After Retreating from the Team, They Chased After Them

"I watched toilet paper from another world at the starting point"

The plot flow is very similar to that of a game about quitting the team next door. However, the reason for quitting the team in that book can be rounded out, such as having a useless job and the male protagonist apparently fishing and reading newspapers every day to lead the team to "crush the team easily and brainlessly". This book is too smart... The auxiliary skills clearly indicate that the future is promising, and the male protagonist also makes a lot of strategic plans to make his face confusing. I can't figure out what the brain circuit of my former teammates is, or a group of them.

The flow of quitting the team is essentially following a mentally retarded dog-licker, but as long as you change the perspective and regard the previous team as a company, it will be much better. The company dismissed you because your salary was high, and then the boss realized that the company couldn't survive without you. And you have already started your own company or moved to a better company

My rating is: Eat the leftovers from the pineapple buns

Am I the only one who thinks this book is great at improving the intelligence of NPCs? After looking at the previous stage, I won't go into details about the reasons for quitting the team. They forced everyone to be blind, or lacked foresight. The protagonist led them through the first ten floors and once achieved a lead. No one in the team found even a little clue about the development of the team. They were all positioned as tool players. The whole town is isolated from the world. Except for the protagonist, no one has a strategic vision. At least I didn't see it in the first 100 chapters. According to the author's description, people of all professions in this town have only one way to fight monsters, swordsman, reckless! Mage, reckless! Nanny, you are reckless! Assistance, Mang! Even if you fail, you say be careful next time. What should you pay attention to? Aren't you still being reckless? Like a fly that keeps hitting the glass and doesn't know how to use its brain. It doesn't matter if one person or some people are like this, but everyone in the town is like this. Is it possible? The major teams know how to enclose territory, know how to protect their own interests, and know how to find people with different professions to form a team, but they don't know the strategic positioning of auxiliary players, so that the protagonist stands out from the crowd. The protagonist is independent in the vast sea of ​​people, but such a special existence was withdrawn from the team at the beginning. Also, how can anyone call themselves a wet nurse? Isn't the nanny talking about teasing? No matter how stupid you are, won't anyone question this statement? Anyway, when I saw the words "I am a wet nurse, you need a wet nurse", I couldn't help but respond. The setting can be outrageous, but the logic must be self-consistent. This is out of respect for the readers and the people in the book!

I spent 100 comments and read the introduction. I came up with 5-6 comics in which the protagonist was kicked out of the team/camp/country, and 4-5 novels. It's okay until the original teammates/people in the same camp/country realize that the difference between the protagonist and the protagonist is different. It depends on the author's performance later, but there are not many good drawings/writings in the future. The one bought by Ab is barely okay. I haven't read this book yet. It's too short. I'll come back after 1 million words.

Doesn't this book involve participation in equipment, treasures, etc.? Why are there only career values? What can I say, it looks weird. Doesn't MMO games require equipment grinding? The stuff I exploded in dungeons only had gold coin experience, and I didn't see the usefulness of the materials.

It doesn't matter if you are very good at practicing skills, but you need to be proficient in two chapters to buy a useless weapon?

I specially ordered it for 100 points, just for evaluation. The writing is overwhelming, and it is still there after 100 chapters. The male protagonist is like a turtle, and the newly recruited teammates have no brains. The author can stop writing if he can't write it. There is no need to keep writing, it will definitely be unfinished anyway 🙄

The writing is quite good, but only the names make me feel disconnected How can any parent name their daughter Bai Gu?

This is the first book about quitting the team that I saw at the starting point. I hope it can be written better than the one above and not be too intellectual 😁

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I don't know much about Congee Game. Congee Game may be very suitable for character setting, but in novels or the real world, this dungeon mode is obviously closer to the mmorpg type. Writing it this way, there is a strange sense of fragmentation. If you know a little bit about mmr, the leader group and the individual wild team often play two different games. Players who pursue first kill and speed pass are very well prepared from the early to the late stages. How to arrange the composition of the team, get the best equipment in hand at the first time, and how to explore the mechanism during the land reclamation period. , How to deal with the mechanism, find the optimal solution or skip class/evil way of playing, how to distribute the loot after the strategy, and arrange the rotation of the players, these are all things that a mature head team commander should master The author's performance here does not seem to be very familiar with the MMO type, which leads to a sense of intellectual decline in the character creation of the entire article.

Looking at the front, I thought it was just a relaxing and happy game about an alien harem. In the middle, I saw a group of people killing dozens of people for meat, which turned into the old dark law cultivating immortality. In a closed town, everyone who dies can be on the news. In the original adventure group, everyone who died can come to the opposite side to ask for a large compensation. But this time, dozens of people die so easily? How come every adventure group can kill so decisively even if they don't even look up when they see you? I can only give up.

