Clan Cultivation: Something’s Off About This Magical Treasure

A loser's fantasy novel disguised as a cultivation novel?

The subject matter is good, but the problem is the author's writing skills are severely lacking. The first few chapters are filled with digging up ancestral graves, which feels like a lump in your throat. The protagonist can't even retaliate; he has to bless the grave diggers and then suffers a beating from fire and water. It's incredibly frustrating. My assessment is that it's far inferior to transforming into a demon sword.

That's too unconventional, and he thinks he's funny.

The subject matter and the idea are good, but it's too vulgar and obscene. While it has comedic effect, it falls short. Avoiding lewd jokes would be more meaningful.

I'm relieved to see you're LV1.

It gets more and more self-indulgent towards the end, feeling like the level of a female author from a few years ago.

Some of the plot points are too disturbing and may clash with one's values, affecting one's mood and potentially scaring away readers.

The first chapter is already poisonous; they laugh as they dig up ancestral graves, but the next page is immediately filled with sorrow.

The description seems to have been changed?

You've disappointed me so much. Ever since "The Ancestor," you seem stuck in the same old pattern, never managing to surpass it. Even after finishing a book, you abandon it at the first sign of trouble. I trusted, encouraged, and supported you time and time again. I even switched from pirated to legitimate copies for your sake. I paid to read every single one of your books, hoping to help you.