The King's Avatar: Shadow Dancer

The writing is good, the battle scenes and storyboard perspectives are okay, but the text and drama are draggy, such as the chapter about Zhang Jiale and Sun Xiang, which is too long and too watery, and the author's sentence breaks are weird, and many places feel omitted, and the reading is not smooth. It may be that the author's perspective is brought in too much Summary: The text and drama should be a little streamlined, don't bring in too much of the author's perspective, the description of the fight and the shaping of the picture are OK, and there is hope for the future. (The above only represents my personal views and suggestions, please do not over-interpret it, I just raise the issues that I feel when I read the article, and have no other meaning)

I feel that the writing between Sun Xiang and Mucheng is a bit ambiguous. Am I wrong?

The first time I saw Shadow Dance was in Thief World

Why did he enter the palace after everything was fine?

There's no problem with the exchange of dramas between buddies, and the fighting scenes aren't stiff either, but they just look a bit weird.

Am I poisonous? All the novels that I put on the top list are without exception 😭

It's been delayed for almost a month, can you update the new chapters?

It's well written, why did you cut it?

I don't know if it's because I have high expectations for the protagonist. I always feel that as the leader of a two-time championship team, his performance is not as good as that of the five domestic titles. Is it because of his career?

Is this kind of game novel written by AI? I myself am a piece of garbage with more than ten stars in the King. I don't understand the game operations at all, and I can't understand the operations in this book either.