The protagonist himself is a waste and cannot be washed away. First of all, Meguo has been a life-saving grace to the protagonist. It was a conflict over a trivial matter, and the protagonist quit the team. Plum Fruit has its faults but not many. Then because of a trivial matter, it is morally untenable for the protagonist to quit the team. It can be said that without Mei Guo, the protagonist would have burped long ago. The second protagonist is useless, and no matter how good the strategy is, he can't even out the absolute gap in strength. It could have been done with 1 point of strength with excellent support, because the protagonist, a loser, had to use 10 points of strength. In higher difficulty dungeons, the so-called strategy for the protagonist is just useless paper.

Holy yet charming, pious yet not pedantic!

Not bad, but unfortunately I feel that I accepted it too quickly. As a deputy leader with actual power, she was excluded but did not act when facing the heroic protagonist. I think she also has a certain responsibility.

"Recommended Copywriting" If you are faced with the appearance of your once kind-hearted savior who is now kidnapped by the desire to win, you are being blamed for mistakes that do not belong to you. So when you look at her as always, but her eyes no longer have the look of dependence and trust that they once had - After you choose to quit the team and regain your freedom, what kind of new journey will you embark on? "Work information" Book title: "After quitting the team, they chased after me" Author: Sapphire Ocean Type: Light novel·Original fantasy Tags: Daily love, quitting the team, Shura field Multiple heroines Number of words: 210,000 words Status: Serial Recommendation index: ★★★☆☆ (3/5) "Brief description of the work" The novel begins with the protagonist Simon in the past Because he was kind-hearted, he saved himself, but now he chose to quit the team under the accusation of captain Mego, who was kidnapped by the desire to win. The story begins with the story of the protagonist Simon, who quits Mego's team and regained his freedom, and gradually became the auxiliary core of the new era, eventually far surpassing his teammates who were once at their peak. "Reason for Recommendation" The novel develops a narrative based on the "Leading Team Flow". The standard process of a "Leading Team Flow" novel is usually that the protagonist who plays an indispensable role in the team is expelled from the team due to the captain's misunderstanding and the instigation of the villain teammate. Without him, the team is immediately difficult to maintain. The protagonist who was dropped from the team found a new world of freedom and set foot on a higher mountain. The narrative structure of the novel adopts a two-line narrative, which is one of the standard routines of "quitting the team" novels. Due to the protagonist's withdrawal from the team, the story is divided into two. The protagonist starts a new life and becomes one of the clues; the former teammates continue their old life and become the other clue. At the end of the story, these two clues will intersect for various reasons. The author has firmly grasped the core point of "I was indifferent to you in the past, but you can't reach me now" expressed in the "Quiting the Team Style" novel, and combined it with the plot shaping of various heroines chasing after each other. The resulting Nikkei style is also particularly attractive to readers, and is suitable for readers who like novels with multiple heroines and Shura field elements. The shortcoming of the novel is that the reason why the protagonist Simon quits the team is not handled delicately enough. However, this is also a common problem in "Quiting Flow" novels. Whether it is animation or novels, if the "Quitting Flow" is used as the core to develop the narrative, the overall sense of pleasure of the work will be in place. At the same time, the processing of details such as the logic of character behavior and the promotion of the storyline will be a little sloppy. I hope the author can pay more attention to the details and present a more complete work to readers. "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like daily romance novels; ❷Readers who like ambiguous novels with multiple female protagonists; ❸Readers who like novels with a heroine who quits the team and chases after her. "Similar Recommendations" ❶"The Villain and Yellow Hair" The shy little yellow duck; ❷"What to do if the brave is kicked out of the team" Beitian Sichen; ❸"After quitting the team, they all regretted it" The pigeon who worked hard but failed. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Let me make a suggestion. The content of the copy is a bit boring. First, there are too many numerical descriptions. I am not interested in the numerical values ​​compiled by the author at all in the novel. The more you write, the better you will be. What I want to see is the cool operation, not the pure numerical competition. The second is that teammates are constantly losing health. What you are writing is not League of Legends. What's the point of showing off as a wild monster with remaining health? Let's speed up this plot quickly, above.

I saw the screenshots in the group, and after seeing a few, I couldn't help but subscribe to them all Warlock Orthodox is in the medical field, right? You, the author, definitely play some tower defense game with four-character tornadoes vs. One-on-one.

The comic is general but not detailed. I was kicked out of the brave team. The basic difference is the profession of the protagonist and the gender of the personnel. Some minor plots are different, such as the reason why the protagonist left the team, the protagonist's contribution to the team, the protagonist's original team also has a dog-licking girl, and the protagonist's original teammates lose the protagonist's support. The main plot can be said to be exactly the same 😰

If possible, change the settings of the news department in this world.        ，，，， And are all the people in this world so peaceful? Are they just stamping their feet in anger when they openly rub salt into other people's wounds and damage the influence of their adventure group? Although I prefer novels with more positive energy, I really don't like this setting.

The pacing feels a bit off later on. Although I know I want to change the map, it is a bit outrageous to say that I want to use a mecha. Isn't it okay to fight monsters in the later world?

This is my first time to tip the author, I hope the author will cheer up 👏

Guess what I saw? A book with a similar name