I'm a Virtual Idol in the Beast World, and Five Clans Are Fighting Over Me

Oh my god, the progress is too slow. According to this writing method, let alone two thousand chapters, thank God that it can be completed within twenty thousand chapters. I am really speechless when writing such nonsense. This is not how money is made. What is the purpose of writing these useless plots...

I really like Ba Tuo, and it's really hard to like him now. I see so many people dislike his twisted character, is it true that no one understands him? That kind of hatred shines brightly on me. Originally, the orcs in the Upper District had unlimited prospects and outstanding abilities. Even if he was abandoned by the race, he could rely on himself in District 19. He knew his hybrid identity and felt inferior, but he had his own pride. When the heroine proposed to take him and Cook up there, his first reaction was to refuse. His love for the heroine was truly the purest. He protected her even before he knew she was a female. In 19 In the black market in the district, when the heroine didn't fully believe him, he was very kind to the heroine. He was hard-spoken and soft-hearted, and silently planted the spherical camera he wanted. Later, in order not to worry Gu Ning, he was reluctant to use inhibitors and gave them all to Cook. I see a lot of people don't like him and say he has all kinds of petty tempers, which makes me uncomfortable. This is the first time I like a character in a book so much. The author has created it really well. I can understand every time he gets angry and acts out. Because he has low self-esteem, he is afraid that the heroine will abandon him. He is smart, has language talent, and actively wants to learn the heroine's native language, help her career, and become her agent. He even Later, I was named Guli because the female protagonist was called Little Fox in her native language, which has a similar pronunciation. Even I, who like multiple male protagonists, think that the more men there are, the more impressive they are. But now I feel that I feel so sorry for Bator. I don't hate the other male protagonists. They have also done a lot for the female protagonist, but Bato is different. "He fell in love with her before her smell, and was obsessed with her before her genes. His heart He understood his love for her before the male instinct. " After Bato came to the table, I saw Birdman coming to the table. I felt so uncomfortable. Obviously I like to watch this kind of plot with many male protagonists. Although this is the world of beasts, it needs to accept the settings of multiple male protagonists. But later, Bato and Alex were detained, and Bato needed to do social practice to reduce the punishment. The female protagonist knew where Bato was doing social practice. Practice, but she never found him. She was with Birdman. Birdman was even the first one to fully eat meat. Birdman even hugged the heroine while driving. Later, he was seen by Bato who was working as a waiter. Originally, Bato smelled the smell and ran over to find the heroine from a distance. When he saw this scene, his heart was a little broken. I was also very worried. Moreover, I saw many other book friends criticizing Bato and thinking he was annoying. , The troublemaker😭😭😭 Please, give me more Bator scenes The arrogant little fox really pokes me hard

Can you please not give the heroine a wit? She signed the application form without even reading it clearly. Why didn't she read it when she clearly translated it? Why didn't she ask clearly when she felt something was wrong? And those male characters, why did they have to do so intermittently? Is it normal to take off their pants in front of the heroine? Is it normal to come out naked after taking a shower knowing that the heroine is a female and still outside?

Is there something wrong with my taste? Ba Tuo's personality is a bit annoying. He is guessing and coaxing every day. It's really tiring. I thought this kind of character would gradually turn into a role like an old mother in the plot, but it's not possible to choose a mate, right?

I got it from other AI videos. The overall text is slow-cooked and occasionally sprinkled with sugar. The world view is large and novel. The character traits of the orcs are also written in detail. The background of the military and other things is too detailed. I almost fell asleep while watching it. I hope it will be reduced appropriately. However, after reading this, I will read other animal stories. The author is very careful. At first, I came here for Cook, but now I find that I like Alex the most, he is gentle, powerful and low-key, and he is also good at flirting, followed by Fairy Bird and Leo. I hope they can be on the table soon. I personally don't want Bato as a spouse. Although Bato is very good, I prefer family. (Maybe Bato has an awkward personality and is a hybrid??) Hey, at least it's a fox in District 2. I still hope it can be reversed. Also, can Cook be changed back? Don't really become a pet. Also, Mei's mother's character is too xp for me. Can she show up more?! ! Another note: The author's description of female orcs is really good, gentle and powerful. I have read too many bestiality novels, all of which involve multiple births, and female competition or the deterioration of women. In contrast, the author's three views are too correct. Finally, are there any slow-paced articles like this? Please recommend. It's really not enough. I don't want to read exciting articles about brainless childbirth.

Wow, I thought this was the kind of mindless Mary Su Shuang novel about the beast world, but I didn't expect it to be different from what I thought. It felt a bit like the daily flow of survival in the interstellar beast world, and the author spent a lot of foreshadowing to describe the relationship between the heroine and her friends. This is really a starting point, and this adds to my stereotype of the starting point.

The writing is okay, but the plot is too slow and the part that introduces the worldview setting is too little. It is more like a daily novel without any core of writing. Either you can guess the next plot at once, or it is nonsensical. There is no desire to read further. It is recommended that the author write more details about the worldview and species characteristics and write the plot faster.

