Born to Be Immortal

Still have to develop slowly

I can only say that a book that could be written normally and well is becoming more and more rubbish.

I caught up on the latest, it's very well written. There are no big bugs, and there are no messy love affairs. Although the routines are old-fashioned, they are not mentally retarded. Another meaning of old-fashioned is tradition. The traditional cultivation of immortality has such a genuine taste, and it is not the hard work of ordinary people. It is good for me who likes to read old-fashioned articles on cultivation of immortality. In terms of the plot, it lacks some large-scale dungeons and some big climax points, but for me it's okay, it's better than forcing me to write some poisonous points of cup-filling routines. There are a lot of keyboard players in the comment area, nitpicking some details. If you have the heart to study historical records, you might even become a historian or economist.

It's getting more and more watery back there, and it's turning into a sea.

It can be regarded as a mortal flow + a family flow, but this book abandons elements such as the system and focuses on the protagonist's personal efforts. In addition, it has its own unique understanding of human relationships, family inheritance, and sect management. It looks more comfortable. In addition, the work is very good at writing about sword fighting. Although there are shadows of previous works, it is used well. The overall main line and battle scenes are very exciting.

Can you update the two chapters together every day?

What a pity. The writing is relatively good, but the updates are ridiculous. It chills readers' hearts

Is it because of unsatisfactory grades and lack of motivation?

The author is quite suitable for writing travel notes, but the relationship between people in the world of cultivating immortals is too boring to pretend to be 13, and the inconsistency is too serious. Huayingguo is the only main material of Lianhuaying. If Mu Xin is behind him And the fortune teller is already in the late Nascent Soul stage. It's Da Zhenjun. Now I have to break through. It's so embarrassing The author's travel notes really don't say that he is outstanding and fights with the public Favours, pretending to be 13, and not listening to each other made me fall asleep

The poison is too poisonous. A pill that prolongs life for twenty years and three thousand spirit stones is already poisonous enough. When I have meritorious service later, I will not exchange the pill for the uncle. After sleeping for three years, I exchange two bottles of pill for the uncle. Then I pretend to say that only two years are not enough to break through and build the foundation. Why did you go so early? Then you have to meddle in other people's affairs with someone who is better than yourself. I was beaten at a low level and screamed when I was beaten. In the end, I used my biggest trump card, my spiritual consciousness. When I first got the skill, I said I must not expose my spiritual consciousness. But I used it after a discussion with a little kid. In the end, I couldn't see the following foundation building. It was really the aura of reducing intelligence that worked. I suggest you don't fall into the trap. I wasted a hundred starting coins.

Give the author some reference I think the author is still successful. I finished reading it and voted for all the monthly votes. I'm not the only one! I hope the author will be more patient and careful, and this work will be even better. After reading it, I feel that the priority and logic are not smooth! The first Foundation Building Pill, the Foundation Building Pill described earlier is very important, but when it comes to the Golden Pill, it feels less important. Especially when it comes to ascending the golden elixir. What is described is the elixir of heaven and earth. The ingredients of the elixir feel weakened. The sect is not small and not strong. It is okay to buy less elixirs for forming elixirs. Of course, at least the protagonist won't feel top-heavy when he doesn't use the Foundation Establishment Pill and later upgrades the Gold Pill. At least it makes sense! Also, the spiritual root is a bit protruding. Anyone who has read the book on immortality knows that single spiritual root and double zero root, as long as there is no injury, usually there will be no problem at all in the Yuanying, and the cultivation will be very fast. The distance cannot be widened just because the protagonist has a spirit body. It's either the same, or there's about ten years of difference. The main reason is to let readers not feel so abrupt. It is also possible that other authors have written the protagonists too lowly, with only 50 to 40 digits. And the writing of single spiritual roots and double spiritual roots is too advanced, which makes us readers have a sense of gap! The second one is the training techniques and the sword used. There is no distinction between priorities. I am practicing fire-based skills, so I should be the master. There is no performance description at all when fighting, or using a fire sword or thunder sword, at least with the fire element, or describing the battle with fire element skills, because my sword also uses fire, so it feels logical and smooth. Either describe at the beginning that this kind of skill is versatile, or directly describe that it is a metal skill. Follow the sword like this. Still getting along? At least it doesn't look out of place for us. Hopefully the author will follow. Sort it out first and second, or make the description less obtrusive. Because swords and fire are both fighting types, I fight with swords and fire, and the proportions are the same. Or there may be a fire sword or thunder sword added to the sword. It's okay to weaken the fire element, but at least you have to make people lose their sense of logic. Of course, radish and cabbage each have their own preferences. To speak plainly is to brag. You have to make people believe it, and you can't brag randomly, right?

