The Outcast: The Little Junior Uncle of Mount Longhu

Author, are you just writing nonsense? Companies are always extremely polite when facing powerful forces, precisely because they're afraid of ruining their reputation in the world of supernatural beings. Many tasks require the cooperation of the Ten Elders. When Wang Bing injured his classmate, Wang Ai directly dealt with the entire family, and the company didn't care.

In reality, whether Zhang Lingyu is strong or not makes little difference to the other Ten Elders' forces, and there's no need to test him. This is because the overall power of Longhu Mountain is too great. Regardless of your strength, no one else can afford to offend you.

The writing is a bit rubbish. Zhang Lingyu, despite his transmigration, relentlessly suppressed his combat power and continued his rampage. His talent didn't match the Celestial Master's. Why even write about Zhang Lingyu when the Celestial Master was young? The Celestial Master was already the top young talent around twenty, and invincible between thirty and forty.

To be honest, I can't relate to Zhang Lingyu from the original story at all. Even Natsume is portrayed as a despicable woman in the original work; only a pure-hearted boy like Zhang Lingyu could accept her.

I don't understand, is practicing Qi at six or seven years old really that early? Zhang Chulan had already mastered Yang Wu Lei when he was seven!

The character Zhang Lingyu is portrayed as somewhat weak, acting like a subservient grandson.

Hurry up and update! I want to see Xia He and Zhang Lingyu in bed together! 😍😍

Although I haven't read *Under One Person*, my initial impression was quite good until later when they inexplicably added a so-called "personality" character, completely changing the style. The smooth and comfortable writing turned into a clichéd playboy story with a protagonist's personality. After that, I couldn't continue reading.

Okay, okay, I finally found a novel to replace Zhang Lingyu! The original Zhang Lingyu was so frustrating. All he cared about was his image. When he was courting Xia He, she wasn't yet a member of the Quanxing sect. After they were done, he just left without helping her with her abilities, not even asking his master, the Old Celestial Master.

I quit after reading the chapters about the birthday banquet. When I first saw the title, I was really looking forward to it. The author should have been well aware of what readers expected – a simple recreation of famous scenes, the passing of the torch between Zhang Zhiwei and Zhang Lingyu. But what was it all about? I believe many people were deterred by these chapters. Enough said, the plot didn't meet my expectations, and the writing was terrible. I'm leaving.