The Condor Shooting Halberd in the Air

How about the author not letting Huang Rong succeed the Mohist giant?

There is a bright spot at the beginning, which gives people an illusion and is not a good work.

Jin Yong was good at everything else, but he looked down on the imperial court too much. . After learning martial arts, he became a member of the emperor's family. . Learning martial arts requires resources. Who has the richest resources in the imperial court? ? No one in the imperial court looks like a master! This is very speechless to say. . .

If you use your inner strength so much that you can break through a city gate with one shot, your physical fitness will not be seriously injured by a palm from a second-rate supporting actor! I was so cool at first, but as soon as I encountered the plot mission, I immediately jumped out of my skin. The gap is too big and it is easy for people to abandon the book. I insist on trying two books, and if it doesn't work, I will withdraw.

The writing is very good. I hope to continue. Will you open a harem? I hope Longer will too

The biggest problem with Condor fandoms is that the main character is not good. After reading a few versions of the original work, you will know that he is not the same as the idiot in the TV series. For ordinary fanfics, such as comics, the protagonist has various flaws, so it is not impossible to write a character that surpasses the original protagonist. There are a lot of Condor fanfictions, and none of the protagonists can compare to Guo Jing in terms of moral character or family and country justice. Then I will watch you do it.

This book is less interesting, more boring to read, and the protagonist is not decisive enough to kill. He has clearly offended Guo Jing but does not kill him? If Guo Jing doesn't understand what the protagonist is doing, he will become a big enemy, which is a bad move! And you also want to help the Southern Song Dynasty? Yue Fei couldn't even help him, and Guo Jing died in battle in the end. Can such a dynasty be saved? In such a corrupt dynasty, the power of a group of people is of no avail. Only revolution and drastic reforms can have hope, so we can directly start an uprising! It would be great to give the people of the world a prosperous and safe country, and then destroy that small island country!

The biggest injustice in The Condor is the previous Fengbo Pavilion. You can kill the guy named Zhao and then talk about it later! Not to mention the others are pretending to be blind but the great one is serving the country and the people. It's disgusting. It's really disgusting.

Not bad, good start. I just like traditional martial arts. I didn't expect you to write new ideas about martial arts. Keep on insisting. It's good to value emotions. The greatest warrior!

To be honest, Huang Rong, the heroine, received the book inexplicably, very suddenly, and it felt like another mindless stallion novel.

I don't understand why Torre was killed. What's the point of involving individuals in national affairs. If you are so angry, why don't you go to the desert and kill everyone you see? Totally neurotic murder. This reason for turning against Guo Jing is just nonsense. Thinking about Qiao Feng's way of dealing with things, the protagonist's character is not even a hero, let alone a hero. Unappetizing

I just want to ask, you broke through the city gate with one attack at the beginning, and then were beaten by the two gangsters around Yang Kang until they were running away, huh? I was confused

The sadist, the Holy Mother, the logic is irrational, and the strength of the protagonist is forcibly suppressed. The author, you wrote it very badly, the author, you did it very badly. The author, your writing is very, very bad. Author, your plot is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. The author, your writing is too bad. The author you wrote is not good. (This message rebounds all attacks)

Tsk, it's very strange that the protagonist got the Nine Yang Manual and didn't practice it properly, but he ran around everywhere, interfered everywhere, and was abused everywhere. Why, author?

There is a little doubt, since Liangshan can defeat the Mingjiao, if Liangshan only has battlefield skills and does not cultivate internal skills, how can he be a match for the masters of the Mingjiao, and how can the heroes of Liangshan capture Fang La, the leader of the Mingjiao. When the young Wen Hou Lu Fang conquered Fang La, his martial arts was already at the forefront of Liangshan. The martial arts he passed down to his descendants could not defeat a few third-rate warriors when faced with natural supernatural powers. If the settings were changed, Lu Fang would only have passed down the halberd technique, and it would have been better if the internal power had been lost.

