My Fake Girlfriend Wants to Become a Real Girlfriend

I want to see the male protagonist get enough favor at the same time and just take money and run away to disappear, so that the female protagonist thinks it is her problem that caused the male protagonist to run away, and then the resentment deepens and blackens, and the responsibility is put on the other female protagonist, and then the other female protagonist does the same, and then the two are sick and tearful. At this time, the male protagonist accidentally takes the initiative, attracting the two women to chase and kill

Seeing that many people don't like Liuli, I'm very confused. The price was four million. If it were $4 million, I would have wanted to raise it as a father. As for the problem of knotted wings, the male protagonist knew it was impossible from the beginning. Anyway, he would be a fool not to take it if he had the money.

Everything else is okay. Those two so-called buddies are really disgusting. The author doesn't really think that good friends can be so disgusting. Either write these two to death. If they die, I will definitely order them all. No matter what you write later, or you can reduce the appearance of these two. I am out of sight and out of mind. I will decide whether to order based on the quality.

Recommended Copywriting If you are reborn in Neon, your family has been in poverty since childhood, your parents left you and went overseas, and your grandfather who took care of you unfortunately passed away. So when the chaebol lady takes out her bank card and asks you to leave your childhood sweetheart, and even pretends to be the lady's boyfriend to help her make plans to attack your childhood sweetheart - Would you choose to be with your childhood sweetheart or the rich lady? Work information Book title: My Fake Girlfriend Wants to Be Really Good Author: I Really Can't Write Knives Type: Light Novel-Daily Love Tag: Daily, Love, Relaxation Status: Serialized (180,000 words) Recommendation Index: ★★★☆☆ Brief Description of the Work The novel mainly tells the story of the protagonist Yuya Minamoto who met the rich lady Ruri Amamiya and asked her to leave her childhood sweetheart Shiina Nao, and asked the protagonist to be her pretend boyfriend to get close to Nao-chan, but the lady finally found out that she fell in love with the protagonist. Reason for Recommendation Everyday romance light novel incorporates a lot of jokes, and the style is relatively relaxed and enjoyable. The plot design is very clever, and you can see the difficult choices made by the rich lady and her childhood sweetheart towards the protagonist. The character creation is also very brilliant. The domineering and powerful rich lady and the childhood sweetheart who are cold on the outside and hot on the inside can get a general impression through simple daily conversations. Looks like there are two heroines? Looking forward to the subsequent development of the story Recommendation Group ①Readers who like daily novels ②Readers who like romance novels ③Readers who like Japanese-style novels Similar Recommendations ①Mung beans are so delicious "My family's love options are not right" ②Magical Lemon Tea "I am in Tokyo, deep in love prison" ③Clouds "Become a Devil and Be a Dead Man" {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}{"TopicId":"876912491929272320","TopicName":"Twenty-Four's Library"}

I just want to see Liuli fall in love with the male protagonist and then confess to Nao that he was lying to her before, and then Nao turns evil and kills the male protagonist, and then imprisons Liuli for the rest of his life, as she wishes!

Can Amamiya Ruri be dumped later? It's disgusting. Tsundere has been withdrawn from the market.

The moral level of the female protagonist and male partner needs to be improved. The eldest lady has a bad impression. Nao is a good match. Without Amamiya's intervention, under normal circumstances, Nao will slowly and naturally be with the male protagonist.

Is this kind of light lily popular now? At first glance, I just thought it was annoying.

The idea is good, but the writing skills are poor and the system is redundant. The focus of this article should be Liuli's psychological transformation, and there is no need for the system at all

Here I come to read science fiction novels again.

