I Pick Up Attributes in Dreams

It's too weak; it's either martial arts demonstrations or random passersby mocking the audience. Nobody watches the "face-slapping" style anymore.

I'm looked down upon everywhere I go; it's really upsetting and depressing.

It has a strong rural flavor; I wasted my time travel, and my cheat ability was useless.

You need to have a general plan when writing a story. Do you want to go for a slow-burn or fast-paced story? Based on your dream of picking up attributes, it should be a fast-paced story, but you don't seem to know how to write a fast-paced story.

This protagonist gets beaten up everywhere, in his dream world, and in the real world—he gets beaten up all the time.

The style is low-brow, the plot is cobbled together, and I've seen many similar works in other novels; some are even directly copied and pasted. The writing is also poor, just a clichéd leveling-up and monster-slaying formula. The only redeeming quality of the "golden finger" is the combination of collecting attributes in dreams and traditional Chinese medicine—that's all.

The plot is copied from another book, right? The other book is also about brothers who also want to learn martial arts.

I initially found it alright after reading a bit, but the female characters in the previous book were so disgusting, especially one named Zhang Yan, who was utterly repulsive. She was like a piece of rotten apple forced into the reader's mouth, and the comments were full of criticism, yet the author remained unchanged. This book's junior sister seems to be developing similarly disgusting female characters, so I decisively dropped it to minimize my losses.

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Learn from the mistake of the previous "female lead" and write something better. 😁