Immortal Qin: Starting with The Legend of Qin

Last month's royalties came out, 484 yuan. I did some calculations and came up with a general result, which I'll share with friends who want to write a book. If you write 4,000 words per day, you'll receive 8 yuan per day if the average readership is 100; if the average readership is 1,000, you'll receive 80 yuan per day. For new writers, it's best to work part-time, otherwise they'll starve. Only after they become popular should they consider working full-time!

Having read up to chapter 169, I personally feel that the author was wrong to start with Qin Shi Huang. Qin Shi Huang had many beautiful women, and each type had its fans. The protagonist's character was also evolving into a decisive and ruthless one, so killing one beautiful woman would cause a drop in popularity, and killing another would cause another drop.

I completely don't understand this kind of time travel. He has a cheat system, is almost invincible, and yet he's someone else's lackey. Ying Zheng? So what if he's Ying Zheng?

I've read 90 chapters. At first, I thought it was well-written and quite original, but the more I read, the more boring it became. Also, the main character's personality and character development are a bit problematic. He doesn't seem like a human, nor does he seem like an immortal. He gives the impression of having mental issues. This is just my personal feeling. Please don't criticize if you disagree, thank you!

I haven't read the book yet, but I'm curious how you managed to get only two reviews for a book with over a hundred chapters, one of which is your own. That's very discouraging.

After reading a bit, I understand why there are so few comments. Probably too many people complained, and the author either banned or deleted them. Anyway, I read Qin's Moon fanfiction without thinking, so it doesn't affect me. I just don't know from which chapter the protagonist's actual strength begins to increase. His invincibility in the early stages was all due to using gadgets and tricks, which is a bit unappealing for an overpowered, wish-fulfillment story.

Having read over a hundred chapters, here are my thoughts. The protagonist already has a system and can travel between worlds; if he wanted immortality, he could find a way in so many worlds. Why bother with the Xuan Nu's transmission of the method and then sharing it with Qin Shi Huang? It's all unnecessary. These days, in multiverse novels, the protagonist can constantly collect women, but he can't be hindered by anything. Without anticipation, there's no desire to continue reading.

From the moment you started spreading the Dharma to the Japanese... It can only be said that you came with high hopes but left disappointed.

The Amazing Salamander

I've read ten chapters; it's well-written and suits my taste. As long as you're not surrounded by hundreds of thousands of troops, you're invincible; just do whatever you want! 🙂