Everything Starts from Tian Long Ba Bu

Overall, the writing is okay, the writing style is generally good, but many titles are not used well when describing myself. There are many chapters in the middle that contain a lot of reviews of the original work and the author's personal understanding of the original work. The length is too long and feels unnecessary. Regarding the different worlds, I personally felt drowsy while reading the Ancient Dragon Scroll. Ye Kai insisted on finishing the scroll, Lu Xiaofeng only lasted half of it and skipped it, and Tianya Mingyue Dao skipped it. I just read the last chapter of Fan Yun Fu Yu. To be honest, it was a bit unfinished, so I just ended it when I came back from Fan Fu Yu and met my cousin, but it was okay. At least, let's open a separate chapter and talk about whether Xiao Feng cheered up and found a girl partner, whether Murong Bo succeeded in restoring the country at the end of the Southern Song Dynasty, whether King Dalun Meng practiced the peerless magic skill he dreamed of, whether Li Qiu Shui's treatment healed her face, A'Zhu Abi and Wang Yuyan didn't even have a decent wedding... Did Zhong Ling and Jiao Wan'er also accept it? It feels like the author messed up the plot because of poor grades. The ending of the characters in the main line of Tianlong, and everyone's unrequited wish, finally turned into something they wished for. This has to mention a few shortcomings. First, since Tianlong Murong Fu is the title, Tianlong naturally needs to be complete and detailed first. It feels that the length of Tianlong in the end is not as long as other worlds. As mentioned above, many holes have not been filled. The second protagonist is Murong Fu. Even if you want to break the void and pursue martial arts, you have to deal with the matter of your father's restoration of the country, otherwise you will not even be named Murong Fu. To be honest, when I saw the back, I felt like I was traveling through time just for the sake of traveling through time. It would be more interesting to bring back some talents from Jin Yong's low-level martial arts world and use them to restore the country to the protagonist's father. To put it bluntly, the main plot is unclear, and the overall feeling is that it is just looking for martial arts from all walks of life, and does not care about anything else. For example, if you agreed to find black jade intermittent cream for Wuyazi very early, you can immediately open a Yitian World. After all, the Ruyang Palace has the biggest target and is the easiest to find. Third, we have to talk about the Tianlong world born in Jin Yong after all. Are there many ancient dragon worlds that Jin Yong did not write about, such as Yitian, Liancheng Jue, Xia Ke Xing, Fei Hu Gaiden, Shu Jian and The Deer and the Cauldron, but ran to write about them without knowing why they went there, just to see more martial arts? I can still understand that the twists and turns are for the final break, but you cut off the ending directly and I am speechless... It is better to recruit some people back in Jin Yong's world, such as Chang Yuchun and Zhu Yuanzhang from Yitian, Ding Dian and Di Yun from Lianchengjue, Huo Qingtong from Shujian, Shi Potian from Xia Ke Xing, Su Quan from The Deer and the Cauldron, etc. Some of these are management talents, some are generals, handsome talents, as well as counselors who are good at using intrigues and people with strong martial arts skills. Many are popular figures. Finally, many people say that the author brings too much private information and his own understanding in an attempt to convince readers, and I think so too. Just like Ren Yingying's death and demotion, she turned into a heinous conspirator. There is also the death of Azi. A little girl of eleven or twelve grew up in Xingxiu Sea. In order to survive, she had to be cruel and had to kill people. Just because you think she is sinister or hopeless and just sit back and let her die? You didn't even bring him back for instruction, so you sentenced him to death? She is not the same age as in the original work, she is just a child... I feel unworthy of A'Zhu who is trying his best to be by your side. Including that Ye Erniang and Xuanci had an affair was the inference that Xiao Yuanshan induced Ye Erniang to do. It feels like the author particularly likes to describe conspiracy theories or dark things. I especially like to use conspiracy theories to infer and characterize characters when there are none in the original work. Several descriptions seem a bit extreme. This is completely contrary to the upright Murong Fu you are trying to portray. Just like the title of your book, Jin Yong's Tianlong Family, has to travel through many ancient dragon worlds. Who would like so many pure evils, ambitions and conspiracies in the ancient dragon world? This sense of fragmentation is really uncomfortable. It's a pity that there is a book shortage recently. I originally only read mixed martial arts. When I saw this guide, I started reading it with gusto. In the end, I can only say that it started but ended. It also failed to gather talents, martial arts and resources from all walks of life into one world to unify the world and revive Dayan. By the way, the author could actually challenge mixed martial arts in his next book. There are really very few good mixed martial arts writers, and few are especially successful except for stealing the show. Of course, whether it is Zhutian or Zongwu, the characters you choose still depend on the audience. Jin Yong is the main one, and Gu Long, such as Lu Xiaofeng, Li Xunhuan, Xiao Yuer and Hua Wuque, is okay. If you add too many others, no one will read it. The audience of Gao Wu's Like Turning Clouds and Raining, Shattering Void may not be as good as Feng Yun. I hope the author's next book will be successful!

