Reincarnation

I have been saving it for more than a month, and I will continue reading it today. I've been subscribing but haven't watched it. I will continue to subscribe because I think the author is really serious in writing, the writing style is also very good, and the setting is very rigorous and thoughtful. Continue to talk about the shortcomings, and hope that the author can continue to improve. There are still too many settings! It still feels like reading a manual! While reading the book, I spent a lot of time thinking about recalling the settings and sorting out the settings. I was so tired! It's like I wanted to relax my brain and read a novel, but it ended up making my brain even more tired. To be honest, I saw the end of the third generation, and there are still many settings and special terms that I still can't remember or understand. I hope the author will work harder and make the setting as simple as possible, so that readers will not feel tired while reading. In this way, I think the results will be much better. Your logic is so clear and rigorous, and your writing style is very good. Your grades can definitely be better. Please look for more deficiencies. (I feel like you just write "high" every time you write. You want to put all your thoughts into it, step by step, and you won't become a big fat man in one sitting)

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 230. I could have accepted it with more grit in the previous settings, but suddenly I got a research institute to design armor and become an armored warrior? Why did you travel across the world? It's such a pity. There were few settings in the beginning and it still felt like a classic cultivating immortality. The feeling of reincarnation from waste to genius was also very good. I was wondering before why there were so few monthly tickets for a well-written book. I gave you all the tickets I had. Now it seems that there is a reason.

The turning point of the story occurs in the third reincarnation. First, the plot begins to accelerate crazily, the combat power increases, and the concept of destiny and the battle for the road that may eventually lead to immortality begin to be introduced. However, the problem also occurs here. After this, the plot of the story and the characters are directly portrayed. Everything is not only black and white as it should be, but also equivalent to directly abandoning the emotional side of human nature. There is only rational analysis, directly erasing the emotional mobilization and climax that the novel needs most. Is this still a novel? Although the follow-up author also worked very hard to continue it, the emotions were disconnected and the cohesion of the story dropped significantly. Then, for the rationality of the so-called son of destiny in the story, the fourth reincarnation of the father and daughter killed each other. It was called "For Destiny". I stopped reading it after that. I don't know how to continue it, but there is no doubt that it is not a masterpiece, and it is difficult to maintain a high-quality work. I have already ordered it all because I think it is unlikely to be poisoned midway through the novel, but I still made a mistake. I don't know whether it is because I am stubborn or as you said, seven years of writing has solidified or even ossified your thinking mode. Once the ideas exceed the predetermined range, the writing level plummets. But in the future, I will have a long memory. I can only read the first half of your novel, and problems will begin in the middle. It is a typical writing method where strategies cannot be combined with tactics. It's a pity. If we can't really make a breakthrough in the outline, then my false prophecy will become your true portrayal. I hope the next work will be better.

I finished reading it in one sitting and wrote a book review. This book was added to the bookshelf a long time ago. I read the beginning and did not continue. It was too boring and I had no other books to read. I read it patiently after seeing other people's recommendations, and it became interesting at the end. I have read a lot of books about reincarnation, and this book is somewhat interesting. Other traditional ways of cultivating immortals, using reincarnation as a trap, and always learning skills secretly are really boring. In the world of this book, you are not qualified at all, and the class gap is huge. The author writes about the evils of human nature in a very explicit way. The aristocratic class of cultivating immortals firmly controls the skills, resources, promotion channels, etc. Unless there is an invisible chaos or mysterious luck, the people below have no chance. The road to cultivating immortals is difficult, and the higher you go up, the harder it is. It must be passed down from generation to generation. Theoretically, future generations are better than previous generations, because the theory and technology of cultivating immortals are constantly being updated, unless they encounter the kind of unreasonable hang-up. There is a dark hand like Destiny behind it, different parallel worlds, etc. Let's read on. Complaining about something unpleasant. Although it is a traditional realm of qi refining and foundation building, the setting is very novel, but in order to be logical, it is too complicated and can make people dizzy. It would be better if it was simplified. Looking at it so far, it's quite interesting, and I'm not deliberately trying to trick you. Come on, give me at least a monthly pass at the end of the month.

