I Really Just Want to Cultivate Immortality Quietly

Don't panic and check the box. I don't agree with it.

The plot is okay, but if you write and follow it like this, I'm afraid it won't be very good. The pretense isn't smooth enough and the audience is too entertained.

In fact, the writing is basically pretty good, but there is one thing that feels unreasonable. You say that the elixir is not mature yet, but you still say it, but if the elixir is mature, why doesn't the snake that is guarding just eat it?

With this update, I feel like the author can't make any money.

Dream back 500 years ago. 🤭

When I heard about the second round of competition, I felt that the author should write passionate campus articles. I didn't fall in love with it until I saw the introduction and didn't browse the hooks. But when I heard that the supporting character had the surname "Leng", I was so darned that I couldn't bear to look at it. The writing is okay, but it's enough to brag about the protagonist once, explain how awesome the protagonist is in fighting once, brag about it again in the third-person discussion, praise it again from the elders, and finally summarize it once. Best wishes.

It's impossible to find such a high-end spiritual tree as soon as you go out. Such things can only be found in secret realms or inaccessible places. The author is a noob

Well written. Please keep updating the author.

I really have no idea at all. It's all based on other people's plot ideas.

Boss Niu Bi, you are making a lot of money by signing the contract so quickly.

Short and weak

Lu Fan can go to the ring and fight ten moves without defeat, so he can enter the inner gate!

There are too few updates and they are interrupted. I can't keep up. Goodbye.