Dreaming Back to Ancient Times, I Became a Master of Beast Control

But bad reviews, too few updates

It's really stupid. It's been 40 chapters and I haven't published a paper yet. I'm just here to show off when the paper is published. My enthusiasm is gone.

In fact, the core of Two Realms is to use the information gap to pretend to be b. This book is too bland and increasingly boring.

It's like the title, but there are still many problems. The current advantages are that the writing is good, there are not many poisonous points, and the choice of ideas is rarely used by people (in the beast pet flow), but there are also disadvantages. The most intuitive ones at present are that the rhythm is not good, the plot is slow, and there are no high-quality explosive points (in fact, from the current point of view, it can even be said that there are none). And there is another point that is more important. , This is also a thing that often happens in similar novels, because the story chooses two parallel lines, but there is no primary and secondary relationship, and it is difficult for the author to control the number of chapters to narrate. We are currently in a situation where there are many chapters in ancient times and very few in modern times. In fact, this is also the reason for the poor sense of rhythm. Of course, the author can also choose to fill up the update volume, or solve this problem in another way.

This book has entered my bookshelf for the third time. Every time I see you saying nothing and not updating for several days, I will disconnect you from the collection, and then I always see you resume updating from the recommendations. Now I don't have the guts to read the later parts... For the first time, I felt that reading a book is a high-risk thing.

The starting point recommendation position has a follow-up PK system. Whoever has read more books in the same period will be ranked first. New books that have not been followed up will not be recommended. If you like this book, please do not keep it. It is recommended to read the latest chapter every day. Thank you all 😭 In the new book period, especially on Tuesday of each issue, it is very important to read. That is the day of pk. Please everyone must read it. Please

? Eunuch, you didn't even write about publishing the paper and pretending to be slapped in the face 🥵. I'm going to block the author who convinced me.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but now it's only two days and one chapter, and I have to run away at any moment.

Water, the new plot forcibly suppresses the protagonist, only three stars are heard in the inscription, but four stars are not heard. . . . . . If there is really no life left, you can let the protagonist bite the lighter

All pre-orders have been completed... I'm a little panicked after reading everyone's comments. This book won't die as soon as it's written, right? It's quite appetizing...

? Castrated again? Is this it? Huh? Why should I say it again?

The plot progress is too slow. How many chapters have you lost just fighting the Nian beast?

It's gone after April Fool's Day. . Even before the Qingming Festival, there was no fragrance. .

Author, if you want the eunuchs to be separated from each other as soon as possible, I am already satisfied with seeing the mantis beast slap them in the face.

No matter how good the subject matter is, it will become useless if it is not updated properly.

Brother, please write quickly. People who imitate you have started to imitate you 🥺

Is there no one else except Qingquan in Qidian. Com? 2333 On the contrary, I was able to read several books on Tomato. The author of this book has the ability to be the person behind Qingquan, but it just depends on whether he can grasp the plot. Anyway, I think it is a bit lacking and the rest of the book will be very long. I probably won't read it, but it does not prevent the quality from being good, but I don't have that much time. In one year, will you guys come and kick me?

The pace of the author's book is so slow, and there is no tension so far. The original three stars of Baymax are still three stars, and the second sea of ​​consciousness has been opened, but there is no trace of the second school. The paper on Mantis is even more fussy and has not been completed until now. There are a lot of foreshadowings, but I don't know when they will be recovered. After looking at more than seventy pictures, it seems that the protagonist has accomplished nothing except helping the ancient people to eliminate evil spirits. . .

I just want to know what effect your writing of this gift at the beginning has, besides dissuading a large number of readers?

Why are there so many updates in the past two days? Don't you want to run away? Brother, I just finished ordering.

Brother, why was there no update yesterday? I need to write a request for leave if I have something to do. It's so scary that it suddenly stops updating.

In fact, even if the soul travels in a dream, it is interesting because of the risk and excitement... It is boring to be too invincible. In fact, you can speed up the pretense. The timeline in the dream is different

It's completely cool, so you shouldn't have expectations. It feels uncomfortable now.

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I can't help it. Who told me to do this?

So is the heroine the protagonist, Dabai, or the supporting actress?

Updated, I thought they wouldn't follow it

Is it different? Come on, write well. The signs are good now

Are you still updating? I thought you were a eunuch?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.