The Outcast: Dark Star's Second Life

When it first came out, I saw Zhang Zifan drinking and teasing and raping Lu Linxuan, and I was really poisoned, so I just gave up on it. Now I heard that it was very good and I don't want to go back to watch it. It's just that the relationship scene was inexplicable. Just a little teasing and you'll get it. Swordsman's heart was stolen because his senior brother was not around. There is a lot of foreshadowing in emotional scenes. I'm still very angry after seeing it.

It's best to accept Lu Linxuan. Zhang Zifan didn't disgust me to death. He drank, molested and raped Lu Linxuan. I almost gave up the show when I saw this and had to endure the nausea to continue watching.

The results should be about the same as the other book "Delinquent Reborn". If you follow him a little more than him, his double book, "Delinquent" will update one chapter in a few days, and then it will be released early. I have already kept it.

Brothers, I went back to the dormitory. My roommate is very noisy. To sum up, he is a person who makes crazy noises. How loud can he be? He was making noise in our dormitory, which could be heard from half the corridor. I had to correct my paper in the dormitory these days, so I couldn't leave. The current daily updates are written by me squatting on the stairs. I'm sorry. I will resume the updates after I finish my defense and leave the school to make up for the updates I owe. I'm really sorry.

Watching this anime really makes my scalp numb. It's really a scam for a bastard like Zhang Zifan to be able to sit on the throne, 😂

Alas, if Li Xingyun said that you are willing to bow down for me, if Gangzi saw it, he would probably be so happy that the coffin boards could not hold it down.

In the original anime, the relationship between the Empress and Li Xingyun originated from curiosity, developed into a heroic rescue of a beauty in times of crisis, and ended with the need of the overall situation and the plot. Personally, I think that the empress is a man who is as strong as a man in the affairs of the world, has unparalleled fighting power, and a good strategy. She will dedicate her youth to the people, wear armor and ride on horseback for the people, and will be willing to reenter the chess game laid out by Li Xingyun for the people. She is a person with a heart He is a good monarch for his people; but when it comes to personal affairs, he is like an ignorant girl, shy and curious, a little woman who is curious about a kid who is more than n years younger than herself, an ordinary woman who secretly expresses her love for a hero saving a beauty, and is a pure girl with a heart. If the author wants to write an emotional scene with the empress, I personally think it does not need to be complicated. A little bit of micro-manipulation can arouse the curiosity of the other party, and then proceed step by step and let it develop naturally. The empress' favor will be easily generated. On the contrary, Li Xingyun's feelings are complicated. Looking around his life, he fell in love with Xueer at first sight, and then Xueer died for her once. This feeling of treating each other with death is not comparable to others. Otherwise, Chi Meng would not have done so much for Li Xingyun, but in the end he only got an answer, and the answer was something we could never guess. Your book is about Li Xingyun's comeback. If you want to open a harem, I personally feel that it is best to go through a process of mental change. The original animation portrays the image of Li Xingyun very well. If you open a harem, it is best not to be too abrupt, otherwise it will feel very awkward and a bit mindless. Of course, if the author wanted to write a mindless and cool article from the beginning, then just think of me as farting. Only my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, just appreciate it for yourself.

Hello author, I saw the question you mentioned in Chapter 19, and I think your idea is right. Even if Li Xingyun is reborn, his mentality after rebirth, his understanding of his previous life, and his future experiences will also cause changes in his mentality. There is also the issue of having a harem. I hope the author can write about each woman's independent character. This is a harem novel.

I'm convinced. You don't want to write a book in one chapter or another. If you write this way, the plot will not be coherent. In the first chapter, you are still writing about the protagonist and the junior sister fighting, and the next chapter immediately jumps to other places. It is better if it is only a few times. The problem is that you keep repeating this way of writing, which makes people interested in the plot in advance, and suddenly the next chapter becomes a plot. I was confused when I read it!

There is no need to do anything in peace and prosperity! But in this world where wars are raging, how can there be a path that people want to follow! There are thieves inside, and there are foreign enemies eying the enemy outside, trying to encroach on our land of China, enslave our children, and cut off the backbone of our country. Li Xingyun actually still has the fantasy of wandering in the clouds, hanging cranes, and hanging pots to save the world! Come on, protagonist, never let these ridiculous things happen again!