Lord of Coral Island

Either don't write about economics in detail, or if you're going to write about it, do your research and think it through. A medieval carrack cost over 400 pounds to build and sold for even more. It carried 55 people, and the crew's annual salary ranged from 5 to 65 pounds, from apprentice to captain. At that time, a pound of beef cost 0.05 Pounds. Even then, wages were often deducted.

It looks pretty good! Keep it up, and please don't follow those formulaic novels. There was this Western fantasy novel that was actually quite good; the protagonist was about to encounter extraordinary powers. But the author said he had a serious talk with the editor, who strongly suggested revising the outline and changing the setting.

He deliberately showed off, which resulted in many awkward sentences.

To be honest, the protagonist is too vague. His level, combat power, wealth, and even his divine favor abilities are unclear. Some abilities only appear much later in the story, which feels like a deliberate attempt to fill logical gaps. They deliberately leave things unclear, and when a loophole appears, they come up with a new setting to fix it.

If you find any problematic points, please point them out at the end of the paragraph. I will reply and explain them one by one. If I can't explain them, I will revise the text. If I can't revise them, then either you or I have a problem; one of us has to be at fault.

Can you please stop constantly criticizing your system or your cheats? Otherwise, I'm not writing anymore, I'm not writing cheats anymore. Good grief, you want to use it and then criticize it, it's giving me a headache. It feels like working for someone whose boss both criticizes and demands your service, and you don't even pay them. How shameless is that, and the most shameless kind at that? It's disgusting.

Alright guys, now I can confidently say that there's absolutely nothing wrong with the economic system!

It feels like the conflict and contradictions are being forced. It's understandable that the protagonist isn't a bloodthirsty killer, and it's understandable that the protagonist didn't kill Cameron, who helped him. But why weren't the other three killed, as their exposure would clearly pose a significant danger to the protagonist's identity?

Prices collapsed right from the start. A ship costs 20 gold, and then you tell me that the wages for a dozen or so crew members are 12 gold? That means a single trade trip would need to make at least 50 gold in profit for anyone to even bother sailing. Otherwise, a single accident could bankrupt a captain, and then each person would have to pay 10 gold in compensation—it's ridiculous.

I felt like the author was just narrating, especially in the later chapters, giving me the impression of "rushing to be reborn." Of course, I might be exaggerating a bit, since minor plot points are meant to be concise. But sometimes, excessive conciseness makes it difficult to understand.