Immortal Magic Is Supreme

In this book, don't be crazy about crushing the protagonist. This doesn't mean that the supporting characters are not good. Your protagonist has already opened up, so you still have to crazily crush the enemy. Otherwise, you can make the enemy smaller, or make the map bigger and the enemy stronger. I see that you wrote about a spiritual resurgence and reincarnation, and that this dynasty is nearing its end after 200 years. It will not be just a mortal dynasty now and then start a spiritual resurgence, and then the protagonist, um, cheats and creates, um, reincarnates, and it turns out that the reincarnation lasts for hundreds or thousands of years, and then all the achievements have been usurped by others. After reincarnation, you have to start from the bottom.

We are finally back. We have been waiting for you to finish the game for a long time.

To be honest, I also feel that the author is really outrageous. You have written so many books, those with more than 200,000 words, not counting Final Character Catalog, Heroic Spirit Development Game, A New World... This is your fifth book, obviously. The plot belongs to the Invincible stream. How did you manage to write it in such a frustrating way? This is the first time I have seen an old author make such a mistake and make a novel in the Invincible stream so frustrating. I really can't understand why the author doesn't switch to Invincible stream.

I like the subject matter of this book very much, and the writing style is also very good Although occasionally it feels like reading a running account, but overall it is a way to pass the time. The plot structure is still a bit poisonous. It is clear that the protagonist is far greater than the villain created by the author in terms of strength, information, or the will of the people. However, the protagonist is defeated time and time again, and then the protagonist forces the gods to come down to earth to save the situation. Well... Not once or twice. It seems that the tone of the plot of this book is like this... Some people may ask, why is he invincible? What, how can we construct a plot conflict without writing about these villains? But in fact, in this world, Ren Liuguang, who has the weapon of greatness, is invincible, even if the extraordinary nature of this world is idealistic, why? Because the protagonist is really what people want, and the concept is added... I don't know how it will be written later, but according to the current plot structure, it will really become a running story.

The first is the FW True Immortal who [can't do anything and is the first in internal fighting] and his [Law of Tianshou], which dislikes everyone equally. The author seems to have said that this law of longevity is to prevent the emergence of immortality from the solidification of classes, but there is no reality at all in the work, pure negative effects. There are also waste real immortals. If the real immortals are worried about the solidification of class, the worst and stupidest way is to clean up regularly, and life will be forced to adapt. I originally thought that the lower limit of a true immortal should exceed the upper limit of my imagination. Unexpectedly, the lower limit of a true immortal's FW far exceeds the lower limit of my imagination. The amazing wisdom of a true immortal is really amazing! Then there is the characterization of the protagonist. Although I don't want to say this, the protagonist's performance is really like a parasite now. Finally, there is a difficult plot, every time good prevails over evil. The protagonist appears, turns the tide, leaves many backup options, and then goes offline to wait. →The villain rises, the protagonist's backup and subordinates are vulnerable, and all lives are in ruins. →The protagonist receives the call and descends to earth again. Then the process of the protagonist saving the world → going offline → good defeating evil → going online to save the world is constantly cycled. From this point, we can see that the FW of Tianshou Law has no effect at all. Infighting and betrayal are everywhere. Why does good always prevail over evil? There is also the law of Tianshou, which is the negative effect of stupidity. You can only see the amazing wisdom of the dog and donkey of the true immortal. Even Lan Meng will give up the throne of the amazing wisdom!

Constantly repeating the previous writing method, there is no new idea, and in the later stage, it is basically not writing a novel but an outline. Anyway, I have no confidence in the author.

Just some personal thoughts, stacked armor (I don't know how long it will take for the author to write this world, or it is just a transition, and I have never written a novel, just some suggestions) For now, the protagonist has a very great advantage in spiritual power. The blue sky and red sun also took some of the smartest people in a country decades to come up with, not to mention that the protagonist can also use legends to condense treasure phantoms, and even point out time-based skills in the early stage as before. Therefore, within a short period of time, please do not reappear in this world with people whose cultivation ability exceeds that of the protagonist. This does not mean that the protagonist must be pushed all the way. Difficulties can come from many aspects, such as the enemy's strategy, the enemy's resources, or the number of enemies. And unless the protagonist is a genius and picks up thousands of genius treasures every day, I can't imagine that he can defeat the protagonist with a hundred times acceleration. Even the people around the protagonist used the second generation cultivation method at the beginning. Now the protagonist directly gives the blue sky and red sun phase. Although it may not be strong enough at the beginning, for ordinary practitioners in the later stage, each one of them will be a big boss.

