Bai Hao Changsheng

After a quick look, the setting is very attractive, especially the protagonist who actually has two identities, one human and one embarrassed. It is completely different from the previous two-protagonist books. The plot is very attractive. I look forward to the following chapters.

Respond to book friends' questions in a unified manner. 1. Don't worry about the protagonist starting out as a goblin. Bai Hao is just one of the thousands of protagonists. This book contains a large number of [vest flow] and [behind the scenes] designs. 2. The main focus of this book is the fairy flavor, not the traditional exotic beast style. There will be a lot of scenes where the protagonist becomes a mortal and travels, writing about Xiaoyao Xian. 3. The first nine chapters of this book have received mixed reviews. Looking back, it does suffer from the problem of too many characters, which is a big taboo for online writing. I hope you can be patient and the following article will definitely satisfy you. 4. Recognize the author's vest or the old baby from the previous book. Let's look back and focus on the new book. I am confident that I can write a fairy tale that will shock you.

I think you should start writing it directly from Chapter 9: Mortal Transformation. Although the previous plot of the fugue is good, there are too many characters, and those who are impatient can easily be persuaded to quit.

This book is really awesome. If it stays stable in the later stage, it will definitely become a god.

Let me tell you that I have decided to overhaul this book and then re-issue it (1) I will make subtractions from the book, reduce some settings, and dig deeper into fun, travel, daily life, enlightenment, and focus on the core characters. 2) I will overhaul the beginning, reduce scene jumps, and have a stunning start. 3) I will wrap up the main line and let the big plot stick to the protagonist. I originally wrote a new story and the editor submitted it, but after reading many of your comments, especially many book friends who insisted on voting every day, I was no longer willing to give in, so I decided to fight again. This is the way I can think of to save this book, and if you are willing to support it, you can leave a comment, and I will comment one by one to remind everyone when I re-release the book. If you have any opinions on the problems in this book, please leave a message and let me know. I value everyone's opinions.

The system feels a bit weakened. If the system is strengthened later, or the system is not mentioned at all, I think it will look better. The important thing is that the writing is really awesome, which is why I like it.

Chapter 29 begins, taking off in a straight line 😭

It's full of classical flavor, the author's writing is very good, and it's very comfortable to read. The protagonist is at a very high level at the beginning. There is nothing wrong with the invincible flow. He practices in vain and differentiates another human soul. He usually controls a country behind the scenes as a national master. So far, it looks good.

Why are slave collectors so awesome? I can't see what's so great about it at all. The explanation is so stupid.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

This is giving up. It's actually pretty good-looking.

I finally found one that suits my taste, so don't be too eunuch and keep writing. 🌚

The book is a good book, the writing and style are very good

Everyone, a new book has been released, titled "My True Way, the Miao Immortal". If you have time, you can read my nagging lightning protection. (The ones I am attributing to in this post are all those who left me serious messages in the "confession" of the last book-cutting article. Thank you.) 1. About fighting against the street and cutting books Because I was unwilling to accept "Bai Hao", I listened to the persuasion and bought this book. This book took a long time to be polished, but I'm not sure whether it will be a hit. My idea is that as long as I can get 500 orders on the shelves (which is actually very few), I will insist on writing the book until it is completed. If not, it proves that there is still a big problem with this book. This is the reality I have to face. I now need to write a book with some achievements and explain it to the people around me. The meaning is clear. You can follow it now, or you can wait until the results are confirmed. 2. Content of the new book The writing style of the new book will be very similar to this one, and it will also incorporate the excellent settings of this book (watching mosquitoes and turning into cranes, children's fun, the Six Masters of External Taoism, and the Tao of Flesh), but the storyline will be more like the story of "people" with "fairy flavor" rather than "a group of monsters and gods playing together". 3. In the new book, you can express your opinions and criticize at will, and I will listen to your advice. But I hope we won't mention the old books as much as possible, let's start a new one. Thank you. I want to fight again with the "Daomiao Immortal" in my heart. {"NickName":"Qianyan98","UserId":374532856}{"NickName":"Miss Su Baobei","UserId":200562201}{"NickName":" The Fool Chasing a Kite","UserId":365076200}{"NickName":"Yu Liudu","UserId":108600243}{"NickName":"Happy Elm","UserId":3399 87492}{"NickName":"Stupid donkey meat on fire","UserId":315971000}{"NickName":"Sleeping Three Thousand","UserId":375758529}{"NickName":" Dandan's treasure","UserId":218879262}{"NickName":"Bidanjiao","UserId":308992620}{"NickName":"Bidanjiao","UserId":30899262 0}{"NickName":"Hit someone fist","UserId":363194106}{"NickName":"lycddt1","UserId":461035}{"NickName":"Thirteen Mountain People","UserId":385363915}{"NickName":"The Free Outsider a","UserId":349188980}{"NickName":"Sacrifice Chihiro","UserId":20120 0895}{"NickName":"","UserId":318222725}{"NickName":"Chefyu Yelan","UserId":337245857}{"NickName":"Dark Night Dark ","UserId":212441406}{"NickName":"Husky Dog","UserId":187326130}{"NickName":"","UserId":210641680}

So what is this book like? Will Shen Nong, who has seen it, come out?