Immortality Starts from the Cube World

Another world teleportation techniqueｷｬ━━━━(ﾟ∀ﾟ)━━━━!!

Whether it is the protagonist, the world view, or the golden finger, the settings are all very good, but they are not well written.

Didn't this sect discover the protagonist's cube world?

There are a lot of ideas, but they are not a good thing... Throwing out a bunch of huge worldviews at the beginning may not attract the audience. On the contrary, it may be dissuaded by frequent and cumbersome settings! From Panlong to Zhetian, the worldviews of these novels about gods are all written from small to large. Even the originator of the prehistoric era started in the city...

The plug-in for the protagonist is a bit weak. It is impossible to become the most invincible existence in the world. Does the cube world have its own synthesis workbench? I also want to ask if there will be any mods added to Block World? Can I customize the module? Is there an invincible version of the module? For example, there is a module that is the Daluo Jinxian mode, with dark blue adding points, etc.

，，，，？ Wouldn't you plant some mutated plants in the clod world that are highly poisonous? I only know how to grow rice, and I only saw the small world underground maze. I didn't look at the rest, let's talk about it.

It's so awkward. It's like top-notch, bottom-grade, top-medium, top-grade 😂😂😂😂

When I first came in, the article was a bit overwhelming. Is it an urban cultivator? I can't stand it, haha

Please hurry up for the picture of free prostitution, it's really important to read new booksｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It is not logical for this type of world to have tribulation cultivation. Just say you take a few thousand dollars and someone robs you on the street. This situation cannot happen in the unified urban lawful type without the invasion of foreign enemies.

The speed of the car was too fast, and some important events were not mentioned in advance in the book. It was just like a running account, and we didn't know until the time came.

I've read Chapter 15, and there's nothing else in the book review. They're all about helping the author correct typos. It's amazing. Don't you want to read it after you finish writing it?

Readers can leave a message here if they have any opinions, novel ideas, characters, magic weapons or worlds, and the author will adopt them reasonably (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The writing is very good, but I don't know why I feel that the sense of substitution is very poor. I feel that there is no passion for watching it and it is a bit boring.

The subject matter is a bit old, like the rectangular world, which is nothing more than space and system. The pace is a bit too fast. If you follow the Qi Alchemy Elixir layer by layer, you will inevitably get tired. The writing style is indeed a bit immature. I suggest you read the same type of author's articles or revise it two or three times after finishing the draft. (It will be much more comfortable to watch.) You can also look for some jokes. Now that cars are involved, adding a little humor like this will make it more interesting to read. Generally speaking, there could be more introduction to the background, because the dialogue really doesn't reflect much. The main reason is that the plot and background of the story are less. If you start talking about the levels from the beginning, it is really not easy to fight (the Mengxia Valley was directly introduced in the beginning. Personally, I think it can be allocated a little more. Otherwise, it's unclear. In fact, it's okay for you to talk about the history of Mengxia Valley. After all, readers don't even understand what position Mengxia Valley is in the book. It's easy to be abandoned when you pick up the quest at level 6.) I believe your writing can become more mature. Come on. (The review may be inaccurate because I only read the first few chapters.)

Not even a single characteristic of MC has been written out. It is just mediocre and can only be regarded as a small space with time to accelerate.

There's nothing wrong with setting these up, but the various non-immortal elements at the beginning didn't seem very interesting. I know the author wanted to write a world with a grand background and a strong character, but it was too messy. I don't like the combination of Chinese and Western. The most unpleasant thing is that Du Xiuxian is still engaging in pornography on the forum.

The latest chapter went into retreat, and then your author also went into retreat?

This plug-in can try to breed external creatures and then mass-produce them to supply market demand. Although it is not as good as those with secrets of raising animals, it can be sold to some new practitioners at a low price.

Come on, author, I'll put it on the shelf for you to customize. The premise is to maintain this quality.

What is the essence of Qi training? Where does the bottleneck come from? Is it Tongmai? Or practice? Or is it to expand the sea of ​​qi? If it is Dantian Qi Hai, the theory should be that the bottleneck of the balloon principle comes from Even if there is, it is just that the quality of the Qi is not enough, quantity is important?

The setting is quite interesting, but the worldview is a bit complex and the logic often contradicts itself.

There are so many wrong sentences with typos and word order issues.

I don't know why, but I always feel like I have a sense of AI. I don't know if it's my imagination.

Author, if you want to limit the protagonist, don't make it so obvious. It makes Ti sad to watch it.

Has this protagonist traveled through time? You can't see it at all in the first picture. The local protagonist uses a local plug-in, and the foreign protagonist uses a foreign plug-in. Is this plug-in Mini or Minecraft? The local ones are used, but the foreign ones are very inconsistent.