After seeing the latest chapter, let me tell you my opinion. I have seen many comrades saying that advancing the main plot is too slow. I don't think so. Look at the previous life's rise from the land of absolute souls to what I tentatively call the middle region, a land with rich spiritual energy. It took more than sixty chapters. Why don't you think it is too slow? Well, in fact, we can finish reading it in one go, and it is not slow. I hope the author will not blame others after reading it, and you will not be affected. If you continue to write like this, I think we can create a systematic reincarnation genre. No matter how bad it is, it is still a masterpiece among niche works. In fact, your creativity is novel. I think spiritual root recovery plays an important part. It is also logical and self-consistent. It is very good, and it is better than most authors. I really can't bear it. I always think about your plot development during class. I think you will at least build the foundation in this life or even more than that. However, I feel that the combat power is in danger of collapsing. But I think the problem is not big because the protagonist has not met a real genius yet and is only in the Qi refining period. The cultivation may be different by then. I hope the author will perform stably. Although I cannot support you strongly, after all, I am still a student, but two recommendation votes every day are essential. Seek refinement

After reading it for three days, I finally came across the latest chapter. Let me talk about my feelings. This book by the author has made significant progress compared to the previous one. The setting is simpler and the realm has been changed to the mortal flow that everyone is familiar with. This is good. Basically, it is quite smooth to get out of the secret realm. However, after the secret realm, I felt that the rhythm suddenly slowed down, and the plot began to lose control, becoming cliché, witty, stubborn, and brainless. The power system also feels very collapsed, and it starts to suffer from the same mistakes as the previous book. The low realm is infinitely exaggerated. Time, space, and time are all the laws of the highest realm in this kind of novel. Is it really appropriate to build a small foundation like this? Moreover, the writing method of mindlessly describing the enemies as powerful to highlight the protagonist is also outdated. Anyway, I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I also hope to get more suggestions from readers who support you. I remember that I used to read the movie "Sky Hearts", and the results of that book were not good at the beginning, but then it took off. I have always thought that you also have this ability. I was really optimistic about this book at the beginning, but I didn't expect that after the secret realm, it became a bit unreadable. Personally, I feel that this sect battle is very poorly written, with many toxic and unreasonable points. There is nothing exciting about the climax other than making it feel subdued and mindless.

The author writes well, I am very optimistic about you, don't collapse later

Give him a spiritual root, and he can ignore the spiritual root talent and time and let Xiguang go from the second level spiritual method to the fifth level spiritual method in his lifetime. Give him a King Miao, and he can be turned into a technological zombie with unlimited growth in talent. Give him a trace of the residual soul, and he can let the King of Eternal Night use a trace of the residual soul to use the fourth level of spiritual magic. Give him a natal weapon, and he can make Si Yueyi's golden elixir swallow the Yuanying. Give him a great achievement weapon, and he can make Xiguang take out the prefecture-level great achievement weapon, City God's Three Rings. Give him another chance, and he can prevent the protagonist from cultivating the Nascent Soul in his fifth life. Give him another chance to solve the crisis of becoming a god. He can only give the protagonist a Xuan-level great achievement weapon. Give him a chance, he can make the protagonist repeatedly practice Qi and build the foundation. Give the protagonist a chance, and he can make the protagonist spend his whole life cheating and honing only a few skills. Give the supporting character a chance, and he can make the supporting character walk through the generations of the family and realize infinite iterations of spiritual methods. The famous MacArthur once said that the way of reincarnation is like this. As long as the protagonist is good, the supporting role can be done as you like. As long as the protagonist doesn't collapse, the whole book doesn't collapse.

