From Streamer to Supreme God

In fact, no matter what I say, the author's writing style is above the standard. Even if I am a novice, I cannot question this. The writing is for sure, but the plot is disgusting. Two books in which a god is the protagonist can turn the protagonist into a supporting character. Then it's not ruthless enough, not ruthless enough. As for writing about a god as the protagonist, the author did not do a good job. Don't keep talking about truth, goodness and beauty, and talk about being unfilial without parents. But no matter how much he says, this is a novel, and it is still a commercial novel. It has a stupid sister and too many irrelevant plots, which makes it not feel immersive. I believe that many readers want to strangle the sister in these two books. It is really a very poisonous description. If you want good grades, you can't just be satisfied with yourself. In today's commercial novels, no matter what category, the protagonists are rarely upright. For resources, for opportunities, for the possible avenue, they have all made sacrifices. Maybe it's killing, maybe it's fate, maybe it's the plot that advances and slowly adjusts. But there is no popular book where the protagonist will not kill when he still kills, and then forcefully enter the plot. I can give examples, such as Holy Ruins, The Lord of the World, Lord Snow Eagle, and even the currently serialized My Little People, Happy Dream Road, etc., There are a lot of examples. One book is not well written, the next one is improved, but readers don't like it, and then collapses in the later period. The next one is popular during the public period, but subscriptions are no longer good. This is a vicious cycle, and it is not a good thing for an author with commercial intentions. If you want to get good grades, you must write mainstream novels. No matter what subject matter you choose, the protagonist must have an IQ, the responsibility and tolerance of the protagonist, the awareness and sacrifice of the protagonist, and the loneliness and bloodshed in the pursuit of the road. Nowadays, the descriptions of women who are stallions, or who are unable to walk when they see beautiful women, who want to start a harem, or who are willing to cause trouble for themselves, have disgusted too many readers, especially the pampered younger sister and the inexplicable classmates (companions, parents, etc.). These plots are poisonous points.

Regarding author Jun Shao's decision to mention his sister, I learned that author Ji still reads book reviews. However, for some things that are difficult to agree on, such as whether the writing focuses on the first contractor of the protagonist or the advancement of the plot world, to be honest, some people like to watch the former and some prefer to watch the latter. I am of the opinion that as long as the author's plot arrangement is not blunt + interesting + not poisonous, any way I can write it will be fine. As for my sister. . I remember that in the last book (God's Clone), I also had a younger sister who was still going through all sorts of troubles and was extremely poisonous. Thinking about it now, I read most of the book God's Avatar before discarding it. There may be several reasons: ① Regarding the early identity arrangement of the heroine. I remember that she was married to a lazy and rotten man with a child. Although it was later cleared up, I really wanted to give up after watching it. The author, Ji, please give me some warning in advance or tell the truth directly when this happens again. ② Just let in the dragon from the magical world. The protagonist was very stable and planned before. As a result, when we got to this point, we let the dragon in, and then lost our consciousness due to some inexplicable feeling, and the dragon was lost. Then the dragon was nowhere to be found. In the end, it became a climate and almost killed the protagonist (forcibly thrilling is boring). Then the protagonist caught it and released the dragon because of another inexplicable feeling (it seemed to be related to his daughter, leaving her with a rival). It's too forceful and poisonous to me. ③I forgot about the third point, it's probably some kind of exile from another universe. I haven't read the later ones and can't remember them clearly. That's it. I hope the author Ji will work hard and write seriously. The author Ji's dialogue and actions on the country's handling of these matters are really fascinating. However, because these are wonderful and have a lot of words, I might be trying to make up the word count. I suggest the author Ji compress other unnecessary sentences (similar to "They took the elevator to the top floor. The so-called top floor is naturally not the top floor but the highest floor." I forgot which book I read two days ago. I imitated Gu Long and made up the word count at random. It's disgusting.). Refill. The author who is willing to work hard will not remain popular forever.

After reading more than two hundred pictures, I feel that the author is insulting everyone's IQ. After so many assessments, I feel that I have selected a group of sssbbb things that have no independent opinions, like to fight among themselves when encountering difficulties, and are ignorant and selfish.

I'll give you at least 200 recommendation votes every month. Please be more precise.

When that great, nameless and speechless being cast its sights on a certain loser on Earth, and turned his thoughts into reality, he conveniently took away his brain.

The theme is about the anchor, but he doesn't live broadcast seriously. He neglects the basics and builds a main god system, and personally leads the group to show off the plot. Escalate slowly under the rules you set. Your skills are too low. You are developing too slowly.

The novel is very creative, and the author writes it very carefully. It can be seen that the words and sentences have been carefully considered. However, after about fifty chapters, the behavior of the protagonist makes me more and more disgusted. I can't figure out why, so I can only retreat.

If you abandon your sister because of her, you have to write her as a fool, an arrogant and brainless sister. If you don't know how to write about your sister, don't write about her. You can write about a sister who is sensible, obedient, and caring about her brother. You sister is so stupid. Not poisoned by society

It's a nonsensical novel. I can't understand what the author is writing. I was confused as I read it and don't know what the author wants to express.

Good subject matter... Poor writing