It would be better to get a monkey, the price is lower, or a snake, why get a pet bear?

They are all criticizing the author. I have read many books and there are readers of all kinds in them, but I have never been so unified in criticizing the author. It is considered famous 😄

Let's not talk about the layout issue. The protagonist is a genius template. As a result, with the sixth level of spiritual consciousness and the sixth level of Qi training, passers-by will die if they hit the fifth level of Qi training. There are a lot of tribesmen watching next to them. It's really frustrating.

The main reason is that there are no substitutes, and there is no similar one in the Xianxia genre now. Hold your nose and eat.

I originally wanted to watch the Genius style, but it turned out to be Gou Dao style, but in the foundation stage, there were only three or four Nascent Soul stage enemies, and they were also 666

There is no way to remedy the logical flaw later. So this book is average at best. Let's start from the beginning. First of all, Pig's Feet came from a family that cultivated immortals. The family used sacrifices to obtain two places, and one was given to the pig's foot. This is the first unreasonable thing. First of all, without considering the spirit body, no one can see it. If you have twin spirits, don't take the opportunity to give you three spiritual roots. Don't you know how to be grateful? You can say that your level is high, but others are young. I can't get pig's feet no matter what. Logically speaking. When we are in the family, the family can give everything they can to the pig's feet. Spirit stone weapons, points. To put it bluntly, the elixir exchanged for points was not finished when it came time to build the foundation. Isn't this enough? After arriving at the sect and building the pig's trotter foundation and returning to the family, does it count as forcibly taking all the family's inheritance and treasures? The only method and materials for forging a level 2 sword🗡 are given to pig's feet. The pig's feet are holding the sound bamboo sword🗡 to go for a swim, right? How did the family leader die? Why was he killed by an ichthyosaur? Playing dead? Isn't it all because of pig's feet? Pig Knuckle himself said that his closest relative is his uncle. Does he want to lose face? I waited until my uncle died to write down the elixir that would help him prolong his life and build his foundation. This Taoist heart is really awesome. My family mainly grows bamboo and inherits the craftsmanship. If the pig's trotters take the treasure, the family has no foundation, right? Bamboo cannot mutate even now. Right. Did you give a remedial inheritance? What did Baiyi give me? In order to get Level 3 Lei Yinzhu, I just forcibly split the family into two parts, which caused conflicts. Do you want face? Is this called helping the family? You have to know that there are two twin spirits in the family. This is a chance. Without the stable 3-level foundation building of the Pig's Foot family, there will be no problem, and the old team leader will not die. It's no problem to have two more level 4 inheritances in the family. Pig's trotters can bring opportunities to others, just like people with double spiritual roots. That's the logic. In the sect in question, that faction has been helping Pig's Feet. What will happen in the end? Including apprentices, they are all obtained in exchange for levels. Pig's feet are profit maximization. The most disgusting thing is how Pigfoot got the first level 4 sword. That's your promise. In the end, the level 4 sword was said to be returned because it was too high and it didn't seem like he could fulfill his promise. Do you want face? What level does Pig's Knuckle take and when will the sword be returned? For example, in 1985, the pig's trotters borrowed 100,000 yuan from me and returned 100,000 yuan in 25 years. Talking about two things is not inlaid. Are we all fools? There are too many problems and flaws. If Pigfoot is a monk who has no family or sect and follows the path of ruthlessness. It's okay, no problem. The problem is not the pig's feet. Doesn't the world of cultivating immortals talk about cause and effect? How can this Taoist heart❤️become the great road? Isn't this hard logic? Needless to say, skills and swords. All redundant. To have a sword box is to have a way to raise it and add skills. Complete set. How to play pig's feet and just exchange them for high-level flying swords. Come on! These are all personal opinions and represent my own. As soon as you read this book, you can tell that the author has no outline and just writes as he goes. There are many logical problems before and after. This model of pig's feet is used to cultivate immortality alone. Not suitable for the family clan. The main road is to walk alone without asking. But there are too many causes and effects involved. I haven't changed it yet. I really don't understand this.