Changsheng: I Have a Book of Eternity

He is obviously a cheater, so why should he be a licking dog? Madonna heart attack? Being called in and out by a blind man, working hard without complaining, being arbitrarily insulted, and yet showing an outpouring of compassion!

He has lived for decades and is still so naive. The blind man at the beginning was a big poisonous point. It was inexplicable.

I don't like this blind man, the protagonist is immortal, why does he have to be so angry for no reason? The reason is the same as staying away from garbage people. Even if you are a hidden master, the mentality of an immortal person like the protagonist should not be rare. If you can't get immortality, martial arts secrets, and immortality secrets, the right way is to stay away from those garbage people with big tempers.

Are you sure there's nothing wrong with you in the first few chapters? This person has to have a reason for everything he does. It can't be unclear.

The new book "Sapling" has a good beginning. Keep up the good work and update quickly. Don't be a pigeon. If it is released, I will definitely subscribe.

Is there any Shennong? In a similar immortality novel like this, it doesn't matter if the protagonist is weak, but does the time progress quickly? Could it be that this is another case of selling dog meat over sheep's heads?

It's too cliche, the plot arrangement is deliberate and not interesting.

The very beginning shows the author's insufficient understanding of the Immortality Essay! The story of longevity is about the protagonist making progress step by step through his own planning. At the beginning, there is an old Renaissance routine that really persuades you to quit! The protagonist Chun Liang unknowingly benevolts a master and gets an opportunity. This kind of adventure is suitable for the indigenous protagonists of early martial arts novels. How disgusting would it be if you arranged it for a time traveler with an immortality device? Is it good for the book to make the protagonist appear stupid and stupid? You might as well write that the protagonist has figured out the old man's identity long ago and the performance is innocent!

Darling, one life is 200 years. Eternal life is considered immortal.

Already collected, the writing is delicate, the reading is smooth, the setting is novel, and the plot is fascinating.

1St first pitch. 30 consecutive articles, updated with 3,000 words every day. It broke on the first day. All returns are halved. If it continues to break, investment income will definitely continue to decrease. The writing is pretty good. The updates need to be strong.