I heard that there is a tsundere here, so I will clarify what a real tsundere is, and don't talk about tsundere in everything It is not the tsundere who has retreated from the environment, but the current variant. For example, in the past, when a tsundere gave a gift, she would say that you were pitiful and that no one would like it, but the gift would definitely be given to you, and there was a high probability that only you would have it or yours would be the most special. And if you also prepared a gift, although you might be nagging about it, you would definitely not refuse the gift or say that no one could take it back from her. Moreover, she would definitely keep the gift well. If it was discovered later, she would at most say that it was not rare, but she would still cherish it. Then when we are together, our mouth or expression will show extreme dislike or dislike. But if you don't take the initiative to let go and leave, even if you take the initiative to keep distance, she will stick to you again while talking non-stop, and it will be tighter than before. This is the orthodox tsundere in the past, with arrogance but not too much, more of coquettishness, the kind that even a fool can easily see her feelings But in recent years, the expression of tsundere has become that you suddenly feel embarrassed when giving gifts, and you keep talking down, but in fact The same is true for practical actions. If you give a gift to someone else, or if everyone else has a gift but you don't have one, you will look disgusted when you give the gift. But unlike the previous tsundere, she will really throw it away in front of you, or give it to others, and may not even accept it, and leave directly. Similarly, when we are together, she will also say disgusting words, but unlike before, she will not leave. After saying this, she will most likely turn around and leave. This is the way to express tsundere in recent years. There is no tsundere, only arrogance, Long Aotian's arrogance. Unless you have the ability to read minds, no matter how you look at her, she not only dislikes you, but even hates you. And even if you have the ability to read minds, you won't be with her because of her actual actions, let alone taking the initiative to approach, it would be good if she doesn't take the initiative to stay away. And when you chase her, there is a high probability that she will end up with someone you don't know but has a certain reputation. So it is not Tsundere who is retreating from the environment, but the recently appeared Long Aotian version of Tsundere. The orthodox tsundere is obviously the girl of my dreams, right?

No, there are five female protagonists appearing in about a hundred chapters, and the protagonist doesn't even have a character card? How weak is the protagonist of this book?

Liuli gave the protagonist money to keep distance from Qingmei, and after agreeing, he bought a gift for Qingmei. If you can't do it, don't make the promise. …

This introduction. . . A bit dissuasive

Kitayama Mihi is not lovable, her behavior always makes people feel a little uncomfortable

Looking at the introduction, it smells like a son-in-law and an ancient puppet show.

Ruri Amamiya is really disgusting. If this kind of character is controlled well, it can be regarded as an attribute label. If not controlled well, she will be a woman who deserves a beating.

Fast forward to when Nao fell in love with Ruri, and then Ruri fell in love with the male protagonist. Nao turned black and killed the male protagonist, and then imprisoned Ruri in the basement.

I have to say that the last few chapters are too dull. There is no need to spend so much ink describing the male supporting characters and passerby characters. People are not paying to read your book to read these things. This is completely killing everyone's interest in reading. If you really have no life, don't force it. If you really can't think of the plot, please take a leave to sort out the outline and adjust the plot. I think everyone can generally accept it. But after reading the chapter "Your Pure Water", we will only feel that it is a waste of money. I still think quality is more important than the number of words. I hope I can adjust in the future, come on!

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I just finished reading the introduction. I want to ask, the protagonist helps the eldest lady to find her childhood sweetheart. Is the eldest lady a lesbian?

It's the beginning of the male coach's career again. 9 Out of 10 books are like this. Don't always write like this. I feel a little vomiting. Farewell.

The turning point is too abrupt, and the progress is so fast. Are you planning to finish it at 500,000 words?

The protagonist is hung up hard

This introduction, where did my childhood sweetheart come from? She is just my sister next door🤭

This is a victory for readers

I can't stand it when I use the one that can be exchanged for skills but spends 110,000 yen 😭

I only read the parts that have not yet been released, and I feel that the relationship between the male protagonist and the eldest lady is a bit inexplicable, and I feel that the description of the female characters is not profound.

In which chapter does the counter-chassis begin? If not, wait until there is one and kick me.

Falling in love is sweet, but, man, what about the system?