From the Revival of Spiritual Energy to the End of the Dharma Era

Talk to the author! ! Can you focus on the plot of the story? How can you be so good with a girl? It's a great subject! I'm really looking forward to it, but now the plot is not in the book (personally, I'm still reading it, it's a bit toxic)

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words The protagonist has a plug-in that can travel back and forth between the Age of Ending Dharma and the modern era of spiritual energy recovery. In modern times, since the spiritual energy recovery has just occurred, various training methods are still relatively rudimentary. In the Age of Ending Dharma, there are methods of cultivating immortals that have been accumulated for many years, but the spiritual energy has become thin. Therefore, the two sides are directly complementary, looking for the exercises needed by the modern era from the Dharma Ending Age, and providing the heavenly materials and earthly treasures needed by the Dharma Ending Age from the modern era. My favorite character is Lei Zun. He has been brilliant all his life and has shed blood and sweat to protect his homeland. Just this once, not for his homeland or the people, but for himself. But there are some mistakes that cannot be made even once. He tried to pretend and deceive, but after he truly violated his conscience, he found it boring and heartbroken. In the end, he paid his life for this mistake. The merits and demerits cannot be offset. We admire this hero, but we also judge this sinner. 'Everyone in the city is pointing at you to save their lives, but you are old, dead, and can't hold on anymore...' From the beginning to around 40%, I felt that the protagonist was a bit annoying, but it didn't go beyond the limit in my heart. I always thought why wasn't this place more kind, or why wasn't this place more decisive, but looking back, I felt that this is what an ordinary person who is ordinary and not very smart should be like. The whole plot has been tasteless and I want to give up, but why not watch it a little more to see what new tricks will come next? Maybe there will be some unusual changes in the next chapter? Maybe in a few chapters the protagonist will be able to show his qualities for Liusu to see, and maybe Liusu will remember what else about the protagonist has been attracting her. Just like this, I watched 50%, and found that the protagonist began to teach skills in reality, prepare to establish a sect, and popularize immortality. However, I felt that the protagonist began to change. The protagonist was no longer an ordinary little person. The protagonist became stronger and no longer had to be controlled by anyone. Even Liusu was no longer an opponent. But I suddenly felt tired of this protagonist. Then the female characters all posted this, which seemed a bit uncomfortable. First of all, forget about the two younger sisters. Liu Xiaomeng has been getting along with each other since they were ordinary people. Liu Qingyan has lost her memory and has a bonus of true energy. It is understandable that she likes her The next Saint Su Ho Qing's breakthrough was too easy at first, and she transformed directly into the type of little maid who is obsessed with her all the time. Of course, it can be explained that her life is given to the protagonist, and of course she can only actively sacrifice herself, but it still feels that this is too unlike the sophisticated type of the Demon Sect Saint who understands the world. Elder sister Yao Jinxin changed silently. Master Yun Zhiqing is probably the same type. I can only say that it is okay. Lisu and the protagonist have always been at odds with each other, and it is getting more and more uncomfortable. I don't know whether to call the protagonist stupid or to say that Liusu is too reserved. He keeps playing the trick that everyone thinks you are a couple, but you don't think you are a couple in your heart, but just ordinary friends of the opposite sex who know each other and cherish each other. It really feels like a pretentious thing. Finally, there is the empress Qing Yi. Like the saint, she has no respect for her role as emperor. She fell in love instantly and then behaved like a little girl in love. Maybe it can be explained that she cut off her own identity. Being an empress is too tiring. Of course she has to be happy when she can be an ordinary person. The instant collapse and the disappearance of the empress' demeanor make people feel that falling in love is terrible, and they don't want to waste themselves like this. So it stopped at 50% in the end. To sum up, the exchange of things back and forth was a bit interesting, but there were really not too many shining points. What supported me in seeing the middle was probably the plot of Lei Zun and wanting to wait for Tassel to stop being awkward, but when I finally waited, I felt that it was almost done, so I stopped here.

