The Words of the Luo Network in Qin

Author! I'm speechless at this writing style. First, you introduce the protagonist and her mother as having been on the run for six years, finding refuge with a farmer's family. After learning the truth, why would the protagonist just wait for the same thing to happen again? What's the point? And then there's the one where the protagonist is forced to join the Luo Wang organization...

Will the author continue writing? If I could read this book, I would follow it.

Just to clarify, I generally don't delete normal posts, since everyone has their own preferences. However, I won't hesitate to take action against mindless trolls.

The protagonist's current cultivation level can be considered above the first tier of the Heavenly Realm, but he still falls short compared to true experts. While he could leave the Luo Wang organization on his own, the presence of his family, his mother, and his younger brother prevents him from protecting everyone.

First of all, thank you all for your support. Every comment you leave is my motivation to keep going. One reviewer commented: "My book isn't much different from the original. The protagonist's presence is almost meaningless. He seems silly, has many hidden cards up his sleeve, but keeps getting beaten up." So far, your assessment is very accurate and to the point. (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

Flaw 1: It did not change the ending of Jing Ni. Poison Point 2: Why not just give us a proper system? Point of contention 3: Knowing that Tian Meng wanted to harm Jing Ni, he didn't take her away from the farmhouse, but instead went out to have fun on his own.

This novel perfectly embodies the word "torture." It has a cheat-like advantage but doesn't know how to use it; the mother was slept with for seven years, did nothing, and then someone even crippled her meridians... It's unbelievable! You guys who are really something else can go see for yourselves. I'm going to watch some TikTok to relax; aren't those long legs appealing? (I've managed to read 11 chapters.)

After reading for so long, I still don't know what you're trying to do. Since the protagonist has transmigrated and has a cheat code, Tian Yan still follows the plot, so what's the point of having you? Fanfiction isn't about someone who's constantly getting cheat codes, but instead about someone who gets abused. What's the point of writing that?

This is a detox story, not a wish-fulfillment novel; the beginning is quite frustrating. Knowing the plot, the protagonist keeps talking about protecting his mother, but then forgets about her premature birth. For a long period, the beginning is incredibly frustrating. If you're looking for something similar, definitely don't read this.

It should have been cut long ago. A transmigrator with a system can't change her mother's fate, so what's the point of writing it? People read fanfiction for the thrill.