Farming in the Beast World: The Villain's Little Cubs Are Super Clingy

Can it be changed to 1v? Alas, I feel more and more uncomfortable when I see it later.

The front part is pretty good, but the back part is a bit messy and inconsistent.

It feels strange to see the inheritance. There is no need to make this part out. I have no desire to continue watching. The baby was raised well in the first part, but after her relationship with the male protagonist warmed up, the baby's role was very small. The setting is quite fun, the front is quite fun, but the back stretches the crotch a lot 😐😐

The first part is more attractive, but the subsequent characters are relatively flat, black and white. I get a headache every time I see a large section of a quarrel. The plot is a bit long-winded. I skipped through the memory segments of Beast God's Legacy, which didn't really appeal to me. The character expressions in Beast World are sometimes too modern. In the early stage, there was too little preparation for the big world view and the Dragon Clan, and the Dragon Clan seemed too incompetent and vulgar. All in all, the beginning is quite attractive. I didn't manage it well in the follow-up. I haven't finished it yet, I'll catch up on it.

I followed the Douyin short drama, but the updates on Douyin were too slow, so I finally found the original text hahh

After seeing the inheritance of the beast god, there are some parts that I want to discuss with the author. Let me talk about my position first: I like the author's temperament and support the author, but I also want to express my own opinions. I just hope that the author can see it and have another perspective. After all, part of the depression of creation also comes from the loneliness of thought. There is no need to adopt it. I hope the author will write better and better, and his life will be happy and smooth. The most important thing in a novel is the closed loop, 1. The closed loop of plot; 2. The closed loop of characterization; 3. The closed loop of world setting; writing style and connotation are all secondary. When I saw the chapter on the inheritance of the beast god, I just wanted to discuss one issue, about the closed loop of Si Yan and Wang's character creation Let's get to the point: This chapter is about reliving memories. In the middle chapter, there is a mention of making up for regrets, which was pointed out by Gecko. Let's talk about Si Yan first 1. Social choices: From before to this chapter, her various attitudes and boundaries towards delirium, geckos, four children, friends, colleagues, and acquaintances are not very fixed. This is generally unreasonable. People have similar attitudes towards people who are in the same circle of interpersonal relationships, but in the first 210 chapters, this aspect of Si Yan was not fixed. 2. Personality: For a woman who travels to a low-civilization and high-martial world in the last days, if she has a baby to take care of, Si Yan should have the character and behavioral characteristics of caution, killing and self-preservation. Many of her choices do not reflect this character, but fortunately, her character is still firm overall. (If there is no caution and killing, there must be high adaptability and wit in the opposite direction) 3. Memories branch: This is a very good event setting, and it is at a very critical time node. It is a good opportunity to cultivate the mind, flesh out the characters, explain cause and effect, and supplement the world setting. If the previous incomplete closed loop was intentional, then Si Yan should be more determined at this moment. Let's talk about delusion There are no other problems, but there are two problems that are all about personality building. 1. He himself has gone through many vicissitudes of life and is cruel and calculating, but unlike others, he has experienced killings since he was born. From his own point of view, his subsequent experiences should actually be okay, so in the normal timeline, his killings are restrained, and he may be more indifferent, showing the problem of an overly stable Taoist heart (this part actually has some manifestations, but it is a bit too little) 2. The growth of the recall part (this is difficult, I guess) It would be difficult for anyone to write it well) The emperor's appearance, no thoughts, no hope and no regrets, no regrets is set up, but no thoughts and no hope need to establish delusion's world view and values. It was obvious that he was confused before. At present, it seems that this opportunity has not been used, which is a pity (I don't know if I can help you) There are many other problems, but I feel that if the author continues to insist, he should write better and better. If fans need to contribute ideas, I will be happy to help.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my favorite one is Bai Feng. Help me, the affectionate second male lead is so good looking, with a little bit of paranoia I really love it. . The white-haired Fangtong is paranoid 😍 and is simply dancing like crazy on my

I haven't read a novel in several years! In junior high school, all I read were Su Xiaonuan's books. I re-read it when I was bored in college. I enjoyed reading this novel. The protagonist can also reflect the author's perspective. I like it very much! Very correct! Halfway through the movie, I kept thinking that Bai Feng can't get out. I want to take a shower, eat, and sleep in class. This character is so attractive! I would like to ask the author if I can continue writing~ It doesn't matter if I can't~ And the author, I can't seem to send you a private message~ Dear author, do you have a Weibo or other social media account~ Can I be a loyal fan of Little Star~🥺 Finally, I wish Little Star peace, happiness, and all the best!

No wonder no one reads such a intellectual novel. There is a shortage of water in the blazing day, and even if there is space, they don't know how to store water. It's rubbish. I can't stand it anymore 😰😰

I just like dedicated heroines