The higher the realm, the more lifespan is needed to upgrade. The older generation of monks is actually a reflection of their racial heritage! If you don't kill the aliens, you'll treat them all equally, but you'll kill yourself? Are you sure you're not a traitor? With one slash, almost no one can become an immortal unless he has a big attack like the protagonist! Almost no one can become an immortal normally, and the future of the race has almost been cut off by you! How can I break through because my lifespan is not enough and my realm accumulation is not enough? The astonishing wisdom slashes his own race! Unbelievable! ! ! Wouldn't it be better for you to be so powerful and set the rules of merit and karma? Be less involved in karma and accumulate merit, otherwise too much karma will cause disaster. If you can't survive it, go to hell! This prehistoric calamity measuring system is much better than your crazy law of longevity! I don't know what you think about cutting off Shou Yuan with one knife. Anyway, when the person who was knifed grows up, he will have a favorable impression of the race that used the knife on him? I feel that in many cases it will lead to division, which is too inappropriate for human beings, and the hatred for blocking the road is greater than heaven! You've already stabbed your own race, how can you expect the people you stabbed to have a favorable impression? They say the older generation oppresses people and makes people despair! But now your Tianshou Law is the greatest oppression! The greatest despair!

The most important thing is that it is too boring. What your golden finger needs most is fame and people need to know it. But when the population was at its highest, you were just playing in the mountains and not going out. You have to wait until the person is almost dead before going out.

When I read this chapter, there was no one there, and I was worried that the author would cut it. I subscribe first and keep it until later. I don't know what other people think.

Other people's books get better and better as they are written, why do yours get worse and worse? Bai Shi is quite beautiful. This book looks so frustrating.

To put it more vividly or more unpleasantly, the protagonist is a giant parasite. All the people under the protagonist are trash who eat the leftovers of the protagonist. As soon as the main protagonist hangs in the sky and waits, some evil insects will grow up and eat up all these trash in a matter of seconds.

It's so boring. The concepts are all spread by you. It can be beaten like this. There is no protagonist. It is impossible to condense the concept even if you give this world ten thousand years. The first life is just that. In the second life, a demon emperor can be created. The protagonist is Dao Ancestor. Should there be a demon ancestor? The protagonist is so big, but there are still people in the demon clan who can keep up with him? It seems that the protagonist has worked hard but the result is useless. Monsters don't have the law of longevity. Why don't you just say that the monsters are the destiny protagonists?

The author's writing is very interesting, but the outline can only be said to be a fighting chicken among rubbish.

Author, the book you wrote is indeed too depressing. Everyone is very sane. In the second life, everyone will call the protagonist by his name. It will look much better if some enemies call him Daozu or Old Ancestor Also, the protagonist has been betrayed, but he still has to seize the time to practice, unify the human race, and save the world. This looks very uncomfortable. If the Zhu family directly and publicly supports the protagonist when he conquers the Eight Kings. It would be much better if there were some people with lofty ideals among the other seven kings who also provided help These are not meant to have any effect on the protagonist, but they can make the protagonist feel happy and make us readers feel refreshed and not depressing when reading.

No, I'm already speechless. Have you not written a novel for too long, so you can't write anymore? Now the plot is like a running account. I can understand that the author likes the time-based ability. This is too outrageous. It's only been a few hundred years, and someone has already understood the time spell without any reference.

I don't understand why there are so-called monsters again. If other creatures have wisdom, how can they unite together in the face of the enemies of life and death that eat them? I don't understand.

I read "A New World" and found it very interesting. It had a theme of struggle and was innovative, so I read this book again. It feels like eating history. Reincarnations are all about dealing with rebellions. In the later stages, the spells are gone and rely on fully automatic thunder tribulation. Will you go to play Pokémon in the Red Sky Realm later? ? Although there is a linkage with the previous work, I don't know what the purpose is. Could it be that you have been busy for so long just to go to the big city (Red Sky Realm)? ? ?

I haven't read the update yet. The latest chapter is about the entrance competition. This kind of plot is not interesting at all. The last book had too many plots like this.

This book is well written and formulaic...

It's really outrageous. The protagonist of this book has been reincarnated for 5 lifetimes. Except for the end, he basically has to start from scratch every time. A civilization that cultivates immortals has nothing from the beginning until the later days of heaven's rule, and then at the end, the protagonist has to create the world and become an immortal. A total of only 600,000 words.

Will the next version still be Baisei? For Baishi, use Laohao or some other name. I really like reading your books.

Is this gone? ? ? The author is dying 😐😐😐

If you really give the author a super-dimensional golden finger, he really surpasses 99 time travellers!

Since the stars in the sky can appear through praise and belief, the expedition to the big world should also be possible. Stop fighting within one world all the time. A group of pig teammates looked upset. Repeatedly saving the world, the protagonist wants to live forever, it is better to find a world where he can live forever. Stop ravaging that poor person all the time in the name of faith.

The monthly ticket is the first to bubble up

Not open yet? When will it open?

Can it be refined?