Not to mention Murong Fu, even Yun Zhonghe in Jade Blood Sword all fought against generals. The gold-based martial arts have always been inferior to each other. From the very beginning, Ah Qing, the Yue Nv Sword, can defeat thousands of armies by one person without any effort, and by Feihu, he can defeat dozens of soldiers. In Tianlong, the internal energy can be released outward, but in Shooting Condor, a yang finger can only leave words on the board. The finger must touch the body to be useful...

What's so good about the Beiming Divine Art? Every time traveler has to do the Lingbo Weibu. Beiming Divine Art, is it interesting? It's better to find the Shenzu Jing, practice Baihong Palm Strength and Shen Zhizhi, these are enough. You don't need to know too much about martial arts, just be proficient in a few. People need to practice a unique skill for a lifetime!

Needless to say, the author has done his homework and has actually read the original work and the newly revised version of the original work. This alone has surpassed those writers who just follow what others say and have only a little knowledge. This is really worthy of praise. This is not to brag about how great it is to have read the original work, because it is not worth bragging at all. This is just the minimum respect an author should have for the original work and the readers when writing fan fiction. I am very glad that the author has done this, and I sincerely hope that the author can persevere, and I also wish that the book will get better and better 👍

After seeing the setting of Conquering Ye Erniang, I have no desire to continue watching. No matter which setting, the old version is the most hateful. Even the new version you mentioned, she is no better than Yun Zhonghe.

I can still bear it when your family travels through time, but I am really sick of accepting the four villains. Although Duan Yanqing said that the prince was deposed, he maintained his identity and would not kill people randomly. I can understand if you accept him. Ye Erniang had a reason for everything, right? Then the children and families she robbed deserved it? Needless to say, Yun Zhonghe is a lewd thief, and Nanhai Crocodile will highlight a random murderer. These three don't kill disgusting people, right? Why are you talking about Murong Bo being the root of everything? You are his son, where are you sitting? And if you accept them, do you still have a reputation? If you are their master, will the evil they do be blamed on you? If someone comes to seek revenge, what will you do? After all, it is natural for people to take revenge. Do you want to kill everyone who comes to take revenge?

In Jin Yong's books, the martial arts becomes more and more rubbish as you go further. From the Northern Song Dynasty to the Blue Blood Sword, you will be convinced. You can see Linghu Chong killing 15 first-class masters with just one move. I asked Linghu Chong to try to defeat Qiao Feng with Dugu Nine Swords, but he died before he even got close.

The most annoying thing to watch is group travel, the plot is messy. In fact, I watch Zhu Tianwen hoping to make up for the regrets in it, such as the death of Qiao Feng in The Eight Parts of the Dragon, such as A'Zhu, Zhou Zhiruo, Zhang Wuxia in The Legend of the Condor Heroes, Xiao Longnu and Guo Daxia in The Legend of the Condor Heroes died fighting in Xiangyang City, Baguio in Zhu Xian, etc.

At first, I thought that the author had to delve deeply into Tianlong before pursuing it, and other worlds were mostly used as a reconciliation and supplement. But now I see that there is no distinction between priority and priority. It is too chaotic. There is no clear main line at all. It is just blindly making comments here and there, and using the jade pendant to shine and travel everywhere to force explanations. The characters in several worlds do not show their charm very well, or have any obvious promotion and integration with the plot of the main world. Not to mention the Tianlong character who attracted my interest the most at first, but now I have almost forgotten about Wang Yuyan. There are obviously fewer comments on recent chapters. There should be some book friends who have similar views to me. The author must pay attention to it.

There is no way to cleanse the four evil villains! Conquering them was a huge failure.

Fairy Cousin

The writing is very good and the characters are well drawn. The problem is that the writing is too rigid. Jin Yong Gu Long's works are so familiar. Everyone likes the martial arts world and the peerless martial arts and wine-drinking beauties in Jin Gu Huang's works. If you want to do things in the martial arts world, the protagonist can be a hero or a villain, but you can't follow the plot and mix the scenes. I quite like the beginning of Murong Fu and Wang Yuyan, but the direction of the plot is far inferior to that of You Longsheng and Li Mushui. There is no passion to write your own story on familiar Jianghu personnel.

