Renzai Douluo: Becoming Stronger Starts from Swinging the Sword Every Day

The author, Douluo calls the strategy of stealing or burning food and grass a magical strategy. Do they understand conspiracy?

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away; it goes away as soon as it's put on the shelf, and it's free of charge. It mainly focuses on a companionship for the author before it goes on the shelf.

The first few chapters look okay. Although the writing style is immature, it is quite smooth. Later on, if you want to do something about the Roshizi Star Battleship, then don't blame me for running away. Just keep going.

Author, let me tell you a good thing. As of now, there are not even any pirated copies of your book. Isn't this a good thing?

I stepped on all the poisonous spots I could. I skipped and watched the protagonist and then gave oral pleasure throughout the whole process without caring about the consequences. It felt like a modern person traveling through ancient times and pretending to be cool in a novel. It was just the author writing about intracranial orgasms and self-excitement.

This protagonist refuses to listen to advice and is still very confident. At a young age, he dared to say that he wanted to unify Douluo Continent and boasted in front of Qian Daoliu. Although Tang San's character was criticized, he was able to make this protagonist look like a piece of paper.

The first few chapters were fine, but what happened next!

It is the characteristic of this book that typos are not corrected. Shen Nong tried the poison and almost couldn't bear it! ! ! ! !

Let me remind you at the beginning that ancient blood sacrifices were completely superstitious. The actual effect was only to increase the carbon content of the metal. It is better to use carburization. Dou San Spiritual Forging gives the metal spirituality and a stronger fantasy color, and blood sacrifice can also be said to be reasonable. Dou Yi Ji includes hidden weapons and purely physical weapons. It relies solely on special materials to give it the properties of breaking the Gang. There is no need for blood sacrifice at all. Unless it's to kill people and silence them.

The content of the story is like a person playing with a house wine. He talks to himself. The structure is not well thought out and the setting is random. I also feel that there is no outline. It should be inconsistent later, such as starting a harem mode. With the author's writing power, he should be undergoing surgery in a clean room~

When I saw Chapter 6, "I took a mirror at dawn and looked at myself in the mirror, I still looked smart and graceful, with a beautiful feminine look." I couldn't stand it anymore. I personally don't like the so-called feminine male protagonist who looks like a boy or a girl.

The biggest problem is that the first three chapters are unreasonable. Practicing an action to the point of vomiting blood without any medical knowledge is all based on the protagonist's own subjective assumptions. There is no system, no skills, and no other settings. He ignored the doctor. I can only say that the protagonist's IQ depends on the author.

It feels like the protagonist is illiterate and cannot understand the simplest muscle dissolution.

The first few chapters seemed okay, but in the end, I just let myself go and rode like crazy all the way.

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I really can't understand the last ten chapters and don't know what to express? I haven't been able to understand it since I left the ocean.

After reading the introduction, I knew that the writing was not good. Don't ask why, ask just intuition. What is written is the same age as Tang Hao. Do you know how old Tang Hao was when he left the Douluo Continent? 35 Years old. Let me emphasize again. I met A Yin when I was 35 years old. Isn't A Yin fragrant? Lan Silver grass, with body fragrance and a gentle personality. Why doesn't Ah Rou Xiao Wu have a good smell? She brings two bodyguards. , What brain circuit,