I Have a Deal with the Apocalypse

Today I stayed up late to complain about this novel (｢･ω･)｢"I Have a Deal with the End of the World" In fact, I was attracted to this subject in the beginning, because many apocalyptic modes will be opened up in the later period, which sounds like the book "The End of the World". It's a pity that it seems like ! ! ! For the heroine in the article, I personally don't like or hate it (maybe because I didn't insist on seeing it to the end)|ω). I really feel tired and don't love the male protagonist ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )(He is a policeman! Policeman, author!!! Even if you don't understand the responsibilities of the police, you can't write anything! I don't think the role of the male protagonist is to be a strong and loyal dog protecting the female protagonist, (~￣▽￣)→)) *￣▽￣*)o It should be positioned as 'My dad's name is Li Gang'. There are some scenes where he threatens people in the police station. I can't stand the male protagonist's pretense ☄ฺ(◣д◢)☄ฺ. I really ask the author to watch a police movie! ! ! It is impossible for the police in reality to interrogate like this. You are ruining the image of the people's police. I can't bear this! ! ! (´๑•_•๑) In order to save the heroine, he disregards other ordinary people and would rather sacrifice others than he can to protect the heroine. What kind of positioning is this? There is also a male protagonist who is a captain of a team with special abilities. What does he do in the police station all day long? Is he the king of the mountain? Each department has various territories, okay? ! ! ) The above is what I want to complain about. It is my personal opinion. Others of you can refer to it. After all, everyone has different points and likes. I am not targeting the author. I just think there is a problem with the positioning of the male protagonist. ╭(￣▽￣)╯╧═╧For our readers, you may fall in love with his profession because of the person you describe. Even if you write well, you will unknowingly regard him as a role model and want to grow into a person like him. ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) I just think that the people's police cannot be used to write nonsense. Justice and rights are not meant to serve one person! ! !

Dissuaded by Zhang Rui! Subvert my three views! And a soldier! It's just slandering the military!

Can the author stop saying "XXX said", "XXX said", "XXX said"...? He keeps talking and talking throughout the whole process of listening to the reading. A good book and a good idea are all greatly discounted by these words, which is very frustrating😫😫😫

The plot was good, but the heroine was so disgusting. Why didn't the Holy Mother ascend to heaven when she was at this point... A good article was ruined like this. Give up, give up.

, Why is it so awkward at the beginning?,,,. Excuse me

Female channel? Emmmmmmm I read 2 books which are good. .

I thought it was a good novel, but it turned out. . Female channel, boys have no sense of empathy 😂

I don't think there is a male protagonist in this book (or maybe he hasn't appeared yet)! Zhang Rui is not the male protagonist!

The poison resistance of 200 can't stand up to three chapters 😅 The heroine saved a little girl and almost didn't survive. When she was discharged from the hospital, she took out a sum of money and said, "This is the money you paid in advance." Are you out of your mind? This is an article about a plane merchant, not about saving the heavens! Was your brain damaged by a car? The little girl was still at the age of "Fei Fei Feifei" at first, and the next chapter is "Sister, do you want to be my brother's girlfriend". I... After the little girl's brother saved the little girl, what he wanted to do was not to repay the heroine, but to regret that he had to feed the heroine the medicine he finally got. The heroine saved your sister, right? Three chapters, each of the three characters appears more poisonous than the other, how do you think about this?

The story setting of this book is actually pretty good! But the plot, characters, characters, etc. Are really hard to describe! A group of white lotus, a group of scum, a group of traps are more stupid than a group of people! Abandoned, author, please come on

The female protagonist is so kind that she would not kill even her enemies, and the female protagonist who has repeatedly found trouble to assassinate her naturally chooses to forgive her. The male protagonist is too indecisive towards the female protagonist, and his determination is not as good as the female protagonist's coquettishness. It is impossible to see her wisdom and personality that match her identity. I really like the whole environment setting. I personally think that how this system handles the problem of clerks is a very important point. Although in the article, everyone in my group is absolutely determined, but becoming a clerk is equivalent to knowing the heroine's golden finger and using it to travel across the world and conquer the stars and the sea.

It's too poisonous. The heroine is silly and sweet. I've always been reading romance novels about girls. Then I saw a long post-apocalyptic themed heroine's point of view. The more I read, the more angry I became. . .

The heroine, the Holy Mother, was bullied two or three times before she really fought back. This is a cool article, and it was fun to read, but the more you read, the angrier you became!

I originally wanted to buy the article and continue reading! But the heroine is so idiotic, I really can't stand it! It was clear that the woman had hired a killer to kill someone, yet she was able to put aside her grudge and become friends with that man! ! Please, the heroine saved his sister because he owed the heroine a favor, not because the heroine owed him a favor! ! ! I really can't stand it! ! It makes me very angry!