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I felt that the title of the book should be "Journey in Search of a Sword". I thought it would be a fresh and refined story, but it turned out to be more clichéd later on. 1. Regarding cheating: There are too many adventures that the protagonist has no time to digest. What he gains are opportunities that are at least Nascent Soul level power or above. It is a bit numb, but they are all obtained easily, but he still enjoys looking for weapons at every stage. After already having a high-level sword embryo and a fourth-level sword (which can be driven with very little mana), he still has to go Looking for the third level, I am speechless when I think about the broken sword formation later. I have obsessive-compulsive disorder. Every time I advance to a level, I must have a corresponding sword. And the inheritance of swordsmanship is really numerous and complicated. It's weird to be good at it. 2. About the character: I can tolerate everything else, but the character is hard to describe. At first, I thought the protagonist had a higher bottom line. After all, for his original teammates ( Spiders) and saving the sect, they all showed affection and righteousness, but later on, his attitude towards the family and condescension towards Deacon Lang who had helped him in the past, especially his actions during the Tianjian Sect trip, became more and more poisonous. Because of a bragging, the sales deacon was displaced (childish and irritable). No matter what the reason later, the protagonist directly created a secret realm with many flying swords. He died, and shamelessly walked away with a fourth-level flying sword. This is also a forced wisdom (the flying sword is difficult to refine, and the third- and fourth-level flying swords are hard to find. The leader of the sect even sent blessings. Is there no one like this?), And humiliated those disciples (in the future, the disciple will directly lose a big opportunity, and the foundation of the sect will be shaken). What kind of good person is this to let the protagonist leave like this. The protagonist is true and responsible, and he either insists on being honorable and upright to the end, or is selfish to the end 3. Regarding the supporting characters: What moved me the most was probably the Five Elements Sect coming to help. The chapter about getting the sacrifice for the uncle really confused me. If I were an enemy, I would say: You are crazy! The grace of entering the Tao is not that great (without your uncle, there are others who lead the way, you should thank the family system), but it is really difficult to judge the attitude of the clan leader (and Deacon Lang). It is completely different from Jiang Shu and others who have a close relationship. Elder Yang, who has dedicated his life to the sect, is also brushed off. He can obviously dig out the characters around him. In short, it feels like it has changed, and I no longer have expectations for future upgrades. One last thing: Even if you gain countless opportunities and master thousands of avenues, it is still not as good as that ordinary black bamboo sword when you first entered the Tao, which can teach people so much joy and unlimited imagination.

The girl from the Dual Cultivation Sect dared to attack for resources, and Feng Moyun, who came to avenge his fellow sect, dared to attack. After failing to kill you and losing half of his life, you only dared to watch secretly from behind. Just to say that he was born a fairy, he was almost born a coward.

It is no exaggeration to say that there is no sense of inconsistency even after jumping ten scenes and then picking up the following plot. It is really ridiculous.

