Douluo: the Body of the Soul Becomes the Master of the Spiritual World!

But if Xiao Wu and Qian Renxue refuse to accept this situation and insist on having Ye Ling Ling as a single female protagonist, then the good points of this book become a bit toxic. I suggest you let nature take its course and delete the label of single heroine. Why hang yourself from a tree? Duoluo with multiple heroines will definitely have more audiences than single heroine. You are still writing with multiple heroines, and your current relationship writing is also good

It's obvious that your outline is ambiguous and will not be accepted. If you want to filter readers, you don't have to do that.

The soul guide seems to be a version weapon. In fact, it is a version trap. It's a pure waste of training time. This thing even reaches the Dou San period. Even those ten-level God-killing soul-guided artillery shells couldn't kill the God King. Not even as good as a super artifact. And I really want to learn the soul guidance device. It is better to wait for Soul Saint to learn the other way around later. That way the learning efficiency is much faster than that of low-level soul masters. Just a bit tasteless. It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

You can only study soul guides in Dou Er, not Dou Yi. The Douyi Soul Guidance Device has disappeared, and the only thing that can be used is the Storage Soul Guidance Device. And this thing is also very rare and expensive. Even the lowest one cubic soul guide is extremely expensive. And only some ruins can produce this thing.

Starting to break ice-breaking soul tools by yourself at the second level is too putting the cart before the horse. Even if you research it, you can only make low-level soul tools if you don't have enough soul power. It is better to rush to get the title and then study the soul tools. By then, you will have the strength to cover your research results. 9-Level mental power will be researched faster than the current 2-level soul tools.

I don't believe that Wang Hu won't drag you into a fight. This is inevitable. After all, he is a jerk who is either being compared to others or being compared to others.

The author should not let the protagonist bear some so-called responsibilities for no reason. That would be great. This kind of person is so unreal. Just protect the people around you. To the best of your ability. It's normal to do something about it. And there is no need to fire map cannons. It's easy to get into the God Realm. Your only enemies are Buddha and Shura deities. Because there is no room for two tigers in one mountain. He wants to turn the divine world into the Tang world. Douluo became the Tang Family Continent. Unless you are willing to be a dog to Buddha. Otherwise, the positions will be inherently antagonistic 🪖

Yes, as a new author, this book is quite good. It reads quite smoothly. So far, there are no poisonous points. The research on martial arts and soul guides is also quite interesting. I still need to update more and increase the amount of updates. Your level will definitely be one of the best among Douluo fans in the same period.

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Single girl Ye Lingling? Then what does it mean to show favorability to Xiao Wu before? You'd better change it this time. Even if the sugar with three spoons is not popular, if you write something ambiguous, you must accept it, otherwise you should not write ambiguous scenes.

For example, "It seems that he is PUA", can you add something like "xx silently observes" before and after, to simply enrich it, otherwise it will feel very abrupt at first glance and say to yourself from the first perspective?

If there is ambiguity, then just open a harem honestly. If there is a single heroine, avoid these ambiguous plots. Both and most annoying.

Judging from the plot trend, you won't want to give the protagonist a second martial spirit, right? I think it's a bit stupid or doesn't make much sense. Tang San's two martial arts souls, none of them are useful after becoming a god. Those soul skills can be understood and created by oneself after becoming a god, isn't that the Poseidon's.

Hi, hello, ladies and gentlemen. Since the author is a complete newcomer, it is my first time to write a book, so please bear with me. If you have any suggestions, you can leave a message below this post, and I will respond when I see it. Newbies need to read the data. Please give me time to help me click to the end. Regarding monthly votes and recommendation votes, if you can, please vote a little (quietly)

There should still be two female protagonists. It is no longer possible to write a single female protagonist. Both have an affair. It's impossible to write a story about a single female protagonist in your situation.

Soul beasts have been hunted for soul rings, but no soul beast that has been around for more than ten thousand years has developed the skill of self-exploding soul rings in death. I can't understand it. After all, some groups of elephants in reality have begun to stop growing tusks!

The Fool who does not belong to this world, the mysterious master above the gray fog, the King of Yellow and Black who controls good luck.

It is said that the plan in the original work could not keep up with the changes. After Qian Renxue became a god, if it were not for the God Realm to cause trouble, Wuhun Palace would have unified the continent long ago. All the conspiracies and tricks in the early stage were all jokes, and the plan to usurp the country was useless. Looking at the protagonist's upgrade speed, I feel that the script is the same as the original. If you also have the goal of becoming a god, gathering the power of faith and having an upright formal style are the basics. No one will recognize conspirators. History tells us that a strong country must be built from scratch. And without completely smashing the two current empires, how can a country implement its own will from top to bottom? No matter how you behave, you must have a glorious image in front of outsiders. The protagonist wants to change the past and make a new one, let alone rely on conspiracy and tricks.

These special soul beasts also have ancient and alien species. According to the idea of ​​sustainable development, shouldn't we try to artificially breed them, or protect them? After all, he might be the only one. When conducting experiments, it is important to save and cherish materials. The protagonist is still a scientific researcher, so he should not understand! According to the soul beast hunting method of Douluo Continent, it is strange that the soul beasts are not extinct!

Very well written and very much to my liking. I hope the author can continue to work hard

Become a disciple of Dugu Bo, what's going on with Dugu Yan?

Logically speaking, soul rings should be the product of the condensation of soul power. Similar to breakthroughs, soul skills should not exist. Douluo Continent soul masters may be taking shortcuts, so they kill soul beasts and get soul rings to break through. After all, it is more convenient in the early stage. There is no need to practice soul skills, they can just use them. But the later stage is a trap. To become a 100-level god, you need to dissolve rings and condense the divine status. In the early stage, the soul rings are condensed after the death of various soul beasts. You can imagine how much the rejection of soul masters is. If you are not a world-shaking talent or an inherited god, it is basically impossible to become a god. Thinking further, might becoming a god require the power of faith? One of its functions is to use the power of faith to wash away the negative will in the soul ring and make the soul ring pure.

After the death of the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger, he went to the Dzi Bead Transformation. Will the protagonist follow him?

This emotional line is so cumbersome. The protagonist, who has been in his thirties for two lifetimes combined, seems to have a sense of childishness. Taking away the battle plot, I can still see the feeling of a female-oriented romance novel. This is not to say that the writing is not good, but it is a bit torturous for male readers.