Just taking people through this road is doomed to endanger you. It's all east and west. If you walk through the world one by one, you'll still have something to see.

One point will be deducted for having too many Jin Yong colleagues, ten points will be deducted for taking people through time travel, and one point will be deducted overall.

Wasn't Murong Fu a descendant of Xianbei?

I have subscribed to your two books in a row. This one is obviously much more mature than the last one. I hope to see the next chapters of "The Divine Condor", "The Passionate Swordsman", "Lu Xiaofeng" and "Chu Liuxiang".

You describe Murong Fu's story in the third person. Why does the narrator refer to Murong Bo as "father"? Murong Bo is the author's father? Was this book written by Murong Fu? There is Xiaoao Duan again, Yue Buqun asked Murong Fu to spare Linghu Chong, but he called his apprentice "Ling Tu"? Just point out these two issues and delete the post?

Do you like the four evil men so much? You have so much development time, you have a golden finger, you want money and people, and the loyal subordinates and generals you have cultivated are not good. You have to forcefully pretend to be a whitewash and accept the four evil men. You are pretending to be the Virgin Mary. If you want to be famous, it is not such a method. If you like to transfer people so much, you can just go to Shaolin to worship Xuanci as your godfather, so that you can accept Ye Erniang as your mother.

Everyone who enters the Eight Divisions of Tianlong has to take the Beiming Divine Art and Lingbo Weibu. Isn't it annoying? If you don't have the basics of the Book of Changes, you can't learn Lingbo Weibu at all. You can easily become a public enemy in the martial arts world by wasting your skills and rebuilding the Beiming Divine Skills. What are you doing with them? Murong clan, the leader of the Xianbei tribe, started his career in the Liaodong Peninsula and traveled across the Central Plains with his iron cavalry. Which one of Murong Hui, Murong Ke, Murong Chui and Murong De was not proficient in riding, shooting, and martial arts? For the sake of rejuvenating the country, he neglected to learn the art of war, martial arts, and battle formations, and had to get involved with a bunch of gangsters who failed to achieve anything but failed. This is simply putting the cart before the horse.

Confused, labor and management just want to know whether Murong Fu has merged the memory of the time traveler, or the time traveler has merged the memory of Murong Fu. Which one is more important? If Murong Fu is the main one, there will be no problem. If the time traveler is the main one, there will be many problems.

Traveling through the heavens to the Great Song Dynasty, the goal is not to be the best in martial arts and live forever. You are rebelling. The people of the Northern Song Dynasty are in favor of the nobles. Why are you rebelling and running a bodyguard bureau? Abandoning the basics and pursuing the weak is a lack of magnanimity.

It's a pity, it could have been written in a very good way. As a result, a bunch of dynasties are mixed together, and it doesn't look good.

Abandoned the book, it's really too poisonous, and I'm not a novice. Why is it written like this? You can't beat Ding Chunqiu after learning magical skills. You travel to a lower world to learn poisonous skills, and you also expose the biggest secret and take people through time. If the whole world can't beat Ding Chunqiu, it's understandable for you to travel through time and learn how to do it. The key is that Qiao Feng, Duan Yu, and Xu Zhu can all beat Ding Chunqiu. How do you make us look at you? We can only say that you are too rubbish. You can't defeat Ding Chunqiu after learning magical skills.

He always sighs and acts like a good old man. Murong Fu's obsession is to restore the country. He has already opened a escort agency and built a city. He will start to prepare for hegemony in the future. However, he has such a soft character and no domineering attitude at all. It looks very boring.

I don't know if the author has any statistics. Anyway, as soon as I jumped to Gulong Jianghu, I skipped it. I wonder if someone is like me?

It's really poisonous. It's very poisonous when you take someone through time. It's even more poisonous when you take two women back to the Northern Song Dynasty from the Ming Dynasty.

The title of the book is actually quite attractive, but when I saw in the introduction that the name of the Gusu Murong family is known throughout the world, I immediately lost interest. The father and son of the Gusu Murong family and his men can be called classic villains. They can be said to be extremely annoying. I think most people will not take on the role of protagonists to make this kind of family famous. And the protagonist himself doesn't have a surname, why does he take the name Gusu Murong? This makes it easy for people to think that the protagonist is very low. Furthermore, you can travel across all realms. Do you still care about fame? This makes people feel even lower.

