Changsheng: I Open a Pawnshop in Beijing

The author is not water, but the writing is delicate. But not verbose. Wu Zhuangyuan also wrote a pair of fights. The other players almost passed each other in one stroke. Not verbose. The text written by the author cannot be read in ten lines at a glance. You have to be patient to read the author's book

You can watch it, but if you watch it without thinking, there are many inconsistencies in it. For example, the protagonist kills people from the Wild Dog Gang to hide himself, but later someone comes to the door and directly reveals his ability. There is a loneliness hidden in the front, and there is also the skill. In the beginning, the creator of the skill created a skill that can generate the source of the world in order to make the world more prosperous, so that the source of the world does not need to be consumed. As a result, only one person can practice the skill, so how can he help the world! Could it be that those who practice this technique want to kill all other practitioners? Otherwise, how can they help heaven and earth preserve their origins? If you want to give the protagonist golden finger skills or something, just give it to him and watch. . . It's like there is a person who wants to lead everyone to happiness, and then works hard for this goal all his life. As a result, the result of his efforts is that he can only make one person happy. Isn't this a huge irony for him?

Did you just copy and paste the introduction of your longevity article and then change the subject and object? I have read this format 8 times if not 10 times, and I feel like throwing up.

After talking about Gou, he actually took action everywhere and didn't deal with the aftermath. Once checked, it will be found

It starts off like a fairy, but after a few chapters it becomes a martial arts, or even a medium one. 😤Poisoned to death

It started out great. I left after seeing the third chapter. The author should have screened readers in the third chapter. He was inexplicably arrested and quickly came to trouble the protagonist to take the blame. Then out of nowhere, a beautiful woman came out to help the protagonist. And this chapter has no connection with the next chapter. It is an inexplicable chapter and it is still poisonous. It can only be said that the author deliberately wrote this chapter to screen readers. I can't afford to leave.

Would I tell you that this book is poisonous?

The tone of the opening chapter is a bit low. The protagonist is an eighth-grade man with an imposing manner and a foreign enemy, and the senior capital police officer is on his side. The protagonist carved a wooden statue of the proprietress across the street and placed it blatantly at the door, and then he was afraid that others would find out. I don't know what kind of crazy mentality the protagonist has.

It looks okay, but the author seems to have no outline and the plot is a bit confusing. Also, I am afraid that the author is not very young, and the description seems to be a bit middle-class among the literary youth, which is not much better. Furthermore, the details are a bit taken for granted. What I wrote earlier was that both of my parents were dead and struggling to support the store. Others came to help me in times of need, and the timely help was only a few dozen taels. Suddenly, I was able to spend thousands of taels to collect the things of tomb robbers. This is a bit ridiculous. The rest is okay, if you are short of books, you can read it.

Chapter 6 starts to show off, a little bit poisonous

I have a question, in the world of martial arts, you are an immortal who has been practicing for hundreds of years and you are still an 8th level person? Has this age passed for a pig? ? Even if you can't beat a genius, there are people in a street gang who are all in the 9th grade. How about 8th grade in a hundred years? ? ?

It's the same as opening a loan company like ordinary people. At least you understand what a pawn shop is.

The same routine, the same taste, the same pretense, saying Gou is not Gou, being a slut everywhere 😂😂😂😂

The Chang Sheng article starts with writing about women. Forget it, they all have to eat, so no more scolding.

I read a certain Shen Nong and said that I can definitely read it. Haha, I also told you that if you have money, you can make money. The level of this book is average, the story is average, and it completely follows the trend, but the level is still poor. The main character is inexplicable. It depends on the author. If you like it, do you want to feed the readers a poison? The level is also the same. I can't stand it without using my brain. I gave it back to Shurima, smiled, and died on the street.

Qidian Novel is really sick now, always living forever

Can't the origin strengthen the brain? Then what is the use of your origin? Can it only strengthen the body? Can't ordinary exercises work? Rubbish.

Just drink a bowl of water and talk endlessly.

Shen Nong came to express his opinion First of all, I recommend reading it. I saw it 100% right away. Based on my experience of reading books for more than ten years, it is a good book. It is similar to the invincible flow but not particularly devastating. The experience of the world really unfolds slowly, and the emotional line progresses steadily. It can be seen that the author wants to play a big game, and it is still worth reading. I have two personal opinions: First: Since the author wants to use the surname Wu to introduce the plot, it is understandable. However, the plot that keeps appearing wherever it appears means where the matter is always feels inconsistent with Gou Daoliu, and this book is biased towards Gou Dao. Some people can be replaced appropriately, otherwise the constant presence of people named Wu will make people feel that the book has changed. Anyway, I already hate people named Wu. Second: Since it is Gou Dao, it is necessary to arrange a set of breath-containing skills. It always feels weird to appear as the original self. It is recommended to arrange another suitable identity as soon as possible, so that no one can find the original self easily. The above are some small suggestions, I hope it will get better and better.

I've read four or five chapters, and overall I think it's okay. In today's environment where the quality of Qidian novels has generally collapsed, it's a rare good book! At least the sentences are fluent, there are few typos, it is comfortable to read, and the plot is acceptable. It is recommended to read.

Author, don't listen to what those trolls say, just write according to your ideas, stick to it and sooner or later one day you will become a master platinum gold medal

It is better to follow the No. 8 Pawnshop model, where the pawn items can be traced back, the lifespan can be traded, the seven emotions and six desires, as well as the future, the past, and body parts.