One thing I really don't understand is why the author thinks that family is the most reasonable organizational system? Not to mention the party system that has been proven in practice, at least a sect is better than a closed family, right? And what's outrageous is that in the previous life, he said that the family system was good, but in the next life, he used a blood curse to destroy a branch of the family. Don't you think it's a slap in the face? And the protagonist's family also gave birth too quickly. How long did it take? Can you give birth to a person who builds a city? There is also the Bloodline Lock, which can be pressed on by anyone at will, and they will be loyal to the protagonist. Isn't this excessive? If you catch someone, you can lock them with blood. There is such a thing as a bloodline lock (the key is that this thing can be made by a mortal, it is not unique to the protagonist Goldfinger), how deformed is the social system?

It doesn't matter if your grades are not good I heard: Don't compete for the first place in running water, but compete for eloquence

In fact, the author's writing style is particularly suitable for Western fantasy. Wizards are the real researchers. They study life after life, and each breakthrough increases their strength. Wizards with labels such as "otaku", "scientist", "crazy and bloody", "indifferent to everything" and "pursuit of truth" are more like the protagonists in the article. Research in fairy tales is too inconsistent in the end. Cultivation of immortality pays attention to "philosophy" and "realm". The emphasis on "the unity of man and nature" is too idealistic. Moreover, immortal cultivators often live for thousands of years and have the accumulation of countless generations. Logically speaking, it is like a copper wall and an iron wall. As a result, the protagonist seems to be very "childish". Research has revealed that the protagonist's cheat is not a "book of reincarnation", but "the power of my search". Just thinking about it will find the truth of the world. Just researching will reveal the entire hierarchy of the world of cultivating immortals. It's so terrifying.

I haven't really liked it since Destiny.

What does the author mean by rhythm?       ，，， If you don't skip it, re-editing will take up too much time. If too much of the rhythm is taken up, the rhythm will be slow. The pace is too slow, and I don't want to skip over rewriting the plot. Instead, I feel that reincarnation slows down the pace, so I simply don't write about reincarnation.       ，，……       Doesn't this book mean that the stronger the talent, the faster the cultivation? Doesn't reincarnation add talent? Even if you commit a crime, you will not miss any part of the process of rebuilding. The more reincarnations there are, the shorter the process of rebuilding will be. Do you have to drag out a hundred chapters with rubbish talents to let the protagonist repeatedly break through the golden elixir? The truth is to sharpen the knife and chop wood. You want the protagonist to become a billionaire, but you only let him move bricks...

When will you practice qi and fight against immortals? Are you excited?

Huayue: My child, don't blame me. One day you will understand why everything I do is for. Huayue: It seems you already know everything, come on! Take my life! You will become the savior after my death. I hope that the Sudie family can become the only light in this end of the world in your hands! Hua Yue: When I see you, it's like I'm seeing my father. Your temperament and figure are so similar to him. Can you hold me in my arms at the end of my life? Ah~Father, I have avenged you. The Sudie family has risen, and I have no regrets... I am coming to find you. I, I, father... Protagonist: I am actually your father.

In the past, the higher the status, the smoother the start, and the more enjoyable it was. Now the map has been changed, so the start is back to a low status, but the talent is here, and it is normal to be discovered and enslaved. It just makes some readers unhappy . . Your writing was too smooth before, but suddenly it changed, and it felt unsightly. Although it makes sense if you think about it carefully It's not good if you don't focus on the protagonist But the rhythm is weird and broken.