The author writes about a world of peace and love. Foreign spies who steal our country's secrets must be given human rights and cannot be killed. If the bad guys try to poison the heroine, they can't kill them, they can just lock them up. In short, good people bully them casually. No matter what bad things a bad person does, the most severe punishment is to be locked up, because the most severe punishment in this world is to be locked up!

I can tolerate everything else, but the male protagonist can't bear it. His childhood sweetheart sends a killer to kill the heroine. As a law enforcement officer, the male protagonist refuses to enforce the law and instead asks her to apologize. Later, he also applied for potions to develop supernatural powers for his childhood sweetheart. What's the difference between giving a woman super powers when you realize she's crazy and perverted, and giving a gun to a murderer? The hero's method of helping the heroine's friend deal with her ex-boyfriend is to abuse lynching. As such a high-level law enforcement officer, he can only rely on lynching and intimidation to get things done. He is incompetent and incompetent.

A question suddenly occurred to me. This is a female video book. So the question is, how will the heroine describe her inner activities when she meets a man with sex in the future?

When I saw Chapter 281, I felt quite unhappy. I also read a lot of comments, all of which were talking about the female protagonist, Madonna, and the male protagonist, who was also hard to describe. How to put it, if Zhang Rui is the male protagonist, then what the author may want is the process of the two male and female protagonists with shortcomings slowly changing. The female protagonist was an ordinary person at the beginning, and she was a kind-hearted ordinary person who died to save her child. It's impossible not to feel disgusted with killing. We live in a society governed by the rule of law and we are not yet a privileged class. We certainly don't change our minds that quickly. It only takes 3 or 4 months from getting a small shop. How can we suddenly become decisive in killing and disregarding life? There has to be a growth process. The male protagonist also has shortcomings. He really didn't handle the issue of Lin Siyu well. The sister he grew up with has done something wrong and is habitually defending her. His thoughts and feelings are also changing little by little. It would be unacceptable if he suddenly became indifferent to a sister he grew up with. The male and female protagonists are changing little by little, but it's really a bit frustrating to read a novel that is used to doing things when you don't feel comfortable. Moreover, the author's writing style is not good, the character description is not obvious, and the dialogue feels like a person talking to himself. A successful author must learn to talk to each other. There are a lot of small flaws, but the ideas are pretty good. Go ahead and take a look.

I think this plot can no longer be said to be a novice or something, it is simply Shi Lezhi, okay? The heroine was completely dumbfounded, and she was so sweet that she couldn't even mention it 💀. She felt that all kinds of sexy operations were done without considering the consequences.

I can't stand it anymore, I don't want to buy it, I'm buying a murder to kill, and that's all I need to do is apologize?

Holy Mother? Forget it. The author may be a novice and doesn't even know the rules of the Holy Mother's Wen Biliang.

The writing is so novice. . . That kind of dialogue that is full of silly atmosphere, that kind of habit of repeatedly describing and emphasizing, just reading Chapter 29, I don't know how many times I emphasized whose benefactor the heroine is, and she can't do something, and she says it back and forth. A common problem among novice writers is that they will explain and emphasize every little thing back and forth, for fear that they have not written it clearly. . . Why. . . And the vocabulary is really not enough, a set of adjectives are used repeatedly. . . Strength persuaded me to retreat

A little speechless, hiding her important secret, the heroine feels sorry for the man, is she so self-righteous? It's too hypocritical, and if someone exchanges something for your exotic animal meat, it's an exchange of equal value. You can't feel sorry for others just because you have something better. Why are you so holy?

To be honest, the background of this book is quite attractive to me, but the content and plot of this book are sincere, well, how should I put it? Anyway, it looks boring.

The woman is so strong, her writing skills are so good

The female channel novel ran on the male channel yesterday? You, the author, are great at writing male-channel novels and you write heroines! ! !

Lowers human IQ. Don't ever look at this second-rate person

It was too boring to watch in the early stage, but I felt that the setting was very interesting, but the writing was not exciting enough. There was too much verbal chatter and inner drama. In the middle stage, the development of new planes started to develop and there were not enough pictures to make it unsatisfactory 😒 😒 Also, who went to a mortal place for experience and wrote too many 200 chapters. I skipped them all if I didn't want to read them. It ended too quickly in the later stages. I still want to see her conquer more planes.

What is written in the back, I have been told dozens of times about entering the palace, choosing a concubine, and finding out the murderer. I can't finish dozens of chapters on one thing. I am convinced 😡😡😡

It's a mentally retarded plot. He saved a little girl in a car accident, but he almost died on the spot (but was saved). The girl's brother has such a background, but he doesn't show any money at all? Accepted...