I Became a Bug in a Survival Game

The writing is really not good, some paragraphs are inexplicable, and the character description is very strange. The heroine is really super, super weak, she really needs help every time, and she is inexplicably teased by others, and she doesn't know where the boss is. The introduction is a coming-of-age story, and it's like the third world, and the enemies are all in front of you. , Was blocked in the toilet, the heroine was scared to death, but she could not defeat him, so she remained indifferent, leaving the enemy to run around without taking action secretly, and did not eliminate the enemy until the end of the world, just like forgetting the little villain. The male protagonist also looked so special. She kept the enemy but did not kill him, and would not ask me for help. The male protagonist has been asking the female protagonist if he wants to take her to practice, but the female protagonist refuses every time? ? ? I don't even understand what she is rejecting. In the third world, she has only beaten one corpse, or is it because she bought a divine weapon, otherwise she almost couldn't beat it, and then she stopped fighting? ? ? Are you sick? Is this a coming-of-age story? It's the fourth world, the fourth world. The heroine was teased by a few drunkards as soon as she arrived in the morning. She was almost ready to take action. She just kicked her and ran away. She said she was afraid of being entangled... Okay, let's take it as a reason... But in the afternoon, she was entangled by those drunkards again. She figured out that they were just ordinary drunkards. Still can't beat it. In despair, newcomer! The handsome guy makes a flash appearance and saves her... Hehehe As mentioned before, the points for completing the mission are very low, but the materials are very expensive. The heroine found a space that can bring real things into it, and no one else has it. One second, she said that no one can find it, and the next second, she directly gave it to a person who didn't know the details and just knew the world. Seven days of food? ? ? Everyone must think that there is so much food for 7 days, but as mentioned before, 15 days of food is 450 points. Let me count it as 200 points for 7 days. The last time the heroine completed the task, she only got 17 points. Are the points from 10 worlds given away like this? Even a big boss doesn't have to be so generous. Isn't this obvious that there is a problem? The description of the supporting characters is also not good. Every time the expression is expressed, it is like deliberately pretending to be innocent, just like: Oh, I don't need to, I can protect myself, I don't need these things. Then the heroine gives him all the props to protect him and pity him, and she also says in her heart: Oh, he is so innocent and cute, isn't he? ? ? I don't know if it's foreshadowing or simply bad writing. My best friend also wrote it inexplicably, and the emotions are inexplicably good. Every bite is a treasure, and I'm getting goosebumps.

When I first entered Nightmare Academy, based on the previous two games and two real-life experiences, I personally disliked the character of the heroine. In the first game, she was weak and not calm enough after discovering the secrets on the ship. And buying weapons, why does she feel that she can't use weapons and wound healing potions? In the first game, she was abandoned by others, saw people killing each other, was chased by monsters, and heard about the black and red list. Why did she still feel that she didn't need wound healing potions and weapons? Even if she didn't take the initiative to kill people, she still had to defend against people, and if she needed to attack monsters, was she confident that she could be protected by someone?

To be honest, because I am a newbie, my writing skills may still be lacking. But there are still some cute little ones who like this book, and I feel very happy! ❤️ So thank you very much here! I am willing to support this book and the little cuties who are in charge! ——You guys are really great! 😘 Of course... What I want to say is that the focus is still on the role. I love every character I write. Although they are not perfect, some characters can even be silly. But they are not bad and have their own advantages✨. I can accept everyone's complaints and dissatisfaction, but I can't accept it because the characters don't like to give low scores to the work. Because they are indispensable characters in the work. 💔You don't want to see all Long Aotian-type characters, right? What's the difference between being a master of tricks, being smart and not making mistakes, and being a pig's trotter who uses cheats at full level? ✨👑 I don't know if you have watched One Piece? The characters in it, Usopp and Nami, are not perfect characters. But they are Luffy, the most real and reliable teammates! … So, fairies, your support and ratings are very important to the character, the work, and to me! ❤️❤️ I hope you enjoy the story in this book. And for characters who don't perform well, be a little tolerant. Although they are not perfect, they are important. (❤️😘😘Please!)

The heroine's character is quite to my liking The plot is very coherent and has a lot of imagination The only drawback is that the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists is a bit disturbing to the senses It feels like a cliché romance novel. In fact, I think if it develops into a friendship, the comrades would be very good. Pink Bubble is in a dangerous game world emmmm (It's just my subjective opinion, the author's writing is actually quite good, I hope it gets better!)

The plot is very attractive, and there are no flaws in the whole text. However, the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not at the level of the author's writing. It is like a romance male protagonist written by a primary school chicken. It is both childish and cliched. It's so embarrassing.

I beg the author to write a second part. I heard this book on other platforms and came to see the original author. This book is so good. I beg for a second part!

I feel like the copy didn't attract me... Maybe it's because I watched too many unlimited streams

I like the heroine's character very much. The plot is full of ups and downs, refreshing and exciting. The small world is very novel and not cliché. Except for the description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, it feels a little bit immature.

I actually have a recommendation vote for a female channel! Here you are Looking forward to updates, @negativenegative

The story is logically self-consistent and has no major flaws. However, the rest of the story is too repetitive, so I just skipped to the real-life chapter to make fun of it. . .