I think the most important place to go is the ancient tomb, not only for the half of the Nine Yin Scriptures in the water pool. As long as there are no descendants living in the ancient tomb, there must be martial arts secrets. No sect will give up their own martial arts secrets without external enemies. The secret book was destroyed, and for a family sect like the ancient tomb that was silent and had no descendants, the last descendant would probably make his own secret book invulnerable in order to pass it on to future generations, such as imitating Wang Chongyang's stone carvings as a commemoration. Stone carvings! Look at the Leshan Giant Buddha! It's by the river. The water vapor is strong enough! Thousands of years ago! What's up? It's really impossible for a few pieces of papyrus secrets written in some time-travel novels to break into pieces at the touch of a touch. It's so funny. You know that your population is small and you don't usually care about it. In the last few years, why didn't you hurry up and engrave it as a souvenir for future generations? Either silk, sheepskin, bamboo slips or copper plates will do. It's not like the ancients had no brains. Moreover, you can definitely enter the ancient tomb, and you don't even have to look for the water pool. The buff of the Dragon Breaking Stone is to block the enemy for ten days and destroy it yourself! The people inside have no tools and oxygen, and the dragon-breaking stone will be over in a few days. As long as the enemies outside are determined, they can be penetrated in ten days and ten months. Moreover, it is better to be safe. In this way, you can obtain all the martial arts of the ancient tomb sect, including the Jade Girl Heart Sutra, the Beauty Boxing Technique, and the Heaven and Earth Net Style, plus Yang Guo's Toad Kung Fu, Quanzhen Sword Technique, Finger Finger Magical Power, Dog Fighting Stick Technique, the Complete Nine Yin Manual, and the Sad Ecstasy Palm. There is also a cold jade bed! There is no epee swordsmanship, because it is not swordsmanship. It is the process of Shendiao using the terrain around the sword tomb and the medicinal effect of Sapqu snake gall to train Yang Guo to practice the epee with one hand. There is no move or skill, just you are lifting a barbell. A senior told you that if you eat some Zhuge Dali brand protein powder and lift your muscles under the waterfall, your muscles will grow faster. It is barely a secret, but you can't say it is a secret! Then you should take a look at the place where Zhang Wuji buried scriptures in Kunlun Mountain. This is an ordinary paper scripture, and it is indeed not safe if it is covered with a tarpaulin. But you are not looking for the Nine Yang Manual but for Hu Qingniu King Nangu's Poison Classic Medical Book. And I would like to advise you, don't practice the Nine Yang Manual when it is placed in front of you! There is a big danger! Because before the Nine Suns Sutra is completed, you cannot use it with all your strength, and you have to save your energy, otherwise you will lose your strength and die. For example, Zen Master Jue Yuan, a martial arts person licks blood with his knife, but when you are fighting with others, you have to remind yourself to hold back all the time, otherwise you will lose your life. You can't become a master with this mentality! Moreover, how could Jianghu be so dangerous that he could win every battle? Jue Yuan collapsed the first time he fought with someone. How many times can you go through hell? And the conditions for success are too harsh. If you don't have the halo of the protagonist, you should just go to sleep. The last one is Feng Qingyang's Dugu Nine Swords. Why do all the proud people want to learn it? Handsome? But Feng Qingyang said that Dugu Nine Swordsmanship was purely based on talent! Even if Linghu Chong has the halo of being the protagonist, Feng Qingyang would not be particularly satisfied, let alone you! Just say, can you memorize those thousands-word scriptures after listening to them three times? Basically, those who can't memorize it can't practice that thing! Don't forget that it's all about intention, not moves, it's all about talent and touch. If you're a deadbeat, you'd better just go to sleep! So if there is no special plot, Emei Kongtong, Diancang Kunlun and other sects that are not well-known in the Swordsman World are good places to go. Except for Hengshan, the Five Mountains Sword Sect is all ambitious people, but do you think you can become a nun? Do you believe that others will accept you? There is no chivalry in Shaolin Wudang, only business. Those martial arts that have not appeared may be more reliable. Learn self-defense for a few years, lay a good foundation, and read more Taoist canons, otherwise you won't be able to understand the Nine Yin Sutras in the ancient tombs! And don't even think about fighting with your hands left and right! Look at all the people in the training group! Guo Jing, the old naughty boy and the little dragon girl, is a kind-hearted person with a simple mind, but modern people still pretend to be innocent despite the dark thoughts of modern people who have been baptized by the Internet. How disgusting!

Abandoned the book, it was too poisonous, left, I saw a lot of people left,

Why can't I read a really awesome Murong Fu?