The author's writing style is not only good, but I think it is excellent. I am really not good at it. My writing skills are also an example for beginners like us to learn from. Personally, I feel that the writing and writing skills alone are at the level of a god. But the author I talked about later was definitely not happy. But I just don't know whether this three-time time traveler who is angry and sad about his misfortune is what the author wants to embody, or whether the author thinks that all time travellers are of this level. He said that after traveling through several worlds, he understands the importance of power better than anyone else, and then he stupidly planned to wait for two months. Everyone who has played the game knows that the fastest time to die is the skill expiration date. I almost knelt when I went back and ran back to learn Taoism in dejection. The more I looked at it, the more I wondered: Why did you go there earlier? Even if you can't learn Taoism, learning some boxing and kicks from Uncle Li will dirty your hands in cultivating immortals. Is the second world a peaceful world? Isn't it clear that the protagonist has no idea? Personally, I feel that I suppressed enough in the early stage and my mood has been cultivated. In a small wave of pressure, it is unnecessary to give levels but not skills. Readers feel unhappy, thinking that after all the hardships, there is still a hurdle. I don't know about other websites. Books that are popular in Qidian will never have a protagonist who cares about food but not fighting. He is either strong or stubborn, evil-hearted or mean-mouthed. The most important thing is that he knows it in his heart, so that readers can have a sense of expectation and feel that it is feasible for the protagonist to succeed. But this protagonist makes people think that if he succeeds, he is lucky. If it is like that, he will die without knowing how.

Nuclear reactions are the content of particle physics! Nuclear reactions are the content of particle physics! Nuclear reactions are the content of particle physics! As long as Qidian novels talk about physics, there will be poisonous points. It is really disgusting.

This kind of setting of two worlds and one person, coupled with the author's good writing style, has achieved the effect. The plot can proceed stably, and the author's description of the characters' emotions is sufficient, so that the whole story is very smooth. Enthusiasm, I can feel the enthusiasm brought by the author of this book; sincerity, the more sincere the feelings of the characters, the more vivid the colors, the more alive the characters will be; details, some details determine the direction the author takes, which can be said to be the icing on the cake; setting, when the setting logic does not conflict and can be perfectly integrated, and has a sense of novelty that resonates with readers, this is a good book and gives people enough motivation to read it. However, there are also failures. The protagonist's golden finger can travel between two worlds, but the protagonist has not studied his golden finger to maximize his profits, nor has he clearly set a goal. Although this is normal for people, normal people are not lovable. Perhaps the author is arranging a plot that will gradually develop in the future. The advantage is that it can describe more backgrounds of the novel to make the early development of the novel more complete. The disadvantage is that the main line of the novel cannot be connected in time and it will cause disgust. The fact is that smart characters with wisdom are likeable, and stupid and ignorant characters are disgusted. Although the author's protagonist is quite satisfactory, in the context of both worlds, mediocrity is a mistake, even if you just have a mediocre personality. Background of the two worlds: [The world of cultivation has entered the Age of Ending Dharma, and the dispute between evil and evil has never stopped. In the Age of Ending Dharma, all monks have to face a question, that is, whether they are willing to become mediocre, with their spiritual energy exhausted, and the inheritance of thousands of years is about to be broken. Cultivation civilization has entered a retrograde stage, which is more terrifying than destruction. It is like falling from a god to a mortal, losing everything and returning to the most primitive point. Therefore, cultivation civilization can be said to be in a very critical stage of survival. Doing nothing is equivalent to slow death] [The modern world has entered the spiritual recovery. Human beings are no longer the darlings of the world. Monsters and alien races are rampant, thermal weapons are ineffective, and humans can only adapt to the changes in the laws of heaven and earth. Humans can only explore the laws of this strange world from scratch. At this moment, the problem facing humans is even more serious, that is, whether the fire of human civilization can continue. Alien races continue to emerge from the space cracks, and the mutated and evolved monsters grow rapidly. Human lands are plundered, and humans become the food of the beasts. In this troubled world, some people are carrying forward with heavy burdens, shedding blood and constantly making sacrifices just for the survival of the race; some are content with themselves, living happily as ignorant people. Humanity can only fight for one of the ways of heaven. If it fails, it will be the death of a civilization. If it succeeds, it will be the peace and tranquility created by the piles of corpses of countless fathers, just like China, so the situation in the modern world has become urgent. The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility] [No matter what, the protagonist should have a clear goal. Otherwise, what's the use of acquiring this ability? It's like a blind man holding a gun who can't aim the gun even if he knows how to do it. In two lives, the protagonist should be wiser than normal people and understand some truths] [You can relax, no one forces you to be heavy. But don't play dumb, because you are a capable person. [Human beings are scrambling to find a way out of survival. As a human being and an individual, a capable individual, ignorance is the original sin, stupidity is even more sad, and the sadness of a civilization] Summary: I also like the description of daily life. Please describe the protagonist's heart in more detail. I don't want the protagonist to be an ignorant person. Even if he can be relaxed, he cannot know everything.

