The Lamp Repairer

When writing about fictional dynasties, writing about the Qin Dynasty and Bai Qi creates too much historical immersion, which negatively impacts the reading experience.

The subject matter is good, and the writing is decent, but the details need improvement, and the world-building needs to be revised as soon as possible. Incorporating history creates a significant contradiction with the book; how are readers supposed to read it? How are they supposed to understand it? It creates too much of a disconnect.

What's the protagonist's personality like? Is he cold and aloof? Will he be a busybody? Is he a lone wolf? Does he dislike too many women? Women are best left unmentioned.

Normally, growing rice requires water worth 53 wish beads, enough to cultivate 1,800 mu (approximately 120 hectares), yielding 350 jin (approximately 175 catties) per mu, for a total of 630,000 jin (approximately 315 tons). The protagonist's village yields 900 jin (approximately 450 kg) per mu, more than other villages. Rice sells for 12,000 jin (approximately 6,000 kg) at 1 wish bead.

The excessive use of references, especially those that were inappropriate and didn't fit the world-building, wasted a good concept.

This book isn't for normal people.

Remove the hell setting or description from the first five pages; it's too jarring. There are living people, villages, and fields in hell? Shouldn't this be explained?

Read Chapter 12 first. If you don't leave after reading it, you'll be able to continue reading the book.

What kind of nonsense is this? It's just a small city, don't give me that. Your logic is flawed, and your thinking is muddled.

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