This protagonist has come all the way to this point and can be said to only take but not give to the world of immortality. The blessings are too great, and he has taken over all of the greatest opportunities in the world. At the same time, he has tried to fish in a swamp many times, and when it is over, he has to show that it was not intentional. The only thing in the entire book that can be said to benefit future generations is that after transforming into a god, the power of creation is used to upgrade the Jiuyang Fire Mirror. Originally, with the help of the blood essence of the holy beast and the Taiyi Green Spiritual Technique, we could cultivate more third-level or even fourth-level thunder and fire bamboos in the environment of heaven, thunder, and earth fire, and indirectly increase the number of third-level or even fourth-level thunder and fire flying swords, which would benefit future generations. If I don't do it, it will be useless to me, Bai Zichen. When refining the Five Elements Sword, those rare fifth-level five-element spiritual objects in the world only serve as a medium and are not consumed. If they stay in the door, the Yuanying monks of the sect will have the opportunity to obtain a fourth-level five-element divine sword using the secret method in the future. If I don't do it, the most important thing for me, Bai Zichen, is to build the cave sky and integrate it into the cave sky. This is Bai Zichen, the most blessed person in the world. He can take everything he sees. It's not my fault that he takes all of them and uses them all. It's not intentional. I own more than half of the high-level flying swords in the world. Among them, I ascended to the fifth level and took them away. Two of the fourth level were given to the juniors. The rest I used as disposable consumables. You people in the world will not want a single piece. Do you have such a protagonist, who is neither immoral nor ugly enough? How can you call it that? White lotus also. Finally, I feel that since I am still in the lower realm, it is not too late. I hope that the Nine Yang Fire Mirror is just the beginning. You still have a lot of time to create benefits for future generations before ascending. Galaxy Sword Lord and Nascent Soul can save their sword intention in a book for future generations to understand, can't you? Other gods can leave their own sword intentions and swords on the stone wall for people to understand, but you can't? Others can leave behind a lifetime of learning and a vast amount of classics before they ascend, but you can't? Taibai created the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths Demon-Eliminating Sword Formation and it will be remembered for generations. Even the Galaxy Sword Master was able to create the Galaxy Sword Formation. Are you the best swordsman in the world? Can't you just drain the holy beast's essence and blood, burn various third-level or even fourth-level thunder bamboos and fire bamboos, and then take them away when you ascend?

Geneva, get your money back! Are you worthy of us if you are so stupid? Refund😆😆

The Sword Lord of Time, who was just invincible in the world, was immediately disturbed by the sudden emergence of four hidden veins. He was obviously about to achieve perfection and even become a god. He insists on creating some conflicts to slow down the plot. Author, if you don't have an outline and write where you want, and you don't have ink in your belly, don't write it.

The author has always been inconsistent in his writing, and the Blue Emperor's Sword of Eternal Life becomes more rubbish the more he repairs it. For example, if the incomplete Immortal Sword is hidden for 100 years, one can lose 200 years of life. Later, if the sword is improved and hidden for 60 years, one can only lose 100 years of life. Is it progress or regression? The full version will shorten your life by a hundred years, but it can still only shorten your life by two hundred years. This full version is too useless.

It's inconsistent and inconsistent. The latter part was probably written by AI and then modified. It completely conflicts with the previous setting.

🙂 The author of Shemale War wrote the protagonist as a villain, and the subscriptions are expected to drop sharply. Now he is trying to regain his respect, and there is such an embarrassing "no more than one thought to save the common people" chapter. It is so mindless that even the demon gods can take action when the end is coming. The explanatory text of the dozens of chapters written earlier is not like other authors who have specially arranged the plot and foreshadowing for this sentence. If the level is not good enough, he will save the people. The protagonist he wrote is not the one who wants to save the people from the beginning to the end. It is just... Quite sudden. The author feels that this sentence is quite 🐮. He specially thought of such an awkward plot. There is no one else. Either rise or finish it quickly. It is stupid as hell.

The image of the protagonist is both upright and upright, and he is hypocritical. This is a taboo in popular literature. I guess many people think the protagonist is cheap and disgusted. This is the effect

So beautiful, and there are a lot of trolls

I am really speechless after going through a tribulation. It was said earlier that the tribulation is not related to cultivation and is generated randomly. Later, it was said that the tribulation is directly related to cultivation. The stronger the cultivation, the stronger the tribulation. Every time, I am invincible in the same class. If I cross the boundary and kill the enemy, I still end up losing my life after going through a tribulation. Is it interesting?

It's hard to comment on other aspects. Everyone has their own preferences. For me, when it comes to the protagonist's power, this is one of the top masterpieces. Every aspect is written appropriately, such as the appearance of the saint in front of others, the nanny putting out fires, the return of resources, the perspective of the grassroots in high school, and the near and far impact of major events, etc.