It All Started with Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty

My evaluation is not as good as that of Datang Bian.

There must be a conflict between the Huigong Dafa and the Nine-Yang Divine Art. One needs to temper toxins and the other is invulnerable to all poisons. If there is a bug, it will self-destruct and die. And I really don't understand why they both like to write about Nine Yin and Nine Yang. Nine Yin and Nine Yang are not even among the top five martial arts in the metal system. Beiming Divine Art is poorly written and there is the invincible Taixuan Sutra and the invincible Shenzhao Sutra. Why do Lao and Jiuyin Nine Yang fight to the end because of aesthetic fatigue.

There is a reason why this book is not popular. The Tang Dynasty is already a martial art, but it has become too old to be a martial artist. Wear one or two and forget about it, but there are so many that have no effect except to show off.

The protagonist can defeat Yu Wenhuaji, but cannot kill Xuan Ming and Xuan Ming with one palm.

I came here for Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty, but when I looked at the catalog, they were all by Jin Yong.

The Sunflower Book is the Jade Girl's Heart Sutra, Shi Lezhi!

Everything else is fine, but why bring Dongfang and Yang? I feel very uncomfortable! Although I am not opposed to transgender, same-sex, and beauty, I really don't like it! The current situation is that I just felt that the plot was good, and then the two Dongfang people jumped out and disturbed my mood. I really couldn't stand it anymore! After all, why does it take so much space to describe the views of the people around the protagonist on the East and get his appreciation? Is he so important that he needs so many people to accommodate him? In my opinion, when Dongfang practiced swordsmanship in the palace, and then got together with Yang and appeared in front of the public, they should be prepared to face the incomprehensible and critical gaze of ordinary people. How can we force ourselves to have an understanding in the conservative environment of ancient times? This is simply impossible!

No wonder not many people read this book. It's too troublesome to say eight words here. The author should not introduce so many explanations. I am in the world of high martial arts. What does it mean to always run towards the world of low martial arts? I want to see how good your book is.

Datang Qiang's first-class jump was seven to eight feet, and the grandmaster's jump was twenty feet. No one of Jin Yong's top masters can definitely reach five feet in one jump. He is already a top player if he jumps three feet high. Referring to the Huangtian Dafa (ninth level), Jin Yong is probably only at the fourth level, the Great Master of the Tang Dynasty is at the seventh level, and the Great Grandmaster may be at the eighth level.

Isn't it disgusting to bring Yang Lianting and the male version of Dongfang Bubai back to your island to help you guard women?

Why is it a martial arts novel, but everything you wear has to go to Swordsman?

There are several books about taking people through time travel that are very popular! ! !

Originally, it was good to write about martial arts, but you want to jump to Chinese heroes. This is very dramatic! The results are low, maybe because you are screening readers.

Why does the title of the book start with Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty, but when I look at the catalog, it says "Swordsman"? ? ?

On the one hand, he declares that he hates unlucky people the most, and on the other hand, he opens a harem. This is a serious double standard!

I'm really speechless. The plot of Xiao Li's Flying Knife is so disgusting and uncomfortable. It's obvious that there are no good people in the world except Li Xunhuan. Just kill them all.

Look, writing a book is still very promising.

I rarely see good martial arts books, but this one is pretty good

The author's writing of Yitian is really bad. It almost follows the original work. How come the protagonist who is decisive in killing becomes as holy as Xiao Zhang?

Yue Buqun is the hypocrite in the book, but Fang Zheng is actually the biggest hypocrite and the biggest mastermind in the book. This book is about to collapse again as it goes on.

After reading a chapter, I didn't talk about the great method of transforming energy from Hai Dafu, nor did I talk about the light kung fu master Qu Moumou who actually used a sledgehammer. He was preparing for a sneak attack and then ran away for a long time. In the end, the sledgehammer was still hanging on his waist. The level of wording and sentence making has already persuaded me to give up.

Let's compare Zhang Sanfeng with Tang Dynasty and Ning Daoqi.

To be honest, the nomads are actually people from the Central Plains who ran away because they couldn't survive. There are also people of various nationalities. That has nothing to do with the nation. I hate people who engage in nationalism the most.

If you don't understand martial arts, don't write about martial arts.

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.

From 618 to 907 in the Tang Dynasty, it was still a thousand years later, but it was already in the future. Where could it be? What about historical knowledge? But to be fair, I don't make jokes or say stupid things. It has a very classic feel. I continued reading...

After the world breaks through the void and ascends, the talents accumulated in several worlds will be continuously brought up to fight against the demons and angels in the multiverse.

Don't go to Longhumen! There is an invincible person there. . .

As soon as Chao Yu opened his eyes, he came to the prosperous age of the Northern Song Dynasty, walking in the village in rich clothes. Surrounded by his family's tenants and fields. "Chao Daguan, when are you going to rebel?" The surrounding villagers greeted cordially. Walter? Don't slander me, I'm warning you! Chao Yao went to the county to visit friends. "Brother Chao, when are you going to rebel?" A few heroes lifted their clothes, revealing various weapons inside. Faq, can you say and do this kind of thing casually? I have just become a member of a wealthy family, and I am not satisfied yet. Chao Yao passed by the Yamen Gate. "Executive member Chao, when are you going to rebel?" The county officials asked kindly. Your sister, everyone knows this, how can I still rebel? Who is it? Who keeps spreading. "Brother, it's me, Kogi Kurosaburo. Say it straight. This is my way of doing things. You don't have to thank me." What are you doing? You all know that I want to rebel, so can I succeed in rebelling? But I never expected that Chao Yu succeeded in the end. The government saw that he was eating, drinking and having fun every day, showing off his excessive debauchery and not taking action, so they rushed to his home and hung a sign around his neck that read "The rebellion is successful, he is a huge bandit". They then ransacked his home, imprisoned him, tried him, and took him to the execution ground. The one-stop service was completed in the blink of an eye. Chao Yan just came back to his senses and found that he had arrived at the entrance of the vegetable market, and the executioner's ghost-headed knife had been raised high. "Who keeps slandering me?" Chao Yan shouted. "Brother, it's me, Kogi Kurosaburo. I speak directly when I say something and never hide it. This is my way of life." ------------- "Ah!" Chao Yu woke up from his dream with a loud cry, isn't it right? Shouldn't the protagonist be me? At this time, a book fell in front of me. I saw it read: ... Dear readers, do you want to come to "Water Margin of Destiny" to read and give some advice?

The writing is fine, but the plot is too problematic... Brother, please be patient and start writing from the beginning. You kill people based on your heart but not your achievements. It's too miserable that you haven't done any bad things even if you kill well. It's only been a dozen chapters and you've traveled to several worlds. You have to pounce on it when you write it like this.