Can Tianlong martial arts crush the Condor Shooting? Not necessarily, martial arts is all about cultivation in the end. Which of the five martial arts is worse than Tianlongli? For example, Master Yideng's Yang Finger has reached the second level or even the first level, which is only stronger than Duan Yu's Six Meridians Divine Sword. Hong Qigong relied on his own understanding to complete the last three of the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. It is a way of combining hardness and softness, which should be the most profound concept in the world of martial arts, and the mentality of Wujue martial arts is definitely at the level of a grand master. Xu Zhu Duan Yu is a loser when compared with them. Both of them only know it but don't know why, and they can't reach the ceiling at all. The Five Ultimate Skills all have one pass, and the same moves like the Saints will not work for them the second time. For example, when Ouyang Ke fought against Guo Jing during the Condor Period, he used the Spirit Snake Fist in front of Hong Qigong and was worried about being blamed by his uncle. During the Condor Period, Hong Qi and Ouyang Feng competed with Yang Guo in the snowy mountains, and their moves were all clinical. The Dugu Nine Swordsmanship should be an overrated martial art. There is no denying that it is a superior swordsmanship, but at best it is the same as the seventy-two stunts of the Shaolin Temple. You can become a master with step-by-step practice, but to reach the ceiling like Zhang Sanfeng and Wang Chongyang can only be said to be a dream. I feel like there is something wrong with the mentality of being alone and seeking defeat. I can't find anyone who can fight with me, so I hide in the mountains and raise birds. I can't control my entry and exit in the world. How can I achieve the state of being as good as water and the unity of heaven and man.

The tag has an invincible flow, and it will be disabled at the beginning. . .

The novel has no purpose and the protagonist has no goal. If you want to be a martial arts master and enjoy revenge, practice martial arts well; if you want to save the people, develop your own power and work hard for decades. Before the Southern Song Dynasty is destroyed, it will be enough for you to overthrow the earth. On the one hand, there is a reserve of knowledge for later generations, and on the other hand, there is foresight. As a result, a small team was ambushed and the target escaped. The execution of the protagonist is too poor, and it is meaningless for the author to force correction (plot direction). Another point is that the protagonist may have lost his mind after traveling through time and space, and kills people in a high-profile manner as soon as he appears (this is not very important). He then moves to several cities and still kills people in a high-profile manner (this is very problematic). This is completely reckless behavior. If the martial arts skills are so high that one person can rule the country, then there is no problem. But it turns out that the protagonist is a third-rate character at best, and this is an act of seeking death. It's understandable that you want to vent when you are forced by the situation, but it's embarrassing to re-read decades of books and accumulate thousands of years of experience in vain. Up to this point, the protagonist's behavior is completely like a green forest hero who is prophetic (knowing the direction of the plot, which can be used to gain benefits, such as the Jiuyang that has been obtained), but his acting style is limited to gangster behavior. He is not a time traveler, but an ancient man who accidentally awakened the memories of later generations.

It makes me speechless. The first part is so perverted and the second part is so useless. I can still read it when you start writing so useless. It's really painful to watch you "hang up" after only a few minutes.

The wind was blowing, and I asked Tuhan, who would drink with me, and who would dare to stand in the way? The swallow halberd will not be returned to the person who ordered it to be returned.

The book started off well, but after Taihu, it started to change. The fanfics either followed the plot of the original book, or they were modified (the resources of the protagonist and supporting characters were completely wiped out, or the protagonist was forced to become a villain). The author of this book has too many personal things, and I can't read it.

Jiuyang was created by the wine-fighting monk after seeing Jiuyin. He has thick blood and defense and recovers quickly. The protagonist has practiced it, and with his natural divine power, his output has also increased. But the result is that except for bullying some passers-by, no one can beat him. It looks frustrating.

I just said this piece of garbage won't last long

I just found a book, The Leader of the Sun and Moon Sect in the Martial Arts World. I think it's pretty good. This one is also pretty good.

As soon as I saw that the heroine was Huang Rong, I didn't want to watch it. The main reason was that Huang Rong had too many scripts as the heroine and it was a drama! If you meet someone who traveled through time and space, you will definitely say: "What a coincidence, your wife is also Huang Rong? My wife is also Huang Rong 😳"

To be honest, I have seen a lot of time-traveling and eagle-shooting people. It is really rare for someone to be so weak. Even someone as lowly as Ouyang Ke can be said to be strong. There is no one else.

Which version of Huang Rong was brought in?

I just read some, very good Condor Fans, I haven't seen them in years. If the VIP version maintains its quality, I will subscribe and support it. During this period, there were many debates about chapter reviews. In fact, the reason was that there were too many versions of the books written by Jin Yong, which were revised over and over again, plus the creation of various TV movies. It allows many people who have never seen the original work to immerse themselves in the plot of the movie and TV version. I met a book friend who insisted on saying that women who practice Nine Sun Magic Kung Fu will grow beards and have Adam's apples. I asked him where he read it? He said it was from Huo Gong Tutuo in the movie "The Demon Cult Leader Who Slays the Dragon in Heaven". Well, even Wong Jing's spoof demon-reform movies are regarded as standards. Not to mention random fabrications, if you think about it for a moment, you will know that when Jue Yuan passed away, Guo Xiang also obtained part of the Nine Yang Magic and created the Emei Nine Yang Technique. Do the female disciples of Emei also have beards?

Another dead eunuch. . .

Weapons in the martial arts world are really hard to use and carry.