Cultivating Immortality in the Primordial World

There is a small world trying to become a great power sooner or later, and insisting on making trouble in the world of immortality. Apart from advancing the old-fashioned plot of your own mind, what good is it?

Personally, I think it's weird to write it this way. The fantasy flow of cultivating immortals basically involves upgrading through maps, practicing qi is practicing qi, and golden elixirs are golden elixirs. At most, there is a hint of a lead, such as getting a high-level skill to wait for subsequent development. It is really rare for the author to directly participate in the plot of Jindan or even Yuanying as the main line of Qi training. Because it is easy to make everyone mentally retarded by writing about it. If someone can crush you to death with one finger, and then rely on this plot line to continue to benefit, it will look very weird. There are already signs of this. I don't know what these golden elixir foundation building and pig's feet are discussing.

Well, how can I put it, the book is okay, the writing is okay, I can still read it, Golden Finger is not bad, and the setting of Tongshen is also good, but it is a pity that the world view is not the type I like, and there is no single skill in cultivation. The writing of a fairy is not as good as the common people in the market, and I don't know what kind of fairy I am. Since there is no hope in the future, why do I still hang out as a lowly servant on the fairy road? However, there are indeed quite a lot of this type of peasant cultivating immortals in recent years, and there are even female cultivators who go out to urinate early in the morning. This kind of writing is generally common in Goudao Liu, but it is not convenient~

This protagonist disgusts me so much. Is this a cuckold lover?

On a side note, I didn't really care that this book was based on "The Road to the Leader of the World of Cultivation". I've also read Wen Chao Gong's novels. But the problem is that you are a cheating person, how can you get into the farming master style by practicing one day and being someone else's golden finger for more than ten or dozens of days? And it's also a top-notch supernatural root! As a result, after practicing for a whole year (including Golden Finger, who practiced in the primitive world for decades), it took him from the fourth level of Qi training to the fifth level of Qi training? Normal people are almost dying of old age! You just copy someone else's novel without checking your own settings, right?

The best book written by this author is Demonic Change of the Earth. I feel that the author can write about the Western worldview instead of the Chinese worldview, otherwise it will be easy to get 404

After reading a few chapters, I felt that everything was too artificial, especially the development of primitive tribes. The protagonist teaches writing for a few days, and a primitive tribe of several hundred people actually learns to use writing. Everyone is a super genius, right? The protagonist is also funny and does not help the primitive tribes at all. If you leave the seeds, the primitive people will automatically cultivate the land? After being taught writing for a few days, primitive people actually learned to use writing! The funniest thing is that the primitive tribe actually kept the red fruit for the protagonist. How did the primitive people know that it was useful to the protagonist? When I find a fruit, I actually don't eat it. I've never eaten it but I know it's a good thing and I want to keep it for the protagonist. Primitive people automatically know what good things are, and then they don't use the good things themselves, but keep them for the protagonist. He is really loyal to a "god" who appears once every few decades and does not really help his tribe. The protagonist is not doing things for the primitive tribe, killing enemies or something like that. Not even some advanced tools. In just a few days, I actually thought about letting primitive tribes learn to write, and they actually learned it. True TM, everything is an arrangement of fate.

Updating to Chapter 178 Let me talk about some of my own opinions. If it is a perfect score, my evaluation can only be four points... 1. The article is not on topic. I would like to ask where is the protagonist "Gou"? Only those who take the initiative to think carefully, judge the situation, and act steadily are called Gou. But I only see the protagonist joining forces vertically and horizontally to strike hard. It can be said that "flowers are blooming, and fire is cooking oil." He has earned a foundation, but it is like the leader has lost his job. Where is "Gou"? Where is the positioning of the "original world" again? So far, the article has largely described the story of the main world. It seems that the original world is only used for stone monkeys, incense, and precious materials. There is also the hidden worry of being taken away by others, and the location is unclear. 2. The protagonist has an unlikable personality. When I read the author's other books, I always feel that the supporting characters are more brilliantly written than the protagonists. The protagonist of this book neither has the vigor of a young man nor the understanding of the world of an old man, nor does he have the Taoism of a cultivator. He gives people the impression of a middle-aged greasy man who is good at calculations! It doesn't matter that the protagonist has shortcomings, but these shortcomings should make him more real and immersive, rather than making people feel bored. The protagonist in this book is more like an ordinary person, with some calculations and cleverness, but he is not wise or completely selfish, and he has some conscience. But the author's description makes people feel even more awkward when reading. They feel that the protagonist is very hypocritical, and they don't have a sense of empathy or the desire to read on. In fact, this situation of the author has been reflected in the previous work "Earth". "This is Really Not the Fourth Natural Disaster" has better avoided this problem. Now it is even more serious, which is really regrettable. Thirdly, the protagonist has shortcomings. It would be good if he could improve from time to time. But even if the protagonist himself says that he wants to change, where has his character changed? It's always in a state of neither getting better nor getting worse, and it hasn't changed. It's embarrassing to watch! 3. The plot is scattered and the setting is not attractive. The narrative is unclear and I don't know what the author is going to say. What role does it play in promoting the development of the plot? It feels like it's going here and there, with no follow-up. Of course, it may be a foreshadowing that will only appear later. For example, "stealing babies", I still don't quite understand what it means? What is the role of each of the four women? And from the current point of view, the author's setting is more like having a double door, and the various secrets of primitive society have not yet been fully reflected. The overall feeling is specious, and the more I look at it, the more confused it becomes. I hope the author has an overall plan and can change it later to show a more colorful world.

You dare to suck Mr. Wenzhao, you are awesome too

Watching the latest, the plot is getting more and more boring. The wilderness world should be a very important special point that distinguishes this book from the master's path of cultivation, but as it goes on, it becomes more and more similar to the master's path, and has almost nothing to do with the wilderness. Moreover, the plot of the novel is mainly controlled by the abusive protagonist. The name of the book sounds like Shuangwen, but in fact it is not Shuangwen at all.