The Lord of Yuanzhong Who Devours the Starry Sky

Let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. I think the opening section is very boring. The main character is indecisive. Secondly, it only briefly talks about the genetic talent of the protagonist without highlighting the so-called perfect artistic conception of the protagonist. Secondly, the plot is mixed. In the early stage, he is not from the earth, but he also describes the apprentice level and planetary level in detail. In my eyes, it is a fake original. I can't say how good the writing is, I can only say it is terrible. To sum up, I wanted to write about everything in the early stage, but I couldn't write with the feeling of devouring genius. This is probably the reason why my writing skills are obviously bad, but my grades are very poor. It is recommended that the next book or Earth Born should carefully describe the low levels. Alien Born recommends a quick transition to the genius battle.

Author, can you take a good look at the Swallowing Starry Sky? Thanks to colleagues, at least you, can you read the original work twice more? I don't have any objection to you changing the small settings. You always have to write your own stuff about this, hey, but tell me how a prison-breaking prison master disconnected the network of other people's virtual universe? That damn miss Yuanzu's most powerful secret method. He, even the Prison Breaker, can't cut off the Lord of the Universe. Even the strongest person in the universe can't do it.

The protagonist of the time traveler said to himself: Isn't Qian Wu very poor? How could he give me a cheat book worth a thousand points? He lives in Bengbu.

The cosmic state in the Koti era has also reached 1008. Changes in the human cosmic state can only occur during the original ancestor period. Because the existence of the original ancestors in the universe has increased, and because the original ancestors have been sealed, the universe has decreased. After that, there will be giant axes, and there cannot be any changes.

I don't want to explain it anymore. There are always people who don't read the introduction carefully. Anyone who talks about introduction issues in the future will be deleted! ! !

Don't write so much about your family, it really doesn't look good

Ever since Luo Feng came out, the protagonist's name has been invisible.

It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's performance. Like before, he clearly has the power of the universe overlord but deliberately doesn't show it. He has to pretend to be despised by others. Also, this time, you don't reveal your true identity and directly use the most powerful secret method to pretend to be the master of the universe. Then you go on an adventure in the universe sea and pretend to have obtained the ultimate treasure weapon. And the Zerg Queen just agreed to pay for a high-level treasure palace and promise not to do anything? Swallowing the Starry Sky doesn't have anything like a destiny oath. Do you know if she did something secretly? Although he is obviously very strong, he deliberately hides it, even if there is a reason, he feels aggrieved. It would be right to think more about it in reality, but isn't this kind of fictional novel just for fun? It feels like the protagonist spends almost all of his time in seclusion after breaking through to immortality, and participates in major events that everyone must participate in. Even if he wants to fight, he has to pretend to be very strong but he just can't show it. Even if you have to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, you won't be able to eat the tiger just by looking at you pretending to be a pig.

I haven't ordered it in the past two days. Let's see how many chapters it takes to siege and kill a machine. Since Luo Feng came out, it has become more and more watery. I think 30% water injection in fan fiction is acceptable, and 70% is okay. After Luo Feng came out, after subscribing to it, it was basically the same as not having read it. Before Luo Feng came out, this book was quite amazing among the Devouring fandoms (updated status). The writing behind it is not as impressive as before 😒

I just read Chapter 16, let me talk about the shortcomings. 1 The protagonist is a time traveler who has seen the Devouring Starry Sky, but he is not eager to improve his strength after being swallowed, which is unimaginable. Isn't the protagonist afraid that the planet will be discovered and everyone will be made into slaves? Or is this planet already connected to the universe? 2 With reference to the indigenous planets like the Earth, laser cannons were developed based on the ruins of ancient civilizations, and they are not afraid of monsters below the king level at all. After connecting with the universe, we immediately raised monsters to pigs. The planet where the protagonist is located seems to have a pure technological tree that is crooked and unreasonable. It has technological products for communication but no weapons to kill enemies? 3 The protagonist is a time traveler rather than a native. You just want to be a salty fish and don't want to work hard. At least you should work hard to achieve immortality first. First complete the achievement of immortality, and then find a remote area to survive. After the destruction of the original universe, you can directly enter Luo Feng's small universe. You are still an apprentice and you don't want to work hard, so you are still a time traveler?

The book is very good, but there are only two points. One is not to overestimate Cody, and play the trick of going hand in hand. Change to surpass at the right time, and leave behind when you should. The original Coty is a genius on the same level as Eclipse. If you play with him and go hand in hand, in Luo Feng's era, he was just a high-level venerable and not an overlord. The other is that he is too slow.

If you don't understand, just ask Boya. You said she was a genius who emerged in tens of thousands of epochs. Why did she become the master of the universe in 100 million years? Even if she understands the heart of the beast god, her previous realm is so fast. Keti is 🤡 the protagonist is 🤡 Luo Feng is also 🤡, and the pig-footed apprentice is 🤡 among the 🤡

It's getting boring. The protagonist you wrote must be inferior to Luo Feng.

That is, the protagonist goes to climb to be the strongest instead of just muddle along at home. Although in reality it is mostly the latter, but if the novel is still like this, why should I read your novel?

Fuck me

I don't know what the use of adding a force is. Although it is quite novel, it is logical that the sixth-order universe master should go to the universe sea to explore his inheritance. Will this force be of any use in the later period? It feels like it will also require energy to be a nanny.

In fact, the human race's cosmic kingdom is regressing. The human race should have been stronger in the original period, but the universe was small at that time, but its territory accounted for a large proportion.

There are a lot of problems in the early stage. Author, you take the realm too lightly. In the original book, the universe-level can only become a domain master by realizing the realm. In other words, many universe-levels don't even have a domain. Secondly, the original Hong and Lei Shen joined external members of the Virtual Universe Company based on their fields alone, which shows the scarcity of fields.

The plot is generally passable, and the middle period of it is okay. After Master of the Universe, it is more streamlined and lacks new ideas.

If you haven't read it for free, the author will add some details 🙂

The quality shouldn't be that good. Those who don't know may think that this book is not good. Has the author deleted the review? I personally feel that this book deserves at least 85 points, and its quality is actually considered to be above average among Devouring fandoms. Why no one comments?

I feel that the protagonist is not cautious at all.

A small universe in which world beasts cannot swallow the perfect ultimate divine body with 100,000 times the genes.

Come on

Come on, author

The writing is good and looks very smooth, which makes me feel happy. The monthly vote has been cast and you will continue to pay attention. The author will continue to work hard.

The original space boat was designed to enslave the realm beasts. However, after being killed by the realm beasts, it floated in the chaos. It was pulled to the cosmic sea by the will of the original universe and became one of the three Jedi.

Life plus the world, isn't this the avenue of creation?

"Cultivation Sect Beating Workers", fellow Taoists are welcome to read it

Book friends who are interested in designing characters can post a reply. You mainly need to provide the character name, level of strength, background, etc. The more detailed the better. The author will choose suitable characters to add to the book. In addition, the third volume will end next month, and the fourth volume will be the battle between the peak geniuses of the universe.