From Prison Guard in the Celestial Jail to Lord of the Mortal Realm

At the beginning of the first 40 chapters, readers who are not very demanding can still read it. After the 40th chapter, the poison begins, and those who are a little resistant can still read it. After the 80th chapter, it will really poison you. The plot settings that appear later are not only contradictory to the previous ones, but the plot is also outrageous. Death, let's not talk about fighting in a lot of realms. Those who are going through the tribulation are all going through the tribulation in the Tianlao. The promised family has a monopoly. They also say that the Tianlao is so mysterious. It is okay to let a protagonist go through the tribulation in the Tianlao. No one cares about it. No one cares about it. No one cares about who the protagonist is. It's nonsense. They also forcibly wrote the plot to make the protagonist suspicious, and then something outrageous came. Unexpectedly by the high-ranking big shot, a lot of beautiful girls guessed that the protagonist was related to that organization 😁, which shocked me.

He's so mentally retarded that he can compete with Princess Huanzhu

Why is this novel such a mess? The initial goal was to stay alive, but then I found out that I had to be ruthless, and then I had to reach the pinnacle of martial arts, and overthrow the old dynasty and establish a world of great harmony. . . As a result, pig's feet are now related to cell biology and traditional Chinese medicine. At first I wanted to stay away from Zhang Ting, but now I am in love with her again. . . . What the hell is this?

When I saw Chapter 301, I really couldn't stand it. Without a heroine, I can give it a 10. With this heroine, I read it countless times and wanted to give up. If you can't write this kind of heroine, don't write it. And so many people said that the heroine's plot is too speechless, but they just won't change it. Don't you read book reviews?

A few shortcomings: First, what kind of ideal of great harmony do you have in a world of cultivating immortals? That is only suitable for the mortal world! Second, in the world of cultivating immortals, are you going to do research on cell reproduction? Wouldn't it be better to just make a clone! Third, since there is a heavenly tribulation and it is so powerful, you are going through the tribulation in the heavenly prison. Shouldn't the heavenly prison be damaged and then discovered?

The writing is getting better and better, and it tastes right! The only bad thing is that the heroine seems redundant!

The plot progress is a bit too slow, and the profile takes up a lot of space. Will I be able to see the August 15th Demon Slayer this year? 🥺 There are too many chapters on the protagonist's cultivation, from history to principles to the combination of ancient and modern times... I felt my eyes lit up when I first read it. I feel that the author has his own special understanding of history, culture and the human body, but if the protagonist's cultivation process is regarded as a plot... To be honest, it is a bit too boring How the protagonist cultivates, I know Just write about the principles and process of cultivation, each acupuncture point, etc., And discuss it through ancient and modern times, and even demonstrate it ... To be honest, I have read the updates very quickly in the past month, and I have passed through it twice. The main plot is a bit too little. The protagonist's cultivation really cannot be written as a plot, and we can't practice according to it, right? 😅

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This book is actually pretty good, but your sudden sentence in English really embarrassed me to death 😅

I feel like Zhang Ting is a failure, she is so fucked up that she can't stand it any longer.