The five senses of immortal cultivators are terrifyingly sharp.

Why can't the country be handed over to the world of immortality?

If it were an ordinary world, and the protagonist developed a mind-controlling technique and slowly developed it, he would be able to unify the country 😰. Mind control is basically unsolvable

Let me just ask, is it wrong to be patriotic? !

As far as I know, Wei Zhenfang of Shandong Province once picked up a large diamond worth 1 billion. People kept coming and finally handed it over, but it was lost by some people. Ms. Wei is still living in the countryside or living a simple life, and there are many such incidents. For example, she has to hand in the exam papers for the top prize in the family heirloom, and the benefits are hundreds to thousands of dollars and a banner. So author, why do you think that after you hand it in, in addition to the banner, you will be allowed to participate and "buy shares"?

I can't stand it anymore. Mahayana monks can't maintain temperature control for several hours. Low-level spiritual plant seeds can grow without spiritual energy. When they grow, they can also release spiritual energy. It's poisonous.

The villain wanted something from the protagonist, but was beaten to death. Suddenly, a villain's son was parachuted in (not mentioned at all in the previous article). Then the villain's son held a grudge and lurked, waiting for revenge. The routine is too old and really bad

If you don't understand, just ask, how can I hand it over to the state? What steps are needed?

The news that a person can survive for a while after his lower body is cut off is not an immediate death. I think the monks were hit by the fireball spell in a fight [it's like being hit by a grenade and not dying. Of course, during the Qi training period, a spell with no power can deter ancient mortal heavy-armored soldiers]. Many settings are to take an elixir and meditate for a few hours to stabilize the injury. So it was so senseless to see Zhuji being shot to death with a gun. My understanding is that if Zhuji has the time and resources, he would be on the same level as Captain America just from training alone.

The author's layout is a bit too small, you might as well be bolder

What, what, what? What are you writing about?

There is a cp stone hammer, and those who are focused but have no cp can escape.

Book recommendation: Rebirth of Yue Buqun, revitalization of the Huashan Sect

Come on, even though I don't read it, I like to come over and enjoy the breeze, watching the growing seedlings from Chapter 10 onwards.