I Returned from Hell

I've read over 100 chapters, and I'd like to point out some issues I've noticed. 1. I feel the female lead's infrastructure skills aren't very good. All I know about the base so far is that it's under construction. She hasn't prepared anything needed for the apocalypse, like food, water, military equipment, or research personnel 🤔. And she says she only has three months left.

How should I put it, it feels like a heroine written by a male author. From the beginning of the first chapter, the handling is very inconsistent. There are too few descriptions to support the heroine's extraordinary memory. It is difficult for people to accept the setting of "the heroine knows a lot". Moreover, the reasons and sources of the information are not described.

The synopsis for this book has been revised at least six times, but the results haven't been good. I'm really getting obsessed with the synopsis. In the comments section, more than one reader said they almost missed my book because of my synopsis, and I've seen them all, which makes me even more anxious. But I really can't think of a good one, so I can only start this thread to ask for help.

Dear author, please revise the synopsis; it might deter many readers. If I hadn't found the main text to be excellent and the setting to be outstanding, I probably wouldn't have clicked in.

This book should be categorized as male-oriented; I suggest you revise it.

To be honest, it's a post-apocalyptic story as always, with a tight and concise plot. I wish I could write a million words a day.

Although the author's introduction was a bit rushed, I clicked on it with peace of mind after seeing other readers say it was good. Honestly, it's really well-written; it's just that I was a little scared reading it late at night, hahaha, I didn't dare close my eyes to sleep, hahaha 😨

My thoughts after reading the latest chapter: First, the analysis of human nature is acceptable. Second, there is no Holy Mother or Holy Father. Third, there's no Voldemort plot; judging from the character card's profile of the younger brother, he's also a formidable figure. This is a double concealment technique, which is quite good, and I'm really looking forward to it. Fourth, it is similar to infinite flow. Fifth, Xia Yu is cool!

I felt the story was quite good, and I actually quite liked the female lead's character. Although I didn't really like the part about the younger brother, I thought the rest of the plot was pretty good—recruiting followers and forming a team to overcome challenges. I don't understand why there are so few comments and favorites.

I'm almost at the latest chapter, so let me share my thoughts. Each event is unique, and most of them are particularly amazing. Although the character of the younger brother was written, he really didn't hold the team back. He and his sister were a powerful duo! I love it! Keep up the good work, author! Looking forward to the next installment!