The following is all subjective. The views I express may not be correct, and I do not think it can change the author's writing intention. It is purely an output of views. The writing in this book is not as good as that of Bai Shi, and it is written like a studio flow. The pinnacle of this type of writing is "Huang Ting Taoist" and some of the other books. I can list ten books that are no worse than this one by the current author, but they are all just like that, boring. Now no one is arguing about the Holy Mother, and no one is arguing about whether the cultivation system is reasonable. Is the training system the focus of a novel? The settings must serve the plot. When the climax of the plot comes, the settings must make way for the plot. For example, the celestial strikes in the previous book, the extremely spiritual method to kill the realm, and the ten branches of the heavenly stems to reverse the trend are all tools for the plot to explode. But now this book regards obtaining tools as the highlight of the whole book. Although it is interesting, the plot is not exciting. If it's not a little bit exciting, it's called explosive. It doesn't mean you can kill people with tools, or it's exciting if you grab things. The mental depression caused by the surrounding environment, the grievances in the plot, the protagonist's will and persistence, until the moment when he gets a certain tool through hard work and reaches the point of reversal, all explode! Clear your grudges, make clear what is right and what is wrong, and realize your ideals! This is called the explosive point. Breaking point, author, you can't write it. You can cook three dishes, why can you only cook rice? You don't think those three dishes will affect the restaurant's business, do you? You only chose readers who just love to eat free food, readers who are dedicated to self-cultivation and accumulation. Do you think it will be more popular? Practice in order to write about the tools of cultivation. What are the characteristics of the characters? What about the surrounding environment? Oh, I can't say there aren't any, I can only say that there are hundreds of thousands of cool books that are this thin. At a glance, you can see the plot to the end, and you have no feeling about the life and death of the characters. They cultivate themselves, manage their families, govern their country, and bring peace to the world. Just write about self-cultivation + a little bit of family harmony. That's all. Many people who wanted to see the country governed and the world peaceful were gone. Although this book has a lot less quarrels. Basically every controversy in the previous book was a quarrel between the Self-cultivation School and the Pingtianxia School. Although they quarreled, the content of the quarrel did not affect the score of the book. Although it is possible to write a book that makes a living by writing this way, and even if you are lucky, you can write a work comparable to the Huangting Taoist and Get Out series, but there are too many similar works on this road, and now a lot of studios are writing this routine. Now the results of your book are actually about the same as those of the studio works, which is just a death penalty, but they are studios and they have a lot of projects! If you are a new author and have never published any achievements, writing this way is very stable. But you have clearly proven the strengths of a genre, so why would you choose this path? Write a popular book, a novel that is read by many people. After verifying your strengths, you should write according to your strengths, and put the explosive plot points first. Write several books in a series, and accumulate die-hard fans. Sooner or later, it will become popular, such as Chendong, Tomato, Ergen, Go Away, Yuantong, all authors who have always written in the same genre. Self-cultivation is easy to write and easy to write. There are many readers, but there is also a lot of competition. Readers who only read the self-cultivation category are louder. It is unreasonable to output loudly when they see a little light. However, the Pingtianxia faction who sees darkness do not speak out much because they default to black as normal. Most of them will just walk away without leaving much feedback. Just leave.

It feels weird to read more than a hundred chapters 1. Not buying basic spells 2. Not buying basic techniques 3. Not understanding basic training techniques 4. Hanging up and deliberately lowering the level, and skills that cannot be upgraded 5. Practicing alone, deliberately not understanding the taboos of training, stepping on thunder all the way. In the second life in Lingcheng, I can't level up, nor can I practice skills 6. Hanging up, it's like it's not unlocked. I realized that the skills were too hung up. In the second life, I basically put the skills on hold and didn't even buy basic spells. The pressure was too harsh. The fighting skills were all made by myself by mistake and were full of pitfalls.

This book is okay. The map of the world is too small and various settings are too complicated. I suggest that the book be more concise and concise. Finally, I suggest that the plot of each reincarnation be longer this time. More descriptions and characterizations of supporting characters, relatives and friends After all, they are all immortals. It is not a problem to span several reincarnations.

I asked whether this book will be like the previous one, fighting for everyone? , Anyway, I quite like the Lone Ranger, who is cold-blooded and doesn't like to meddle in other people's business. How about the protagonist of this book? What is the character of the protagonist? Is he strict, doesn't like funny people, is he decisive in killing, is he a licker, is he a licker, is he a woman who doesn't have a sister? You won't mind your own business, right? Cold or not? If you like a lone ranger, or you can have two like-minded friends, you don't like a burdensome sister or elder sister anyway.

This book is well written. The protagonist reaches the peak of the golden elixir. When the strength can no longer improve, then use the destiny artifact to travel to other world lines. The subsequent plots seem to be a mess. It means the collapse of combat power. It's a bit of a pity for this book.