I think since this cultivation of immortality took thousands of years to be summarized, and the spiritual energy recovery plane only took a few hundred years, then the strength of cultivators at the same level should far exceed that of warriors.

The subject matter is good, but unfortunately the writing is mediocre, and not enough to be unreadable. I read the first twenty chapters, and I didn't feel happy. I didn't see any novel plot or writing methods. Except for the setting, everything else was ordinary...

The free chapters are actually quite well written, including the emotional drama. Objectively speaking, although the setting is not very pleasing, it is at least above the standard. However, by the beginning of Chapter 230, it almost looks like it was written by the same person as the previous content. Forcing parents to demoralize, forcing parents of female classmates to slap in the face, and even forcing rescuers - is it more dangerous for a mother with a slight physical condition who stays in a shelter, or for a father who is working hard on the front line? Forget it when you are weak. Since the author himself said that his mentality is different during the foundation building period, what is the purpose of this wave of keeping a low profile? The most amazing thing is that I asked the warrior to give me a talisman. It was actually a water thunder and fire attack talisman. There was no defensive one at all? Do you really want to save dad's life instead of encouraging him to fight for his life? I won't say much more. The author is quite conciliatory. I just want to remind you at the end that it is illegal to intentionally damage the RMB - you must use RMB as a talisman to tear it. Is it true that you are not afraid of 404?

Generally, authors rely on novel settings to attract popularity. For example, Xiuliao The powerful author relies on excellent plots to attract popularity. For example, Wubai more powerful authors rely on plots and characters to attract popularity. No examples Occasionally there is an author who has been declared a god and relies on plot, characters and settings to attract popularity. Such as unlimited streaming. I think your advantage lies in the character and fans accumulated in the previous books, as well as the few settings with many heroines today. New fans are the most unreliable. They will find fault with you, say you have loopholes in the plot, say your protagonist's actions are unreasonable, and say why you have so many female protagonists who are in the harem. They have stopped reading. Only the old readers have been silently reading without speaking or commenting. After all, there must be a big gap between the number of active people in the comment area and your average number of subscribers. I think your last book, the genuine version of Cultivation to Immortality, was pretty good. At least I kept reading it and didn't throw it away halfway through. This is actually relatively rare. Because many people will feel bored when they write a certain number of words, but when the number of words is less, they feel that the number of words is too small and they don't want to read it. The ending of your last book felt a little anxious. Oh, by the way, I saw that you finished the subscription for the last book and didn't renew it halfway through. I plan to give you more rewards for this book to make up for it. Because I seem to remember that I had no money after it was finished. After talking so much nonsense, I just want to say that you should keep your heart. The readers who support you most will never be swimmers who are only active in the comment area. Rather, they are the purest readers who just read without saying anything. Read less in the comment section. This is definitely not a place to comment on you, but a place to make you doubt your life.