I really like Cook. No matter how many harems the heroine has, I feel that Cook is really the number one. After all, it was Cook who rescued the heroine when she first time-travelled. During the time when the two of them were together, although they were very poor, I felt it was really tender. I see many people in the comment area saying that Cook may not be on the table. Oh, how pitiful. They said that in the future, Cook will become more and more like a pet dog. I feel so sad! 😭😭😭😭

It's been a long time since I've been following up on updates, so maybe the teacher has some impression of me. From the beginning there were only a few people to the book, but now more and more people are following it. I feel happy for the teacher, because I really left a lot of comments on Xiaohongshu recommending this book. But I might give up and say something less flattering. I really don't like Bator, maybe because of the character. I have always felt that the essence of a tsundere is not poisonous tongue, nor arrogance, but coquettishness. But Bator seems to have only Ao who is the most obvious. Although he did a lot in the beginning, which I would have loved if they had been a family member, it makes me sad to see the progress like this. Alex was not even officially served yet and he was going to serve it again? However, it is difficult to agree with others. I am just one of many readers. The teacher's writing and plot are all good, and I hope this book will be loved by more people. Best wishes, Teacher Shui Qingqiu, and goodbye.

When I told the truth, I really didn't understand Alex. Although he was very gentle, he always wrapped his temptations with gentleness and made big decisions without consultation, so the cold war was completely deserved as punishment. After so many chapters of prodding and testing, I could smell it and know it was a female. The author also arranged a scene where she takes off her clothes, smells them, and gets started, which is a bit confusing. If they had met several other male protagonists first, they might have handled it better. Xiaoniao and "Old Man" were both confirmed in one face-to-face. Is it because Alex's military identification training score is not high... But the limitations of each character make them more three-dimensional, and the second brush will add the world later. As the story unfolded, I could better understand Alex's difficulty. The wolf is really a good wolf. It was that foreshadowing that made me wonder if he was going to recruit a son-in-law for the heroine and unify the wolf areas when he later arrived in the fifth district... As for Bato, he brushed one as a passerby and the other with micro-powder, a fox with rich layers. When I first brushed it, I just felt that he looked like an old woman. She washed her underwear with a cold face and closed the house with a vicious mouth. She did a lot of things silently but it became thankless because of her awkward mouth. The second brush found that he was good to the heroine before he knew she was a female. Although there must be incidental reasons for taking care of Cook (Cook should have known that the heroine was female from the beginning, after all, there was no covering smell when she first wore it), but in general, it feels that the heroine lives in front of him more concretely, and the level of his love for the heroine is not just a precious female. He went from being the proud son of heaven to being an outcast and bullied hybrid. His pride and ever-increasing distortion value put him in a state of chronic stress from the inside out. He even gained his human form through a desperate struggle. His unstable character is not only a result of his experience. It is caused by hormones and hormones, and it is also the way to survive at the bottom of District 19 for a long time. If another person goes through his experience, he may not do better than him. I very much hope that he can find a way to survive for a long time in the future... The same goes for Cook. Although he has abilities However, he still tried his best to protect the heroine. I don't know if he will have a chance in the future... I have thought more than once that if the first person the heroine met was not Cook, she might not be in such a mess. But then again, how could anyone with high status appear in the heroine's life? In the initial refresh place, it was lucky to meet Cook instead of other bad beasts in a place like Area 19, so Cook's White Moonlight status was sealed... I don't want to comment on the wolf instructor and Leo, especially Leo, which is hard to describe. Although the old lion seems to be strategizing, it is really hard to think about how he will be on the table in the future... Is he going to form a force through the heroine? He sent all his men there hhhhh, don't compete with the beautiful ones in the end and can't win the young ones. There are too many people in the military now... The white fox feels like Bator's original trajectory control group... The ice wood beauty setting of the little fairy bird is charming and beautiful but still a little flatter than the other two who have already been on the table. I am not afraid that the flowers are poisonous, but I am afraid that the flowers are not fragrant. Fortunately, the native family has a lot of help. Otherwise, these dragons are surrounded by dragons, let alone eat meat, and they can't even drink the soup. The characters that will appear later are most anticipated by Kaper and west. So far, Kaper's character is well understood, not greasy or vulgar. It's clever and interesting, I hope it won't collapse later... I hope they love Gu Ning Benning, not just a female symbol... Generally speaking, the author becomes more and more fluent as he writes, and many setting things are slowly being completed, although I feel that the more male beasts there are in the back, the more brilliant the female protagonist will be. There is a trend of less, but it is still within the controllable range. I just don't know whether the focus of the future of the article will be on how to be competed by all parties, or on the heroine... Personally, I think the heroine is more charming when she is tough and cautious... If she is only being competed for as a "treasure in the palm" of a female, it would be a bit of a waste Such a huge world view... Last and most important, the author takes good care of his body, keeps his mental health, and keeps writing for a long time hhhhh. Comments are only everyone's subjective opinions based on their own experiences. Do not affect your writing spirit 😅