I saw an armored warrior popping up in more than 200 chapters, inserting a card to read and release skills, building a mortal research institute, and building a first-generation computer in the world of immortality. I was right? Actually, as I keep reading this, I feel that the sense of contradiction is getting heavier and heavier. The protagonist was a casual cultivator who had no access to systematic knowledge in the early stage, and his understanding has not been improved, so he is just an ordinary person. The article said that the protagonist has almost forgotten mathematics, physics, and chemistry, and he was not engaged in science in his previous life. Research, and the result is that the protagonist suddenly had a flash of inspiration and came up with the supernatural root technique that was developed by top families for thousands of years. He also had a random flash of inspiration and created his own bloodline and moonlight spirit body. It was like a primary school student who came up with a university research project through various flashes of inspiration. You are not traveling with the golden finger of reincarnation, you are traveling with the black technology system of the top student. I have no objection to scientific cultivation. The problem is that your protagonist's scientific research is childish. In his first two lives, he was a casual cultivator with no foundation. He lived for less than two hundred years in total. He spent most of his time hiding in a cave and farming behind closed doors. He didn't communicate with others, and he didn't steal or grab much technical knowledge. He could also come up with all kinds of good things in a flash. Other casual cultivators and weak tribes have lasted for hundreds of years. They have more people than you, have been around longer than you, have as much knowledge as you, and have more information exchanges than you. Why haven't they researched it? Why haven't they broken through the monopoly of the powerful tribes? Then this Mortal Scientific Research Institute has confused me. A group of mortals + qi-training shrimps have developed a magic weapon of time + an immortal version of the computer. Is it more powerful than the Immortal Scientific Research Institute? What you are saying is that some elementary school students who are slightly literate (Qi Practicing Xiami) + some babies who are not yet literate (mortals who don't understand immortality at all) work together to solve a university research project. Now that ordinary people can do this, shouldn't everyone with the golden elixir in the world of immortality have a time magic weapon? The protagonist's golden finger, a top student, is really awesome. It can also improve the scientific research capabilities of his subordinates, right? Ask the people behind you, will this be the way to go in the future? Cultivation of immortals is not enough, and talking about science fiction is too insulting to science. They can't stand this inexplicable way of breaking technical barriers just because I'm thinking about it. I suggest you compare it with Li Fan next door. Golden Finger is no worse than the protagonist of this book. As a result, he has been reincarnated for more than a hundred lives without breaking the cultivation monopoly of the Heavenly Master who spreads the law.

The author's ending is too bad. The open ending is garbage in the author's worldview of these two books. The protagonist has no cheats, his talent is not top-notch, and even his cultivation is gone. Now going to the Red Sky Realm is just to die without any possibility. I don't know why the author feels that this ending is good. The protagonist has gone through so much hard work to achieve a high status and is not even an ant compared with the real immortal. This is not a problem that the author can solve by patching up and making an extra chapter later. The protagonist who lost everything went to the red sky. Are you kidding me? It is really sad to have no possibilities. What will happen next for the protagonist Gu Luosheng? It is impossible to become an immortal. Even if there is a book of reincarnation, the possibility is blocked by the previous protagonist Yun Ye, not to mention that Gu Luosheng has nothing. This book is quite good in terms of story setting alone, but unfortunately, the author's open ending makes everything the protagonist of this book experiences in this Caixia world meaningless, which is very similar to the dream ending In summary, this ending is the clown ending, and Gu Luosheng is the clown protagonist. It would have been better if this book had a bad ending.

The last volume seems to be nonsense. It might as well be that the protagonist is reincarnated in the year of the gods, walks on the road to immortality again, and closes the loop of his own time. The opponent can be an old monster from all eras. The protagonist's destiny + talent can overwhelm the opponent and create a golden age. Moreover, it was not written before the Purple Moon Era. It was a pity. Later on, it felt like the author was in a hurry to finish. It was a pity. There were so many things that could be written about multiverses and parallel worlds.