The latest chapter is really too poisonous and too many and too many gaps! 1. This broken prison cage can be broken open with two hammer blows. It is so barren! ? And if it's closed, can't you get a nozzle or spray some refined salt into the hole? Even if you want to capture him alive, just spray him until you can't fight back! 2. You danced and talked for a long time. Time paused when you were talking to each other, right? And you have covered the ground with refined salt within a hundred miles radius? And no one has noticed such a big movement. They have to run away for hundreds of miles and come back again. Can't they escape to the door and come out? Even if the god general in front of him can run over three thousand meters in an instant, he is gifted, right? The other god general can't lag behind to the point where he can't even run at one-tenth of his speed, right? 4. [This is considered to be the poisonous point from the previous point. Later, I felt so uncomfortable that I even vomited it together] It was just a promise, just an empty talk. Who can't promise it? When is it not allowed? It's just a promise, but you can even promise this? It's okay to create other mechanisms or other cutscenes! Didn't you redeem a few mines? Use it! Why don't you save it for frying? When I came here, there was a certain predetermined route. Instead of going directly, there was a hollow cage to trap people, and it was really turn-based, right? You cannot use anything else after using a cage. You cannot set up cannons, shoot guns, use swords, spray medicine, or lock them. If you are trapped in a hollow cage, you can only enter the dialogue session and wait for the opponent's turn to end.

Shushan is not the same. Swordsmanship develops civilization, so what does it mean to talk nonsense? Not even any sword-managing moves

Isn't it possible to learn a technique to hide one's aura or something? If it is exposed like this, how can it be avoided?

You said you didn't like reading the book reviews in the book review section, saying they were too poisonous. Then why don't you set a limit of 500 followers to speak? In the last issue of Sanjiang, there were two new books written in this way. Oh, interesting Wouldn't it be clean after setting it up?

This short and weak author only updated 85,000 words in 17 days, which is not enough to read. Look at the person next door who writes 10,000 words a day. Can you follow my example?

Even if I don't practice swordsmanship or magic in Shushan, I'll be drunk. I don't know what the author is thinking?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Finished Spreading Flowers The author still needs to work hard on details and rigor, and make improvements. The overall direction is good, and the angle is novel.

Alas, it feels like updates are still very slow. Even if you have money, you can't watch it. .

After reading over a hundred chapters, it was really mediocre. Nothing exciting at all! Retired!

I, Founder, just want to live a quiet life.

Writing about the resurrection and the end of the world at the same time is a valuable attempt, but the integration of the two elements is honestly not very good. The entire middle and early stages look like two completely unrelated stories. Maybe the author will successfully merge the two stories in the later stages of the plot, but the integration of elements does not mean that it is successful if it can be rounded out in the end. I hope the author will spend more time on the connection between the two worlds in the early and middle stages.

Just read the free chapter, it's well written

Write well, I like you, but you are not well educated and can't come up with any good ideas. If the writing is good, pursue it, and your mentality must be stable. I really like what you wrote before, keep up the good work!

Fortunately, if you don't listen to me, I'll raise my legs high, ❤

The main character is not named Su, bad review. The protagonist is not named Su Yu, Suning, Su Jing, Su Dong... Negative review +10086.

Most of those who ask the protagonist to hand over the skills are trainees. Why? Because that's what they think in their hearts. The author should make the book free for everyone to read. Why should he charge a fee? We do not rule out students who make selfless contributions, but you have to understand that if you are an opportunity to change the world, how much can a single exercise change? If one bad move destroys you, then there will be nothing. Why wait until you have the strength to control the situation before you try to make changes? It is necessary to know that the wise can help the world, and the poor can only take care of themselves! …

If you choose the options of male protagonist, female protagonist, male supporting role, female supporting role, and protagonist, those female characters will be written as protagonists because they obviously have more roles than supporting roles, but they are not female protagonists, so you can only choose the protagonist... But it does not mean that they are female pig feet.

