I Have a Pocket Dimension to Raise Beastmen Husbands, and the Fierce Female Became a Group Favorite

Can Xie Guixue have more roles? I like this one the most. Ahhh. The motivation for subscribing is to see more of him.

😡 Updates are so slow. I suggest you write 10,000 words a day. Don't be too tired and go out less often and write more.

I like to watch good things. I update them very quickly. It's not enough 😭😭

First of all, I sincerely hope that the author can really use less adjectives and modifications. I have seen it countless times: elegant, noble, cold, and perfect. Basically everyone has a very unique temperament. In fact, there is no need to modify it like this. At present, I have only seen more than 900 chapters. I feel that the author wants to write it seriously. Too many modifications have the effect of dragging down the article. The article is scratchy, but if we don't find a suitable one, we don't need to use those adjectives over and over again. We know that the male protagonist of the heroine is very handsome and beautiful, so we don't need to describe the noble temperament, appearance, and a lot of adjectives all the time. I started reading from Chapter 1, that is, starting from last year. I see that the adjectives have been used over and over again a million times. We can be more simple and there is no need to repeat the description of some details we know. For example, the elixir that asked the enemy for inside information. This elixir was used on Liu Mengyan from the beginning until later. Every time it was used, it had to be explained. In fact, there is no need to explain, we all understand. Next, don't dig too many holes. It can't be filled at all, it really can't be filled at all. I started from the front and saw that there are many holes in the back. I found that they have not been filled at all, but the author is still digging holes. It has reached more than 1,000 chapters. Maybe the author said that he will unravel them one by one in the future. But to be honest, some of the holes that have been filled in feel very sloppy. The content is a bit too blank and empty. I just want to fill this hole and fill this hole. Finally, I want to say that I was indeed attracted by the content at the beginning. The author does have ideas, is serious and persistent, and has been updating it until now. Although I have said so much, I still support it because this is my bedtime reading 🌙 Come on, author.

Hey, please take your seats

Author, if you don't know how to write, don't write. What nonsense do you write?

Watching my favorite beastmen become gods, some of them didn't see Mu Yao for the last time. It was so sad that I cried😭. I hope that the beastmen will not forget the heroine when they become gods. Don't be so indifferent. I hope the beast cubs will do well in the divine world. I really like Hua Linye. Please write more about Hua Hua 😌

I want to see Xie Guixue!! At present, these three are a little tired. They have to be tied together for some reasons, and then they have changed as they get along. But Xie Gui Even though he was seriously injured, he still saved the heroine. He did more in action and less in words (for comparison, although the other three are also good, they always feel like elementary school chickens). What a beautiful quality this is. I want this, I want this, I want this to be the male protagonist, woo woo woo

It's so hard to read. There are few updates in the first place and there's so much nonsense. It's so unsatisfactory. I should have finished it earlier. There's no quality in writing with such delay.

The front is quite beautiful, but the heroine in the back seems to have no brain, and can't judge anything. She is reminded by the system. Without the system, she basically can't do anything 😒😒😒