Lao Da, the art style of your game is so bad, why don't you come back and write a book?

There are so many words to say. I read this book from the author's previous book. The author's writing style and content deeply attracted me. I started studying hard for the college entrance examination in February or March and temporarily left novels. A few days after the college entrance examination, I thought that online novels would no longer attract me, but once again I saw that the author had opened a new book, and I opened it with the mentality of passing the time, and my love for reading online novels was rekindled. Although I haven't finished reading them yet, I will order both books first because I know the author will not let readers down.

According to current intelligence deductions, the Golden World Line is the future. In order to ensure that the world line remains strong, correctors will be sent to correct the mistakes of the past. The birth of the Six-Ring Life Weapon is a key node, so it is necessary to destroy the entire Wanhualing City. The silver world line is the world line closest to the gold world line, so it is also the easiest world line to modify. Other world lines are upstream in time, and once they are changed, the entire downstream world line will be shaken, so the correctors that can be sent out are even more powerful. Blank history should be history that has not been recorded and can be used freely. As long as the six-ring natal device of the important node remains unchanged, it should not attract revisionists. Then the fourth generation Gu Luosheng can completely replace the demon horse to destroy the Wanhualing City and seize the knowledge leading to the Nascent Soul.

The author of Baishi Ascension has a good grasp of the early stage, but it is a bit broken in the middle and late stages. The author of Reincarnation Immortal Realm has realized this problem. The early and middle stages are very good, but it still falls apart in the later stage 😢. I hope the author can better grasp the rhythm of the next book, expand some protagonists, and strengthen the content in the later stage. Come on 👍

Gu Luosheng was lying on the bed and dying. After his own efforts and his own experience and skills, he discovered that "Sure enough, fairness and so on are just a layer of net to protect the injustice of the lower-level people." Is it like a besieger must leave a visible gap for the lower-level people but still can't escape the end of life? The "law of longevity" was born to give hope to the people at the bottom while denying them hope. After all, who can blame you if you fail to seize the opportunity you are given? Gu Luosheng looked at the gray-haired Si Yueyi. The life span in this world is really compressed to a just right level. People are born, people grow, people start a family, people are raised, people are aged. Each stage seems long but very compact. Gu Luosheng inadvertently thought of his first life, running around like this but doing nothing. Gu Luosheng began to doubt that the two Hongtian people really invaded by chance. Could it be a piece of fun for that true immortal? In order to see such a dramatic turning point in life, Gu Luosheng has no doubt that whether the ability of the true immortal can come to him. The previous Hongtian world was at most a matter of time. So when the Hongtian people found this world, they noticed this thing that was left behind by the true immortal Caixia and became interested ? But it's pointless to worry about all this now. Without the Book of Reincarnation this life will be my final destination. This world has made up for all its regrets before, but there are more regrets in this world. Huixin and Jinyuan offended people who should not have been offended because of Jinyuan's temper. The last two people disappeared. Si Yueyi and I, Huayue also began to live in hiding for five years incognito. Huayue also lost consciousness in the process. Thinking of Gu Luosheng here, her turbid tears began to form a layer of mist, and she couldn't help shouting in her heart: Damn it! If only I had the power! If I had the Book of Reincarnation in hand, and if my power of cultivation was still with me, would the outcome have been different if I had not chosen to come in and continued to comprehend the Cave Heaven Dharma? Even if things are different, you can still continue to enjoy the happiness you have always wanted to enjoy, right? The humiliation, reluctance, and regret he suffered in his short life in this world were like a sharp knife acting on his heart. Slowly, Gu Luosheng's pulse stopped and his heart stopped beating. Only a pair of open eyes were left washing his face. Si Yueyi felt uncomfortable watching this scene. She held Gu Luosheng's hand with one dry hand and wiped the tears on Gu Luosheng's face with the other hand, but no one came to wipe her own tears. She murmured: Enough, enough, it's already wonderful, isn't it? So be it. She seemed to be saying this to Gu Luosheng, but also to herself...

I would like to ask the author if the game has hit the market?