The first chapter was inspired. I think I should discuss the issue of values. Before this, there is another question: How many men in China can earn savings for their own RV before the age of 30? Suppose a man graduates from college at the age of 24, and is not a 985/211 boss, but just an ordinary undergraduate. During the first three months of internship, the job he can get is up to 3k. This is still limited to the income of an intern in first-tier cities. It is barely enough to survive, but he cannot save money. Okay, congratulations on becoming a regular employee. In the remaining 9 months of this anniversary, you will have a monthly salary of 5k, and you will be able to save 2k every month, and you will save 1.8K in the first year. In the second year, your salary increased because of your increased experience. This year, your monthly income was 6k, and you saved 3k every month, and 3.6K a year. In the third year, your salary increases again, with a monthly income of 8k, but at the same time you want to increase the quality of life. You spend 4k every month and save 4k, which is 4.8K a year. In the fourth year, you get promoted and your salary increases again, with a monthly income of 10,000. At the same time, you need to spend more to meet your quality of life. You save 5k every month and 60,000 a year. In the fifth year, you get another salary increase, earning 1.5K per month, but at the same time you still need to meet a higher quality of life, half of which is used for living, saving 7.5K a month and 9k a year. It's still the same in the 6th year. You raise your salary to 1.8K, spend half the savings, save 9k monthly, and save 10.8K annually Now you are halfway through your thirties, and you have saved a total of 36k. If you want to live in a slightly larger city, you may not be able to afford the down payment of a house, let alone a car and a deposit. The examples I gave are all those that can only be achieved by people who are extremely lucky and have outstanding abilities. Nowadays, many women's values ​​have been brainwashed by the chicken soup of the Internet. Can men marry women only if they have a car, a house and savings? Shouldn't marriage be a mutual affair between two people? A woman can just sit back and enjoy the success, waiting for the man to finish his struggle and have a future with her? No, according to me, for people who think this way, it is not much better to find an uncle than to find a young guy who has just graduated and is new to society, but does an uncle really know how to do it? He and his beloved are working together for the future, sharing the joys and sorrows. Why should he abandon his beloved wife and marry a good-for-nothing girl? Besides giving him a young and beautiful appearance, what else can he get? Marriage is a matter between two people. Houses, cars, and savings are all matters between two people. It is not that one party pays and the other takes. Just say what you feel, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!

Originally, I would never read another novel by this author. Now I still go back and pick it up When I saw Chapter 200, I could say that I had to endure it. is really angry. Just for Liusu's funny reason, he went to Yao and asked her to draw a talisman, and the price was a spiritual elixir? I really can't complain None of the heroines currently portrayed are likable, especially Liusu. What the author has portrayed so far is a selfish and clueless image. It's simply not pleasing! And for such a heroine, the protagonist works very hard just to put in a skill for her to experience. I'm really stupid. Is it different from Fenghuo Opera Princes? I feel really uncomfortable when I see a heroine who doesn't like herself and doesn't like herself doing this! I can't sleep well tonight.

Author, just admit it. The initial setting of your book is good, but you failed to write it 1. The realm settings are confusing. One moment, he is cultivating the third and fourth realms of immortals. He is comparable to a martial artist. One moment, the protagonist practices Qi and kills several martial arts masters. Another moment, the protagonist visualizes a nuclear bomb successfully absorbing the surge of spiritual energy in an entire city. This state is just wandering around while practicing Qi. Use palm thunder and you tell me that you need to regain your breath. One moment, that stinky bitch from Liusu said that she can cut open a seven-story residential building with one knife with all her strength. The next moment, the martial arts masters are fighting and are thrashing about on the ground. They can't even destroy a room. Oh, just say that black dragon python or something. Two people hugging each other tens of meters away weighs ten thousand tons. It's awesome! Why don't you go search and see what the 055 drive looks like and then come back and talk about 10,000 tons? 2. The trading system is confusingly set up, just blatantly showing off things worth Lincheng's value to scare people into favors. The irony is that the protagonist doesn't even dare to trade privately with his face covered, so he is too cowardly. In other words, you can show off, you can give favors, but when it comes to trading, um... You can't? 3. The character setting is not likable. I don't need to tell you what the main female characters are. Everyone who has read the book knows it. 4. The watery plot. I saw that the first time I went to the outside world to find the black dragon python eggs, I was poisoned and died. I worked dozens of chapters just to write such a small plot. Did I work as a nanny all the way just to give that so-called kind and simple Zhang Bufan, who said, "I will use power and money to kill anyone who makes trouble?" In the end, Zhang Bufan, who was lying down and looking for a harmful bodyguard all the way, licked his face and took away a bottle of spiritual energy liquid? Why didn't the protagonist kick him to death when he was kicked out with a so-called full force of dozens of tons to save him? 5. The description of the battle scene is a stretch of the crotch. There is no sense of the picture at all 6. It is not exciting at all. It is amazing that such a good subject can be written so plainly.